Voted For: I. Mind

was feelin dabatos on this one... both came with hella wise structure. loved the flow...

LI: killed em with perspective, you had
the whole verse mapped and on lock. i
enjoyed this, one ive been wanting to
read for a while now, you kept ya head up
and completed a decent topical. nice shit.

D: loved the overrall production, had me
from the start, the opener was like a thesis
statment, grabbed my attention... you came
dope, wrote exactly what needed to be wrote.
killed it with imagery and passion, loved the
contraversy of the dream article. nice piece as
well, im going with D on this one...

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Voted For: I. Mind

Dabato- i thought you had a very nice , organized, drop, your word play was very nice and i thought that you dropped something that displayed alot of honesty and emotion... which is essential in a topical battle i think... your rhyme scheme was on target and i thought that you really took the topic and ran with it. over all you had good wordplay and vocab.. and very nice imagery

Li your verse sorta threw me off with its struct but otherwise i thought that it wasnt as well thought out as dabatos .. you had alot of good vocab none the less.. but it wasnt put in a easy flowing attitude .. i thought dabatos flowed.. while yours just seemed a little forced at times..but over all you did have a nice drop... work on your struct thats all i gotta say otherwise dabato takes this one for having more emotion and better wordplay ....


Vote.//Dabatos

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