To--'cu cullian' and 'leady'

Man... You dudes honestly have chips on your shouldars..

I can take critasism, and I have (only in this thread mind you, everywhere else I've shown this shit has given very different responses) But your sitting there saying "ooh you hyped yourself up to be the next 50 cent??? and this was average"..

Do you not see how this would piss someone off? Get real for a second... If you want to critasise the track, do it normally. Tell me where you think I went wrong, and where I could improve...

Dont straight up be ignorant to the fact this is a pre-release version of a track I havnt practiced enough, but put up here because kids were whining at me for not posting anything... And that most RV cats couldnt even attempt to produce and tell me its "average RV" material and that I hyped myself up way too much...

you hyped yourself sooooooooooooooooo much man all over the boards with "i can do this, i can do that.. ive done this ive done that... im dope because e.t.c"

i told you what needed improving, your delivery was fucking boring, u had charisma and presence but it lacked real variation in ur delivery, ur flow became predictable, so switch it up more n not just when a beat changes but also in the middle of a beat e.t.c............ sum of ur lines are slightly rushed, im not listening again to list the lines cos i cant be arsed and it bored me the first time, thats being fuckin honest... it is better than alot of RV material, but it is far from super duper dope like u tried to act like u are

Listen leady. I understood you the first time you told me all this...

The fact that you keep repeating your comments is starting to sound like you have an inferiority complex...

well maybe if you would stop crying and bitching and making excuses because people are being honest and telling you the truth instead of riding you, it wouldnt need to be repeated

Whatever you say buddy...

lmfao yea cuz u decieded ta be a pussy and duck Alpha on the ENTERNET which is in a diffrent country that exposed u punk bitches be4n so u BANN HIM FROM THE WHOLE SITE

learn how to type and spell well enough to actually make sense

And boom..
There goes the alias...

2 bans in one day..
I'm on a roll..

this is the most I've ever seen NOS in the Songs forum.



HOT

This 'enternet' seems like something I should look into.

my honest opinion this was alot better than i ever thought it would be. you had alot of tongue twisting rhymes that you ripped thru out. i havent listened to you enough to know if thats your style or not, but with this many bars you pulled off some shit that would've left alot of mc's tongues tied. as far as the beat changing when doing this many bars you haven't to realize that when the beat changes so does your flow, a couple times you were just flowing and don't even sound like you change your speed or anything when the beat changes. 170 bars is a bitch, you pulled it off, and didn't do a bad job. the aussie accent takes some getting used to, but a vailiant effort....


:thumbup:

Thanks man.
And yeah, I got a heap of diff styles I fuck with... I'm looking forward to getting my tape out there once thats done in a week or so.. Should be awesome..

Hopefully it'll squash a few of these cats hating once they hear the rest of what I got up my sleeve.

i like the emotion but i stop listing like early cuz i got bored lol this shit was cool tho well wut i listened too lol

imma leave better feedback when i get home word im at school listening through headphones