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deeni 06-23-03 09:30 AM

SON YOU COULDNT BURN NOBODY EVEN IF U WAS MADE OF FIRE/
STOP RAPPIN, YOU SHOULD MOTHERFUCKIN RETIRE/
CUZ NOBODY WANTS TO READ YOUR TIRED ASS RHYMES/
YOUR TRYIN TO CLIMB A HILL THAT IS TO STEEP FOR YOU/
UR GONNA FALL, AND NO ONE'S GONNA HAVE ANY SYMPATHY FOR YOU/
YOUR THE PRIME EXAMPLE OF WHAT NOT TO DO/
EVERYTIME I SEE YOUR THREADS,
U MAKE ME SLEEPY, I WANT TO GO TO FUCKIN BED/
SO INSTEAD OF TRYIN TO FLOW,
WHY DONT YOU SIT ON THE CORNER WITH YOUR MOTHER,
AND GO MAKE ME SOME DOUGH!!!!!

One and Only 06-23-03 01:24 PM

Every time you post your lines do you think there tight?/
Even if you spit them to a white girl theyd be like "o my god yea right"/
What goes through your mind when you think..its obviously not skill/
Although if you tried out to get booed..youd surely get the deal/
I will say your unique though cause you sound is different than others/
Because unlike you they have skill..without dissing people's mothers/
You were right when you said "Your the prime example of what not to do"/
Just instead of refering to the other guy..i was refering to you/

B.A.D. R.A.P. 06-23-03 02:38 PM

(directed to deeni)

look at ur gut son, i think u've had a lil too much dough/
pillsbury doughboy look-alike, u pregnant?, ur face startin to glow/
deeni's faggot ass is pathetic, he just got served by a newbie/
he'll get burned quicker by me, i'm the vet... he's the rookie/
i don't need 11 lines of garbage, just one more of pure gold/
u like showin examples, here's another, ur rhymes are like a story... that's-been-over-told/

deeni 06-23-03 04:29 PM

HERES A LITTLE SUMTHIN FOR THE BITCHES UP TOP,
THEY BOUT TO BE MERKED CUZ THE GUNS IS BOILIN HOT/
THEY BOUT TO EXPLODE AND IMPLODE YOUR BRAIN/
CHANGE YOUR MINDFRAME FROM WORKIN TO NON-EXISTENT/
SO READ UP AND I'LL TELL YOU BOTH WHAT YOUR MISSIN/
YA GOT NO STYLE, YA PROBABLY GOT NO HEART/
YOU'S BOTH IS BITCHES SO GET ON UR KNEES AND PLAY YOU'RE PART/
LIKE A FART YOU CLEAR OUT THE ROOM WIT YOUR WACK FLOWS,
IF YOU WANT TO MAKE THIS PHYSICAL I'LL WATCH FOR THE LOW BLOWS!!!!

PUSSIES!!!!!!!!!!!

bouncedoggydog 06-23-03 04:31 PM

Deeni can't you see that your just a pathetic freak//
Your rhymes are weak and your manner is meek//
Getting dissed then dismissed every day of the week//
Still coming back to spit trash when your futures so bleek//
How do you even have the fucken courage to speak//
Real lyrics rhyme and stay on time, just take a peek//
This bitch is too stupid for me to even call him a geek//
If you had your own thread it would be called "The weak of the week"//
Ya just the weakest chain in this link, don't ya get it? you fucken stink//

bouncedoggydog 06-23-03 04:41 PM

Explode then implode? not even possible ya toad//
Your lyrically challaged and ya brain is incased in mold//
Son, just put your cards down, cuz it's time to fold//
Since when does a rap not rhyme, does't ten cents still equal a dime?//
Your butchering this art, lines like yours should be a crime//
How ya gonna talk about whack flowz when most ya shit don't even go//
I'm tired of fucken with you, I'll devistate your flow any time, just say go.....

B.A.D. R.A.P. 06-23-03 05:51 PM

(ah, two hot drops in a row, and now he callin out people, that's my son, lol)

deeni, let me explain somethin to u, a gun can't be BOILING hot/
we're all gettin tired of these "rhymes" that don't rhyme, STOP/
even when deeni tries to spell somethin right, he drops the ball/
YOU'RE should've been spelled YOUR, as in... YOUR rhymes are dull/
my style is six lines, so just one more and i'm done/
after u get merked by bounce, i'll be waiting with a BURNING hot gun/

XanaX 06-23-03 06:47 PM

Bad rap, true cause thats all I hear from you,I drop one bar an this queer is through./
Verbals attackin him as I'm askin him Is your name an acronym?
Then this bitch gets slapped again cause he ain't too masculine./

B.A.D. R.A.P. 06-23-03 06:55 PM

questionin my masculine when ur the one who's feminine/
this fag saw eight mile, he wanted to be just like eminem/
he's been here since october of last year... he's still new to RB/
must be too busy to battle... occupied in cyphers, tryin to be like me/
one more line on this kid, and i'll lower the boom/
leave him stone faced like the pic in his avatar... that's dr. doom/

bouncedoggydog 06-24-03 12:09 AM

Xanax is what I prescibe for your depression and anxiety//
Got ya all nerous and fluttering...you can't "DEENI-IT' G//
Locked away in a meantal heath facility since 10-2002//
Just a sick muther clucker with an avitar of his Doc'ta doom//
Fucking with the homie Bad rap, end up back in resistive straps//
I'm not refering to the strap you take in the back//
But the psychotic sunday specials with the torzine attack//
Go a head and bust back, you fucken loony whack//

GIVEN 06-24-03 02:11 AM

damn that shit sounded like you were on crack
fuck the skill to rap is what you lack
and your avitar is a big "X"
shit whats next must i put a gun to you neck
your rap style is more fucked up than a train wreck
you cant fuck with no dick so you have brain sex
once you get decked your gonna feel the effect

One and Only 06-24-03 04:14 AM

It's a given that all those lines have been said before/
It's a given that your similar to a sale cause your sellin"Weak rhymes galore"/
It's a given that your ing..wait i forgot to put bor/
And it's a given that with one loss your bound to lose more/
It's a given that when it comes to lacking..your the king/
It's a given that readin your stuff you've forgotten skill to bring/
It's a given like 1+1 will always = 2/
And it's a given that like the rest..I've just embarrased you/

One and Only 06-24-03 12:42 PM

This is no challenge..I'll wreck on myself

The only thing you left out is skill was GIVEN to you and you still weak/
You get bitch slapped by me like Nas did M. Bleek/
Your titest line rhymed the same word..And that was your peak/
You look over my shoulder when i write just to get you a peek/
Hopin that my last line will not be overdone by my next/
Hopin that im one deminsional and not complex/
But your hopin and wishin will end today/
Cause even if all the bullets missed..My words dont go stray/

Cocky? I'd say so.

3D 06-26-03 03:23 PM

The one and only, and homie u so lonely
only dissin yoself n i c dat u so fony
so maybe u wana talk 2 me and discuss
da fact dat u so disgusting, its gettin dangerous
i think dat i mite bust, showin u how 2 get cussed
keep stayin in ur 1 dimension while im in my 3rd
these r rhymes and regulations dat u neva heard
im bringin a new age and era through this 1 verse
and b careful where u tread incase u catch da curse
Ur words jus gone stray coz i aint seen em
mayb u wana go run and catch em, coz nobody feel em
n only bullets u eva seen is da ones releasin
u best start dodgin n runnin until ur lyrics get decent

B.A.D. R.A.P. 06-26-03 03:39 PM

fuck this guy ill beat him with a bat/
make him shreak like a cat/
hang him from his tail like a rat/
if you wanna battle 3D... go set that/


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