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Voted For: Deranged

both verses were dope!

Mystic Chaos your wordplay was vivid and your structure was cool. I feel you kept to the topic and were especially creative about having a revolt and starting an uprise. The dialogue with Satan was shakey though you should of elaborated a lil more if you were going in that direction. The dream sequence ending was ok and comical but at the same time its been done to death. The verse was dope but i give it a 8 overall! Good Job though kid!

Deranged i really liked your verse because of the theme of it. You stood consistent to the gloom and doom aspect of it. It was hell on earth from beginning to ending with no salvation in sight. I feel its ok to not have a happy ending all the time because that is a reality of life. You were also very vivid and your structure was also very good. I give you an overall 9.

This battle was more of direction in storyline for me. Both verses were equally dope in structure and vivid wordplay. Good job emcees!!!

thx....uppin for more votes.......................

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meh, i guess uppin............................................. ..........

Voted For: Deranged

ok, this was a pretty decent batttle.

deranged-Your verse was well structurized and i felt that you were on point with your creativity.But damn man your vocab was hottt. felt you enhanced your verse with it which made it so much better to flow with.your creativity in the verse was good...helped me keep reading...and your emotion as well as imagery was on point as well overall 7/10

mystic chaos-To me your verse was nothing that special, i feel your creativity lacked. I sorta felt the ending coming due to the lack of intensity in your verse..vocab coulda been enhanced...your imagery was ok though must admit that...your emotion....eh wasnt so clear, felt you could up on that.......yea ive seen better from you overall 4/10

v/deranged

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uppin for a win...................................

^automatically my win.........deranged is banned=my win.........ask anyone

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umm...no...wait till 2morrow when strobe sees it..you ain't dodging no loss.

k?

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uppin this mutha fucker.