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Compose 01-01-05 05:30 PM

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Parallel 01-01-05 08:26 PM

Voted For: final

Conclusion:
not bad i actually like your verse alot even tho the topic is played out n shit it was a tight verse you were creative and emotional...straight good...and pretty much mostly every guy can realate to this topic...and your vocab was tight and you were creat very well with wordplay and metaphores very witty..but i jsut tink you didnt come as hard as fianl did...no hate

Final:
damn you really elevating topicaly your probably better then me...your vocab was ery good and you worked very emtional in your verse...2nd of all you were also creative with the metaphores and wordplay i seen a few nice lines speically your opener very nice opener...you got this tho...very close battle hard choice...no hate to both pz...

Compose 01-01-05 08:52 PM

^aight thanks for votin...shit been slept on so long already lol uppin...

Compose 01-02-05 01:33 AM

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Compose 01-02-05 11:38 AM

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Compose 01-02-05 03:09 PM

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Compose 01-02-05 09:19 PM

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(X)eed 01-02-05 10:25 PM

Voted For: final

yo my vote goes 2 final.......man u made it so realistk but no offence con.......... ur shit wuz good 2 but yo no 1 wud really slit their g.f.s wrist homie cmon................. no beef but final u had punches as in made the reader think and had good flow ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, decent structure ...... i rest my case............ yo holla ba kwit a vote below againt me and kkkhater...1 more vote 4 me ............... yo return the favour


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