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Unwritten Hazard 02-09-04 09:39 PM

when i spit i desicrate, i dont discriminate kats of darker or thinner shades//
my juice will cool hot day like lemonade///
and penetrate all forms of "Rengades"///
even ones without weight in the middle///
this kat above me thinks hes good, cause his lines rhymes a "lil"///
im not jokers ,i spit and hope that theres violence///
and use my pen like a sword against the POT SMOKERS ALLIANCE




at "LIL RENEGADE"

Ambitious 02-10-04 04:04 AM

Your an Unwritten Hazard ...no one knows you exsist...
Couldnt be more street if flow consisted of hoes & pimps!
Your lines are almost nothin ...show up as rows of gimps...
Cuase no matter your bluffin ...u'll never approach my spit!
Try'ta grope my shit ...I could ring ur neck but this rope just fits...
Mostly serve justice ...but Executives would dowse u & leave u rusted!
Elevation or bust? well you busted ...punches softer than custard
You think you hard... but your soul's really just yellow like mustard
Unlike that shit tho you try and stay away from the rising bread...
Couldnt take the heat in the oven, u posted & didnt surprise this thread!
WHACK! take that...I break cats...no choice but to eliminate this pussy...
Facts? u fake stats...great acts?..no you subject of hate since u pushed me!

lyricalchick86 02-10-04 06:41 AM

technican let me giv u a hand
yo flow aint rite dey
just wastin otha people time
u need to jus leave dis place it aint fo u
let me punch u n da face
knock u bak to september
before u joined dis place
displayed yo gay ass rhymes
u write da same shit like all da time

OutCome 02-10-04 06:42 AM

Well well, if it isnt Ducky himself, whats up technician
this cats a real loony toon, your a wacky animated piston
Looking at your sig one can only image, why the video game?
afraid to show you real face? lame, like ja rule in love is pain
You have no dopers, nigga that was a fictional movie
like the tooth fairy, your skills will always be none visionary.
LOOK ..... This makes a really Dope Rap person :)
his skills just a crap verson of skill waiting for rap to worsen
Xzibit?The fuck outta here, honestly you punk pussy fake
Put a stake through this biten vampire to watch him shake
Im your master, your just a bitch born basterd like unwritten hazard
I get you both burnt like i was baken crackers

KiLLa_CaLi 02-10-04 07:35 AM

:laugh2:



Let's 'end' This 'start'.. Your Name Honestley States..
'raped' so bad.. I know this Kid's Running from 'States'..
Emotionally ya 'drowning'.. Like 'Jason' in Lakes, but wait..
'Ja's' prolly gotta Gun He'd Use.. you don't so who's 'Fake'..
I figure you Hadda a Chance in Life.. Then Failed to Produce..
Sorry Son but ya Flows Not Plastic.. This You cant Re-use..
Lie about your skill Too.. I aint 'Lost' and Not very Amuzed..
Keep thinking n' maybe you'll Know..
stranded in the Oceon dead.. Just so no-one will know..

:nono:

OutCome 02-10-04 08:38 AM

I brought this cat here, peep his whole net existance
pissed cuz all his girls think he needs sexual assistence
And skill your so distant im beggin to think its religous
so this bitch, grabs his bitch, they both ask for my assistence
"Could i make this line better? his fingers dont go the right way"
Yes let me wright it for you and nothin will change just walk away
I think she is her an him is she.. Oh well there both bitchs all i can say
Hes a mommas boy, lives off her real good.. Im justa crazy fuck
the diffrence is i bring to the hood, he just watchs BET down an up
Kid Quit shaken your head yes, just put on your rag and act tough
You have no thug mentality, you assult your self went to jail
arrested for hitten bitchs, on top, he sees a cock, rolls off an pretends he fell
You cop my audio style, fuck, check ya tects, he carrys it
I Karless because your originality is somthing i make generic
Dont you remember? no well heres a carrot, ill make you imbarressed

Fuck a personal punch, ill go for a diss,
leave this asain homaphradited and lookin bitch
Holy shit, SHoudl i pop the pimples on his face?
No im sure other inmates did..yaaaa...right before his case
Whats wrong? you sad? ah dag? my dog my bad...
you graduated.. i didnt...Hows-the-instintute-of-create-a-fag?
Fuck if it flows, i could karless... yes, thats right i could karless
SOOOOOOOO whos the biggest bitch.. well..i could care less i cold carless
There is no diffrence, in your sig. you are you an me to
get the diffrence? you wack as fuck with your careless crew
Oh rhyme? naw, why? so you can grab my dickS an jock mine?
Sun, ill eclipse you.. Now lemmie see ya fake dimes shine?
Ima pitbull, with a tongue locked as a pistol
NOw you see this ticket takers, ready to rip you

Jo-JO 02-10-04 12:22 PM

Let me see where should I start or should I just depart
This punk wrights alot of words thinking hes ill smart
No the bible says you can tell a fool by his many words
Well this bitch blew his own spot up leavin mor disses for me in hoards
You got confused this a cypher so quick let me decypher
Bitch you prewrote this on your crack babies dirty diaper
Get back at me when you have better shit then after u wiped her
Till then we'll meet again and come up with a better plan
Cuz your music is banned by the tru ghetto livin fan
That's me bitch unquestionably and if you think not than battle me

OutCome 02-10-04 01:34 PM

Mother fucker this aint south park so whatcha tryna cook up
i would diss your talent, but skill-less isnt somthin i wanna look up
The bible? I love it, respect it, read it therefore i leave it alone
as for you, think you weak, wack n frontin.. no talent shown
make parents get rid of you, leave you pitiful crippled and disowned
The world wonders what happen to you, like selvester stallone
I eat Jo-Jo's son, why you make a moakery of the name
Picture this. as i decide to snap a flash and capture you in a frame
hebrish, wack, tasteless everything thing your being
all come from you an killa cali inbreeding,
wack seedlings, please stop feeding your crap reading, ill Rap with punchs and leave you bleeding then make you handiecapd so youll never walk into succeeding
The funny part is, SON, this aint prewritten, your just jealous of how im spitten,
youll never comprehend a quick wit or wittyness to top shit you kitten.

Next...

Ambitious 02-10-04 02:55 PM

Hm.....I never checked in out our battle....
You verse was worse than baby prattle
Didnt understand your flow or any of the punches
Truthfully I sonn cats like you in some bunches
Your verse was to wack for me to even drop
Your not dope ...you should beleive it so stop!
You've just came back? since the Shadow days
Damn what make this guy rap at that old age?

mad-skillz 02-10-04 03:53 PM

hey -Technician- check out my supa technique/
droping bombs on u, all them unique.
u reply to every post like a fucking critique/
leave to die, let u rust to rust like a fucking antique.
im at a higgher level then u, im supa physique/
i drank to much water noq i gotta to take a leak

Dragon I 02-10-04 04:35 PM

Like your last line, you're nothing but pure piss,
How in the hell will you get by with that as a diss?
boy, you're the 'fucking antique'
a little too old school, so much so you're byzantine greek,
And your victims? the list reads soon to be updated,
and will be the same time hitler is reinstated,
as the fuhrer, so in other words never,
so please, now stop your fruitless endevor,

JiXi 02-10-04 04:41 PM

You have "Mad-Skills" and you Claim your "Unique"...
Please bitch, Its "Diss-The-person" Imma make you squeak...
Like presure on your voice box, Not a Note to speak...
The way you freak, Will humiliate you all fucking week...
Notice that EVERYONE has that daym avatar...
This Female, Will leave you with more than Lyrical-Scars...

Hit_Man 02-10-04 04:48 PM

Leave ya wit holes in ya Chest, ya defeats mo exposed than Janet Jacksons Breast
I dun giva fuck if u a Bitch, u Best find a way to make ya Bra cova a Vest
Dun Digress, slip off tha beaten path n find tha Untamed Monstaz
Have a thug lookin mo 'fucked' than a Hoe from corna's on Yonkaz
Attack me? thas lack attackin a wall :banghead:
tha main reason ya caint rap is cuz ya LACKIN THA BALLS

Hit_Man 02-10-04 04:49 PM

*attack me? thas LIKE attackin a wall*

Defined101 02-10-04 05:07 PM

Constant commericals of critics in cities sick of this earth
you worth a Little, but son you already spent what you worth
Listen to ya movie wanna-be title, Enter the Dragon's vitals
still in idle cant get faster, cause there to many damn sub-titles
you following the leader, still cant folllow, cant compete
u in bin dont think i cant delete ya,brain to hollow, to understand u weak


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