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This was feedback posted for † Gødz Ångël †
 

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Voted For: â€- Gødz Ã…ngël â€-

Class.Sic:
may be gods angel but your in hell and god wont put out a search…
child wouldnt be blessed if he sneezed on a Sunday at a church…
Nice opener, good punch here
Stick a lolly pop in ya mouth, keep this baby from cryin…
If ya crapped on an airplane ya shit still wouldn’t be flyin…
Setup was decent, but punch was weak
Smite this angel, clip ya wings, ya aint high and mighty…
Now he think he on top like Jim Carey on Bruce almighty…
Decent personal
This angel couldn’t save voters from reading an Essay…
Ya skills are showing up missin like Donalds Trump’s toupee…
Didn't really rhyme, weak anyways
He sportin pink and killed 3 children, now he think hes a t.h.u.g…
Leave you lyrically smashed, just walked over you like a bug
Weak closer. Explaining your verse also took the enjoyment level down.

Godz Angel:
First off, You aint in the game, And I got pics to prove that you lame,
When We were playing "Craps", You lost and "Shit" ya pants,Shame Shame!
Decent opener, punch wasn't that hard though
When I told ya to spit you verse you said "I cant, Theres no guys here,"
You couldnt even Disperse If you ate shit, from a drunk monkey on beer.
What in the world?
Understand? Of course you do, I said so, I am ya Daddy, Aint that right?
I'm the one who beat your ass,and pushed you when you first rode a bike.
Weak attempt at a meta here
Cata.clys.Mic, Thats a pussy name, I mean the definition of a chicks clit,
I found this book about Getting AIDS from men, Sure you know all about it!
Blah, blatent gay lines = wack...
"Cata" to the "clys" to the "mic" to eat shit, take a little hit, of this,
It is a loser, smuthered in a homo, wrapped in a faggot who drinks piss!
A few multis in setup, but punch was weak
Bicth on the Top of my diss list, You couldnt spit a punch with 10 fists.
You only spit one thing at me and that was Bull shit, And you still Missed!
Ok closer, setup > punch...

Winner: Class.Sic, for harder punches...well, a harder punch. Both of you dropped quite weak, but no hate...

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Shit, whoops...I posted my vote in the wrong box. Just holla at strobe and get that switched to a vote for Class.Sic:thumbup:...

Voted For: Cata.clys.Mic

I DONT DO HATE VOTES AND I DONT DO DICK RYDERS VOTES AND THIS IS A STRAIGHT UP VOTE.....

may be gods angel but your in hell and god wont put out a search…*
child wouldnt be blessed if he sneezed on a Sunday at a church…
decent start.....

Stick a lolly pop in ya mouth, keep this baby from cryin…**
If ya crapped on an airplane ya shit still wouldn’t be flyin…
i get it people say YO ya shit-fly and even if he shited on a plain hes shit wouldnt be fly... preety good.....

Smite this angel, clip ya wings, ya aint high and mighty…
Now he think he on top like Jim Carey on Bruce almighty…***
saw this coming but still decent....

This angel couldn’t save voters from reading an Essay…******
Ya skills are showing up missin like Donalds Trump’s toupee…****
good....

He sportin pink and killed 3 children, now he think hes a t.h.u.g…*****
Leave you lyrically smashed, just walked over you like a bug…
not a bad ending.......

8.0 outta 10

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First off, You aint in the game, And I got pics to prove that you lame,
When We were playing "Craps", You lost and "Shit" ya pants,Shame Shame!
i aint like the way it flow and seemed forced....

When I told ya to spit you verse you said "I cant, Theres no guys here,"
You couldnt even Disperse If you ate shit, from a drunk monkey on beer.
WHAT???

Understand? Of course you do, I said so, I am ya Daddy, Aint that right?
I'm the one who beat your ass,and pushed you when you first rode a bike.
ok but where is this going??,

Cata.clys.Mic, Thats a pussy name, I mean the definition of a chicks clit,
I found this book about Getting AIDS from men, Sure you know all about it!
1st line aight 2ed WTF??

"Cata" to the "clys" to the "mic" to eat shit, take a little hit, of this,
It is a loser, smuthered in a homo, wrapped in a faggot who drinks piss!
nah mang....

Bicth on the Top of my diss list, You couldnt spit a punch with 10 fists.
You only spit one thing at me and that was Bull shit, And you still Missed!
ending was OOOOOOOOOOOk.....

this verse was really lacking everything creativeness was weak as fuck, punches wasnt hitting, flow was oooook at times... aint noting stood out and hit hard mang what happen??? 4.0 outta 10...

This was feedback posted for Cata.clys.Mic
 

yo you murked this kidd... if I could vote it would be for the punches kidd... when I read his first line it didn't draw me in... I read some more didn't draw me in either I thought it was pretty wack... but GA'z first line was enuff to murk everything he wrote... in my opinon -PEACE-

Voted For: â€- Gødz Ã…ngël â€-

this one was a iight bat and hard to grade but here it is.
flow god
hits both
vocab god
imagry god
vocab god
lyrics god
overall god
hit up on my links please peace.

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