RapVerse.com Community - Shadows Edge and E Looch vs L.I. and kuniva

DIS A HOT! FUCKIN BATTLE// MAYBE DAT BEST BATTLE ON DA SITE//

ANYWAYZ LETS GET DOWN TO BIZNISS//

AIGHT LOOK I PICKED DA BEST FLOWZ ON DIS BATTLE

L.I Can Write Bars On His Forehead an couldnt Make Head-Lines/
Could Pass For Bustas Aerobics Instructor way ya Stretch-Rhymes/
Lines Requirin Higher Court Rooms L.I considers my Verse-Appealin/
The Type to Cripple Ya Sense of Touch jus to Hurt-Ya-Feelins/
Double Dutchin wit Gats as Ropes Kuniva quit Jumpin-The-Gunz-B/
Tradin Bars With You Like Laxatives bet i give you a Run-for-ya-Money/
Ponderin-Stats Complexity's Dilemma Fuck A Beene no Quandary-Raps/
Scared to Throw in the Towel like Paranoid Peeps in Laundrymats/
Got L.I Sweatin Bullets Perspirin Shells through His Skin-Pores/
Kunivas battlin Wit Alzheimers he dont know What Hes In-For/
Even If Kuniva Had saL.Iva Couldnt Spit Hot Shit If He Refined It/
Put Out Of Order Signs on yalls Brain To prove yall Closed-Minded/
Admit Defeat Scared To Come Out Ya Shell like Shook Terrapins/[turtles]
Dressed The Odds Of Victory In Lean Clothes Ya Chances Wearin Thin/[think kids]
Moron i Aint Losin Kuniva Sharkin Names Nothin But A Meek-Biter/
Your vo'CAB' is rollin on "flats" i think you better RE-TIRE/(retire)
Weak Faggots Like Kuniva Get Their Persona's-Faded/
Write 'Wednesday in Punctuations' So Ya Loss Is A-Comma-'Dated'/(accomodated)
Looch got the "Element" of battle while you continue to 'Bore-On'/[boron]
like "Dummies Usin Facial Cleansers" L.I's merely an 'Oxy-Moron'/
Strike Kunivas Vision Wit Precise Incisions Despite Predictions/
Got This "Pussy Fearin My Bars" Like Paranoid Dikes In Prisons/
How L.I Gonna Flow When Im Cloggin Ya System Like A Blood Clot/
Tryna Get Ya Brain On Track But Im Wreckin Ya Train Of Thought/
Couldnt Make Not 1 Top 10 List And Now Kuniva Wanna Get Upset/
And Like Careless Tight Rope Walkers Ya Career Depends On The Net/
Just Leave These Fake Rappers Motionless Like A Manicin/
L.i Readin My Verse Hyperventalatin Hopelessly And Panicin/
Knowin A Win Is Uncontrolable Like Addin To His Pokemon Collection/
I Think Ya Face Is The Reason Ya Parents Started Usin Protection/
Except It You flows sound all the same like The voice of Ben Stein/
I'll Put Ya Spine On A Calender And Place Ya Back-Into-Time/

Fuck you wanna do millenium flow ^^^^^^^^

AND DERS

SPIT AGAINST SHADOWS EDGE...

Nickname goin round the site for you is 'easy win provider'...
Cause from day one on this site you stated yourself, 'im a dick rider'...
You talk a lot of shit for being 11 and 7 and no hotness comin out of your pen...
Although you try to call me an herb you didnt hesitate to place me in your top ten...
This fool is a joke, an act, sayin he gone act a fool and pull his lead...
People know your wack, thats why not even one person posted in your crew thread...
Follows me around, PM’in for votes, poking me like a cactus…
This cat idols me so much, hes been place on stalker status…
You cant merk a merker, learn the facts, and stop battlin the vets...
Cause we elevated cats leave your rhymes smoked like cigarettes...
This bitch gets the attitude that he can tell the newbies bout whats essential...
Than hes got the nerve to brag bout gettin in my crew, when i put him in strictly cuz of potential...
This white cat try rappin wit shaggy hair a bent brimmed hat...
Your skill level is jus like a soda thats been open 5 days, FLAT...
This was any easy win and i bet he wants more so im up for another round......
Finished him off in 16 lines and placed him where shadows cant be seen, underground...

SPIT AGAINST E LOOCH....

Bitch you ridin wit a crew thats unknown and will stay that way...
If your the hottest in their crew than they bout to lose their heavy weight...
You think because of his cockiness, it’d be like goin up against a pro…
This bitch gets one win and he be like, ‘autographs afta the show’…
Runnin aint your protocal? Shit protocols have been broken in the past...
Put this one down in hoistory and label it, The Beating of E Looch's ass...
This bitch think he can write complicated lines that all emcees dig...
He's a fuckin dumbass, he cant even make a correct hyperlink in his sig...
Your rhymes have a similarity with European soccer, over played...
Hey your rhymes and your avi have sumtin in common too!, poorly made...

ok im done peace.....

CUZ DA OTHA TWO I WASENT FEELIN IT//

YO L.I I LIKED YO VERSE MAN// U HAD NICE PUNCHES//FLOWZ AND EVERYTHING//

L.I.

PUNCHES 8/10
FLOWZ 10/10
VOCAB 6/10
STRUTURE 7/10

E-LOOCH
PUNCHLINES 10/10 FIRE!
FLOWZ 10/10
STRUTURE 9/10
VOCAB 10/10

SHAWDOW EDGE

PUNCHLINES 6/10
FLOWZ 7/10
STRUTURE 6/10
VOCAB 4/10

KUNVIA

PUNCHES 7/10
FLOWZ 7/10
STRUTURE 8/10
VOCAB 5/10

WHO HAS DA BEST SHIT E LOOCH//

VOTE E LOOCH

SHIT HE DA ONE WHO TOOK IT TO HOME//

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