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This was feedback posted for Sin`cere
 

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sin cere can you stop uppin the damn battle man, your annoying.

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Voted For: Paranoid

Imagery: Paranoid took this... Sin i liked your imagery but yours just wasnt as discriptive as i thought paranoid's to be... Para i like the way yours painted the story as i read...
Emotion: Para takes this aswell... His was just better all around i actruallythought i was there in the story.
Vocabulary: Sincer i thought you took this... just a little more complex...

Para takes it with better imagery and emotion.... sincere your piece was nice i just couldnt relate to it asmuch

v/Paranoid

This was feedback posted for Paranoid
 

Upping for famo....i think you won this

thanks Mal, I do give props to sins verse

but uppin

This was feedback posted for Paranoid
 

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