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Voted For: .Barz Of Steel.

A'ight...this was actually a pretty close battle...

Bars...nice verse...great use of metaphors...nice personals and punches...nice flow...nice structure...I would avoid using "quotations" though...it just makes it harder to read...overall good drop...

Verbal Shooter...another nice verse...good punches and everything...decent personals too...

Overall a close battle, but I'm gonna have to give it to Barz...close to call though...

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Voted For: .Barz Of Steel.


You really had everything going for you man, the punches that not only connected, but hit real hard. Wordplay was fuckin hot as well. Everything was 100% original, nothing played, which is a huge rarity on rapverse, cuz someone's always spitting last years rhymes lol. Personals were hot as well. That play on his old name was funny as shit, and I was feeling it.

This faggot penis rubs... ya body'll end up scattered with debri in tubs
After I "fear-factor" this queer bastard..........Make him "Eat the slugs" *

LMAO Fucking dope

This poser ain't never dump heat, he's a "Vegetarian" he "don't want beef"
Shit, he could "mix his semen with sugar" dude still won't ever "cum sweet"

Haha dope...

Dawg you always come the weakest, I got shit that'll cut ya breathin'
Shit, "Buck" will "Get Shot"............................Like it was "Hunting Season" **

LMAO Fucking tight

I'm a hooligan man, but how is this kid fooling with grams?
When the only "coke" he's seen........................came in an "aluminum can"!! ***

LMAO again man dope

This dude flows with legends?? How? When is flow is always thrown, rejected
For "Always Having Weak Bars"...............Like "Bad Cell Phone Connections!!"

Nice shit

I son emcees, Teph, don't fuck with me, I run this beef.............................
I'm like "Stricnine to your insides" It's no wonder "You Can't Stomach Me"

Dope

Tephlon, you have no skill whatsoever, and you spittin flames is nonsense
Because the last sweet bar you had.........................Was made of chocolate

Fucking sweet closer

Overall, This verse was pretty flawless man, really good shit.

Verbal Shoota:

Real good verse from you as well here man. Punches were good, wordplay was pretty original except for a few lines, and personals were also pretty good.

Barz of steel? shit..i got a blow torch that'll melt 'em like Plastic
Only time you gettin applauds on the mic....is when you pass-it

LOL Nice

UNdestructable emcee?...I dont remember you sayin your Dyslexic?
then again, read ya verse an it Shows!..like the ribbs on an anorexic

Um nice but kinda played

I got this bitch pm'n me daily ''yo teph, what about that battle?!''
What about it?...Kid, I GOT YOU SHOOK!...like i'm playin witta Rattle

Played again here man

See, FAG...I peice my words like Lego Blocks, the wins come in Flocks
Last time dude met-a-phor.............He tapped out from a ''Leg-Lock''

Fuckin dope

killin this beef like livestock....have him in witness protection on a farm
Low-life virgin...He aint never ''cuttin''...Unless you can count self-harm

LOL Good

DOG!...Be cool, calm, collective...... whatever, just leave the salad un-tossed
I never met any emcee before...who was eager as this whore...for a loss

Nice

Fuckin herb, claimin your new? yet you know everythin bout RV...
Joined may 05...low-life, you got more posts than MC's who signed in 03!

Not feeling this...Wheres the punch??

You wannabe me........... or maybe ...do you just wanna join RAW...???
Wont talk so tough..
........when i ram these Keys down ya throat an give you LockJaw....

Dope ass closer

Overall, A fucking hot ass battle. Very close, but Barz edged it out due to more originality and consistency. NO HATE!!

V/ .Barz Of Steel.

And you talk about me not being able to take a loss??

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lmfao funny ass battle

VS
ur flow was decent man,acouple personals i seen at the begginning,the punches were mediocre none were actually on the level like whoah...but decent,the structure was ok also

BOS
ur punches were fucking funny as hell man....i mean they were creative and humorous i laughed at the first couple punches,personals were ok and the flow was dope like whoa...

BEST LINES Barz of steel? shit..i got a blow torch that'll melt 'em like Plastic
Only time you gettin applauds on the mic....is when you pass-it
UNdestructable emcee?...I dont remember you sayin your Dyslexic?
then again, read ya verse an it Shows!..like the ribbs on an anorexic


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This faggot penis rubs... ya body'll end up scattered with debri in tubs
After I "fear-factor" this queer bastard..........Make him "Eat the slugs" *
This poser ain't never dump heat, he's a "Vegetarian" he "don't want beef"
Shit, he could "mix his semen with sugar" dude still won't ever "cum sweet"

OVERALL VOTE = barz of steel