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Voted For: Deranged
Blokka,Blokka?..u whack..n yet you'd still race round just to get n tell & the K's in ur user title'd make all-call-eyes(alkali) to this cuz u just met-a-L vs Reading it right? You probably do have a loose screw, hater So take this personal, 'cuz no one answers yours in newspapers damn,close battle. but I think natural killers wordplay in this won it for him. Closer is good. 9th Im sure you could of dropped more solid but meh,must have a reason for laying off. Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
9th...you leave that fucking vote alone...ya hear?
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LMAO shut the fuck up. If strobe sees it as unexplained, it'll be DQ'd. I have no power over strobe, as you do not have any power over me. So don't tell me what the fuck to do.
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Voted For: 9th Degree
9th Degree: Your punches hit hard and were right to the point. Nice wordplay and rhyming. Not really too much I can say about your overall verse tho. You dont need areas to improve, you just rip your opponents like this. You still continue to impress me with shit like this. Keep it up. Best Lines: 8-0 after a month and you're pitiful still 8 lines shows De's Range is as minimal as his skill Reading it right? You probably do have a loose screw, hater So take this personal, 'cuz no one answers yours in newspapers Deranged: I thought your verse was terrible. Whats with all the long as words with a bunch of the same letters in them. Plus you got brackets, bold, symbols crammed in all over the fuckin place. You set your font to size 1 and its still hella long son. I thought this was a joke, really. But disregarding all that... Best line: all done bucked n ur album suks n stoning'z wat'd it take us to cop-it & I read ur verses to the kor-an(koran) realized it won't make you a profit/prophet That was not bad but coulda worded it better. ^ This was totally one-sided, plus, Deranged, you need some serious work dawg. Oh yeah another thing, dont go into that much detail with your explainations...if the punch is gunna be that intense to understand dont even use it. V/9th....................... RTFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFF: http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=209351 |
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This was feedback posted for 9th Degree
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Voted For: Deranged
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yo i wanna dq that vote...........if somebody could take care of that for me cause i dont kno how yet...its too fucking early my B
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meh...9th will DQ it...he likes to do that :)
so.... uppin. |
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