This niggas a one-man-band cuz no body will join him,
but thats ok, that naked dude in his avater is on him,
all alone..his momma dont even want him,
might as well put on a suit and jump in a coffin,

look at d12 revole that you cant sovle the prob about ya bitch sucken my dick//
ever time you lick her tits you lick my dick //
fix your vocab befor im capen you harder then a base ball flat cap //
i rap with saggy pants you rap with them tight //
even no thats not how you on the mic //

7.0.2 row with 2 thing his dick between his legas and his gat that never was used i abuse you 2 abuse your crew thats right you to faggit tight to have one or is it you not hot like me a emcee that noes the art of flow fart and blow you away sshhhhhhh for another day

You think spelling errors and bad grammar will make you better?
You're stupid, plus I can't even put your letters together.
Your punches? Nonexistant. That was played, but you could do worse.
I spit one played line. You blew a whole lame verse.
Really. I can rip on you for days and leave witnesses amazed.
At how you can somehow spell "YOU" in so many intricate ways!

oo shit its the teacher breach my dick then find out how to fix my shit you think you so lyrical or gods myrical dog you so over rated you master batten on your own picture your a major ripper pagan me like you ready ok then I’m drop steady you so ill consider that you still admit your faggit flow your ragging hoe you just and must have become uterus cuss I fucked you up an now there’s offspring you to soft to even bring downy to the table you labeled terminal

There you go again. You're using that wack structure that don't work.
Plus you typed up a story. Your shit didn't rhyme, jerk.
Look, if I'm the guy above you, then you shouldn't post in here.
Cuz every time you do, you go back to where you're from... No where.

Get it? Going Nowhere? HAHAHA I crack me up!

we all know gfx dogg is weak,u know dat w/ bar's dat make us fall asleep-
im raw on beats,but u "suck" badd should of named yaself "straws" or "leech"-

4get bein on a clue tape,why hidin ya record dogg? but whut rapper u ate???-
ya moms wasn't gon have u but when she found out she was pregnant it was 2 late-

lmaoooooooooo just spit back tellin me whut words i spelled wrong dickhead

You're garbage... That's all. But I guess I HAVE to spit, huh?

Welcome to class. Today we're gonna talk about flow.
You're the Da SiCKesT oN DIs sItE!? Well here's few things you should know.
Inconsistencies in structure only make you look like a dick.
I wasn't gonna say it, but dude. You can't seem to spell for shit.
And played lines. Gee, they really don't have that much kick.
You basically saying the same "OMFG! Your mother sucks dick!"
Please for the sake of all of us be more creative next time.
But even then, you couldn't win this even with your best rhymes.

Yeah.

dogg u spittin again?? i aint notice just finish gettin head from ya moms-
i mean look at BITCHSLAPPED ppl i called dis pussy out he neva respond-

i should fukk u up cuzz im use da felony's,seriously whut fukk u is tellin??-
your not a rapper we on da computer gfx is just a human spelling bee-

i just key off n smerk,cant even make his words ryhme i know he often hurts-
datz all he do but i guess he's madd cuzz "african's" wouldn't "feed" off his verse-

HAHAHAHA! Africans! Feed! Nice! LMAO!

I'm sure you do understand that I can rip you with ease.
Especially since in kindergarten, you lost in spelling bees.
Oh, just so you know, your whole second bar didn't rhyme.
So you realize, you have not the skill to talk about mine.
Get back in your place. leave the thread, and please stop with the posts.
RV's resident grammarian'll just show you why and how you CAN'T flow.

lmaoooo flow & post ryhme??? dont force it dunny n u feedin 2 hard

im suprise da reader's is not dead,took dude 20 min. i believe he's a cock head-
if i aint in it "settin ya sweater on fire's" da only time u'll be in a "hott thread"-

no kind of creativity just spittin da same line's,flow & post? dat aint ryhme-
i got 10 cent 4 every rapper dat came from CT i guess ima have da same dyme-

oh u madd at marv cuzz da site adore em?,& da shit u resite just bordem-
neva battled on here yet when u get on rv u just come 2 da cypher forum-

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yo im gonna rip this shit...so go suck your dick/
man your fucking sick ...im spitting this shit real quick/
you say your the illest on this site/
man ill beat the shit out of you in a fight/
you know im fucking right/
your ass cant rap/

well thats just a lil something
PeACe no hard fellings

basic bullshit, spit quick with ya immature pubesent mind..
my floresent rhymes'll light ya basic vision untill ya blind
i cant wait till this kid leaves... please..im sick of him..
i read his fucked structure.. n it left me in a predicament..
of anger n rage mixed with a lol boredom n dissapointment..
this kids in hospital, but missed his first elevation appointment..

im bored................

It's a Sin of course when a broke dude use million dollar words
Only to say simply "You suck" then place it on neon lights to be observed
Lyrical virus must be a light chest cold
Trying to be slick w/ rhymes dipping lyrics in heavy batters of crisco
You could tell by his words ... this kid spits panty lines
Then cross dress back to thug whenever it's Grammy Time

Peace

Barz&Penstripes stole his flow from tha swap-meet....he needs ta retire
he couldnt spit flames even if his vocals cords had caught on fire
thaz why when he saw my verses his ass was inspired
he tryed ta copy it but for him...it was as hard as tightroping telephone wires