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..........uppin.............. at least im gettin posts outta this piece

uppin.............................................

word to gettin posts.....fuck, my battles are always slept on, so i better be gettin posts

Voted For: Kesse

pic-alright you had an okay verse......pretty good with the personals......but they just werent THAT great.....you shoulda made them wittier and added a punch along with it......you had decent flow and you had better vocab than kesse...your structure was a flaw definately.....you had some short lines and some stretched......work on that........you need to work on your punches as well......GAY JOKES ARE PLAYED OUT so yeah remember that.....so overall your verse gets a 4/10

kesse-alright yo had a pretty decent drop.....better than pic...alright you came with wittier and more thought out verses.......your punches added some humor which we all like to see......your structure was your biggest flaw i'd say...work on that some......your flow was alright add some more multi's in there and your set :thumbup: but yeah also up your vocab some......its not always needed in amounts but....if you added more this would be a better verse......ima have to say you get a 6.5/10

v/kesse
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Voted For: pictureperfect2

I think Picture took this one wit better personals. not too many hard hittin punches in this one from either of you, just a str8 up battl wit mettas and wordplay.
pic-u took the metaphore category. not too many, but they were there. u didnt come consistent in this one either. yo verse was up and down. i'd work on that, but i gave u tha vote, cause i was feelin ur verse more.
kesse-you took tha structure category too me. It was better in my opinon, and i can see ur elevating alot. good drop, but i wasnt interested in yo verse, thats why i couldnt give u tha vote. u had good wordplay, and personals, but i think he took u in that one. just a simple drop. nuthin big here
overall-this battle went kinda soft, but i had to give my vote up to picture pefect.

And Plz RTF on battle in sig...

fuck eh, i dont think i've ever gotta vote from you, haha, whatever...upping

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some decent votes finally, i think i may have learned somethin in this battle... which is better than winning to me... not including learning that the only way to win a battle is to vote on others... thats just is disapointing

Voted For: Kesse

Kesse - good flow, good punches and rhyme scheme...had some nice personals..i liked the shit bout his losses...and i liked the flinstones line too...umm...nuthin i can think of for u to work on really...nice battle

pictureperfect2 - u had a pretty good verse, good punches..ur personals weren't that great, basically just the shit about him bein fat...which there is nuthin wrong with...but yea, ur flow could improve and so could ur personals

V/ Kesse

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