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Voted For: ColdSTEEL
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Voted For: ColdSTEEL
ColdSteel: Look at the chump of the crew,Claims himself the boss! This battle is over even Randy Mcnally cant help ur "Loss!". Decent opener, coulda been a little harder, but it was good. "Drop quicker!"...Why?...We know your fake son! Take this "L" like vitamins...cuz ur gonna be lookin like he Ate 1.(8-1) LMFAO...Nice He aint even a worthy fighter,sorta like Bernard Hopkins. Ur punches been seen ery'where,sorta like bird droppins! Real nice shit here... Imma make this real eazy...like Wit built in strategy! Cuz the only time you get close ta ah crown is if you filled in cavity's! Good closer. Overall: Real nice verse here man. Short but sweet, just how I like to see 'em. Punches were original and all hit, personals were creative and dope...Everything flowed fine...Nothing much left to say except good job. MC:Philosopher I gotta spit form the end in reverse for u to finish me U sippin Hennessey …..and from anywhere but Memphis cause it aint a ten-I-see(Tennessee) Lol nice opener. True name cause u aint hot and you steel rhymes that’s a true fact Saying he wanna “CHANGE” the game so he lined up “4 QBS” to get a “DOLLAR BACK” Wack as fuck. Come on now man... This kid is wack…. He only win one liners and no shows unless he battling sorry cats Name of a fake rap hero cold steel save your life the villains sending me He so slow he walked to “McDonalds” to try to find his “arch enemy’ WTF is this????? No... I aint gonna spit gun talk cause I really don’t need to spray Forget a clip to the head his brains already where defeat lay Not feelin this... Never in~vite-a-man (vitamin) to battle its not good for your heath Reflecting back ova your dead body so in your avatar you see yourself Still waiting for something hot... Let hell freeze ova so u can get a breath of fresh air like a pack of mints So fuck using pen-n-paper ur crews just dead people like the sixth sense Coulda been worded 1000 times better... Mislead Meager Mother fuckers no wonder u don’t get respect Not to mention half of your damn crew is a bunch of R.A.W. rejects Blah closer...but atleast you threw in a personal... Overall: Weak verse man...You weren't very consistent or creative, which are two of the main things you need to be...The only thing I was really feeling was your opener. You started off good, then just fell completely off... V/ ColdSteel |
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Voted For: ColdSTEEL
I gotta spit form the end in reverse for u to finish me U sippin Hennessey …..and from anywhere but Memphis cause it aint a ten-I-see(Tennessee) 3...played out wordplay True name cause u aint hot and you steel rhymes that’s a true fact Saying he wanna “CHANGE” the game so he lined up “4 QBS” to get a “DOLLAR BACK” 4...again..played wordplay This kid is wack…. He only win one liners and no shows unless he battling sorry cats Name of a fake rap hero cold steel save your life the villains sending me 3....didn't rhyme He so slow he walked to “McDonalds” to try to find his “arch enemy’ I aint gonna spit gun talk cause I really don’t need to spray 3...not rhyming....no punch Forget a clip to the head his brains already where defeat lay( the feet) Never in~vite-a-man (vitamin) to battle its not good for your heath 5...start rhyming...good punch tho Reflecting back ova your dead body so in your avatar you see yourself Let hell freeze ova so u can get a breath of fresh air like a pack of mints 4....Ok punch...but yes..again...RHYME! So fuck using pen-n-paper ur crews just dead people like the sixth sense Mislead Meager Mother fuckers no wonder u don’t get respect 3...weak punch Not to mention half of your damn crew is a bunch of R.A.W. rejects 1...gonna finish that bar? Look at the chump of the crew,Claims himself the boss! This battle is over even Randy Mcnally cant help ur "Loss!". 5...decent "Drop quicker!"...Why?...We know your fake son! Take this "L" like vitamins...cuz ur gonna be lookin like he Ate 1.(8-1) 7...DOPE He aint even a worthy fighter,sorta like Bernard Hopkins. Ur punches been seen ery'where,sorta like bird droppins! 4....played Imma make this real eazy...like Wit built in strategy! Cuz the only time you get close ta ah crown is if you filled in cavity's! 6....OK Well...very awkard battle...but cold steel got this Now MC Phil got better concepts n shit..but he barely rhymed.I don't know if it was the way I read it or not.But in text..you sopposed to type it up in bar couplets.Went above the line limit too...but coldsteel didn't DQ you..so..I guess it didn't matter.Had some played shit like the Ten-I-see and 4 QBS.The rhyming fuked ya verse up. Vote-Coldsteel Rtf below :thumpup: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=206909 |
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Voted For: ColdSTEEL
you got this in the bag MR:you said TEN I SEE, lol that was wack as hell that is what made you a looser and him a winner, lol you are not good you need to elevate in so many ways, that 1 line lost you the battle wasnt even gonna read the rest of your verse, lol COLD:aight you where ok alot better than that other battle i read you need to just take more time to write and make your lines more witty and maybe a lil more komplex but other than that you had this battle won vote=cold RTF http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=207228 |
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