When its hot I walk around in a pair of pants,
A bikini top, my torsoe showin as I relax n freelance,
The sun warming my skin as I recline the chair,
She sits on my lap, brushes her hand from my face to my hair,
I smile, looking lovingly into her eyes, I know she cares,
My hands round her neck, hers round my waste - we kiss,
I know now that making love was always ment to be like this,
I pull her shirt slowly up and over her head, look at her breasts,
I'm in heaven now, up in the love nest...
But my demons are marching on their way,
They come closer now, just to ruin my day,
Theyre nearer to me, and I stop on my kissing,
She looks at me tenderly for the kisses shes missing,
I can't help but think of the day that I lose her,
Cant help but think that I was given a reason not to chose her,
But shes perfect for me, the pain would be so raw,
I hold her hands and I drop to the floor,
I tell her I love her and beg her not to go,
she tells me "baby, I love you too" and its on with the show,
But my demons tell me that something else says no,
I ignore them, distracted by her blody flow,
She pulls my shirt off, roghly, then kisses me with a gentle blow,
So I come to realise my demon is for this to end,
Make love slowly, her touch sending me round the bend,
I fight my thoughts, fight my fears inside,
No point in running, I have no place to hide,
So like ali, I knock this fucker point blank out,
She tells me "I'm the best" and gives me a little pout,
Overcoming my deamons for my baby, pow!


(Yes I know that was somewhat soppy, but whatever happened to the lovers rather than the haters yo! Oh...

NEXT - Working into mcdonalds jerking off into the mayo cus ur ex and her new partner just ordered two mc.chicken burgers)

She dissed me, ok, I got some new bitches/
But she ain't have to bring her new man to my place of bid'ness/
But instead of cause a commotion, I put my meat in the bun/
And it ain't for the Johnsonville Brat promotion/
She didn't acknowledge me like she's tryin' to forget us/
So I moved the tomato and skeeted on the lettuce/
Fuck a broken heart, I'll cause some greater damage/
But I felt kinda bad, 'cuz the McChicken is my fav'rite sandwich/

Haha, I think that's pretty tight actually.

Next topic - Popular rap music. And keep puttin' this at the end of your drop, 'cuz we all got opinions on this. I just wanna see what y'all think about it. Let's get it started people!

rap music becomin another "pop phase"
the "real lyricist" continue to get underpaid
most rappers talkin bout how the real with the streets
same rappers you never see give a bill to the streets
sayin that they wont change if they ever get millions
now you see em blow off autographs for all the children
popular rap music, becomin a trend
just tryin to see who gonna cop the new benz
few rappers still speak about real shit
most rappers still rap about bullshit
few rappers spit from the heart
most rappers forget about where it starts
just spit verses that will buy em a new range
whats happenin to this rap music game?

continue this topic of popular rap music...

I blaze the instrumentals, people respect it
But it's 'cuz of ethics why I still ain't made a demo
My heart turns cold when radio plays this shit
Kweli's never gone gold, that shit makes me sick
But it's like he said, the government planned it
Need another opinion? Big L's "I Don't Understand It"
Goddamnit, I'm sick of these gay pop jingles
Ask white bitches what they fav'rite song, of course it's one of the singles
Colin Powell's punk ass son done blacklisted Dead Prez
And figured Chingy was one of his best bets
I wish today's rappers would be like me
And keep it real, it began when Nelly outsold the B-I-G

Next topic - Continue this...Today's rap music

Topic: Whats on my mind

ehh im bored nmy family watching a movie
my mind is blank kinda feeling a lil groovy
im thinking i might use the phone
call my cuzin cuz im alone
now im bored got nothing to write
its so dark in here absolutly no light
okay now im thinking of ending this verse
gonna go to my room n rehearse


lol thats what im thinking right now


next topic: U stole money from bank n ur about to get caught

Additional, U have to follow the topic given, U should post what ure "thinkin rite now" in freestyle. :)


Ive got a .. Napsack filled to the brim wit em stacks,
A corpse of a man, that I trapped and killed with a shank
Clogged their visions so cams couldnt catch a pic if they tried
robbed the system, this bank, so now Ima escape and then hide.
But wait.. that bitch "Grace" jus pushed an alarm, hidden.
My boy Richard, got killed from the guard, whose arms missin
So "swarm bitches, stay low on the floor" While I
-Run outta the door "Ya'll fuckas be screaming for mo?"
Hesitation is overwhelmed with sheer adrenaline, im skeltering.
Runnin between these hostages and corners where they shelter in.
Grabbing their purses, screaming for watches, and wallets,
At this moment Im tradin my fucken greed for my knowledge.
I shoula known better, but instead I stayed with it...
*sirens.. Fuck.. Now im caged...... :( DIPSHIT!

Next topic: Ure in the spiderhole with Saddam, wats he doin or saying? Lols

LMAO at the topic

saddam's thoughts:

i should've gave up my weapons, sad lesson
I have no food, and air begins to lessen
why are we even at war?just goerge bush boostin
i have the right to bear arms, its in there constitution
burning on my arm, and my face contnues bruisin
my legs caught between the walls no future plans of movin
he's jus angry at the fact that he's frightened
shaking at the thought of the nuclear pricing
so he's going to ventelate his anger by fighting
he's a phyco, neccecery needs in a asylum

next topic: fear of death

I'm one paranoid mother fugga, I'm scared of death
When I go swimming, I make damn sure I catch my breath
When someone pulls out they nine, I shoot bullets and run
I run until they can't seem me or point at me with they gun
I ain't exactly the type a dude to go out in a club and start fightin
'Cuz I know I'll get jumped there too, I'd storm out faster than lightnin
Hop in my car and take off at 100 miles an hour
You can't call me a bitch, but you can call me a coward

Next Topic : Being Jumped

^^pretty good topic


exiting the bank, countin my bundles
3 GD's rush me, using strenghth in numbers
i try to call for help, but my words translate as mumbles
kicked in the stomach, blood on the concrete
people watch, but no one wants to stop G's
i struggle to make it to my feet, balance broken
eyes burning and swelled, foot on my throat choken
tried fighting, but repetition of being knocked is notice
they ran off with my money, body numb for a couple moments



topic:*cop harrasment*

being harassed by cops

harassed by cops, another pitfall of livin' on the block
in days old, being a nigga wud've disadvantaged myself
now wateva race u r, u best run like hell
wen u c a cop comin with his hand on his shoulder
hiding tha numberz on his badge so u cant identify him l8r
"protect and serve" ,thats wat we call stretching the truth
"seek out and kill" is more apllicable to u
wen u c us on tha streetz mindin our bizness
leave us alone, even though u cant c a witness
dusn't mean u got tha right to extinguish tha light
of youth who have it burning so bright
u dont c it, but "stop n search" gradually hurts a brotha,
deep down inside where it can b seen by no otha.

being harassed by cops

harassed by cops, another pitfall of livin' on the block
in days old, being a nigga wud've disadvantaged myself
now wateva race u r, u best run like hell
wen u c a cop comin with his hand on his shoulder
hiding tha numberz on his badge so u cant identify him l8r
"protect and serve" ,thats wat we call stretching the truth
"seek out and kill" is more apllicable to u
wen u c us on tha streetz mindin our bizness
leave us alone, even though u cant c a witness
dusn't mean u got tha right to extinguish tha light
of youth who have it burning so bright
u dont c it, but "stop n search" gradually hurts a brotha,
deep down inside where it can b seen by no otha.

next topic:
stereotypes

Check my battles
Elusiv G vs. Invader_ZIM

constantly i enter a store, watchful eyes appear
peaking around corners, spyin, checkin if i didnt steal
rushing me to buy, shouts telling be 2 hurry, thinkin ima theive
undecided on a purchase, so don't think that ima leave
cameras seem to point at me, its not a coincidence
don't judge me by my skin, when will you racist bitches be convenced
don't prosicute me when theres a lack of evidence
comparin me with TV, to me is assumed to be erelevant
times hasn't changed at all, people haven't grown
they speak racial slurrs while in the privacy of there home


crit dis b4 u spit next topic plzzzzzzz

topic: cheated ina battle (we all relate to this)

Pretty good drop pro... id say 7.5/10
If u wana do a topical battle pm me

I set up the battle against this nigga wit some beef~
He went an accepted it... then i knocked out his teeth~
My punches and overall flow murdered him like a serialkiller~
Couldnt tell if he was tryin 2 diss or puttin in a filler~
Then i got KO'ed 5-0... all his votes by newbs wit 5 posts~
Then after they voted they faded out like they were ghosts~
Reported it 2 the mod after i noticed what hed done~
He had to make 5 new names cuz he knew i had won~

^off the top lemme know wat u think
next topic:escaping a burning building

I woke up one night to a loud smoke detecta
Appartment was on fire, musta been the money collecta
I still owed the bitch a shit load of cash
And to this day, I'm like one big rash
Anyways back to this quick little rhyme
Fire was all over, I knew I didn't have much time
So I ran out on to my balcony
I jumped, and fell on my knees
Broke them both, ended up in the hospital
It was a crazy day for me, holla back yo

Forgot topic.. like ALWAYS! Haha
Next Topic - Carry drugs and getting caught from the cops