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GUnit would own you so bad, your kids would be hunted by repo men. |
I'm gay//////////
everyday/////// rate that |
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lmao.. its true though... |
you know who sucks..........me
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thats fantastic.
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<<Doesn't see pic.
Link be broken. Plus edit it out before you get banned and whatnot. But I refuse to judge a verse in which I can not rightfully judge. Pfft. |
Its top the thread, what did u think I'd do?
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The link don't be working.
7/3's dope.........-_- |
Link fixed.....
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thought this would be dope, but what's winning matter...
when they put me up against the retarded jimmy fallon? umm coo got a rare habit, confused by the cam you just stare at it and try pointing to ya homies for help... but theres no one there, faggot meh & you gotta be prepared, thought i warned you hos cuz it seems like the curve life threw you, went & formed your nose blah got a missing tooth there, & i was wondering why but i found out it just up and ran for the hills, found under ya eyes ............... ya face's peaks and valley's, i'll tell ya how its looking, son that ya cheek's sprouting another nose, to make up for ya crooked one woooooord your site's a bad omen, i dont take it light dude and i just hope posting that pic... won't crash this site too may i say played watch this kid fall, with my fists' impact ya chin's mauled cuz see, shadow's will leave pulsate, with no contracting involved doppppepepepepepe see, shadows edge is deadly, you'll never best me cuz its clearly spelled out... that the end of pulse, is always SE meh This is prolly old SE. Boooo@ you trying to trick me. |
thought this would be dope, but what's winning matter...
when they put me up against the retarded jimmy fallon? lol got a rare habit, confused by the cam you just stare at it and try pointing to ya homies for help... but theres no one there, faggot lol... & you gotta be prepared, thought i warned you hos cuz it seems like the curve life threw you, went & formed your nose lmao....ahaha got a missing tooth there, & i was wondering why but i found out it just up and ran for the hills, found under ya eyes wack ya face's peaks and valley's, i'll tell ya how its looking, son that ya cheek's sprouting another nose, to make up for ya crooked one ehhh... your site's a bad omen, i dont take it light dude and i just hope posting that pic... won't crash this site too lmao watch this kid fall, with my fists' impact ya chin's mauled cuz see, shadow's will leave pulsate, with no contracting involved coo punch see, shadows edge is deadly, you'll never best me cuz its clearly spelled out... that the end of pulse, is always SE ok |
I didn't think it was that good but w/e
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Old skool man, old skool^^ *loving it*
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Yeah, I just wish I can get my FIRST sig back.
I still have the CB one but, meh. |
what was your first sig???
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Phantom's gay it's ok
noone likes him anyway Mad multi's rate hoe Join the council hoe |
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:shrug: different strokes for different strokes. you just prefer mens strokes is all. |
Oh, im dead now. :(
Someone drop a verse and bring me back. |
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The one with the hand, 'member? |
You memberrrrrr.....;)
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yes I do, I remember now
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critique this!!!! Im breachin zeke and deke'n his punches and stuntin this yungin's growth... im gross like cigarette smoke, float in ya lungs leadin to murda she wrote... coat ya ass with lead cuz i cocked and stocked it with 16 hollow tips quick... emit ya to heaven cuz i stoop'd to Zeus' group levels and write fluke hits...* Bettin me and hound leave ya steppin down now thats a simple Epic Ultimatum...* played~em and deflate~em cuz this made~em outa breath with how i degrade~em... rezerektin~em but my lines infectin~em and wreckin~em in a state of emergency... forsee the mercy after my punches start roundin up like im battlin guernseys...* sicker flows? ya wicker goes out when my quicker wind blows and shows ya up...* baretta's i stick both up and boast up about my heat got ya ina toasted muck... roast this kid who claims to take RV to its grave but see ur lines are played... sawyed the verdit away cuz i persuade the votes cuz i displayed how ur afraid... *zues is an alias he had *epic n ultimatum r 2 more alias' *gurensey is jersey daury cattle *play on his sig |
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Ok, look, quite the multi's for now and start paracticing on throwing harder punches and use more personels, also, you have to get more complex with your wordplay, after you elevate in that, then you can start battling with flow and mult'is add dope punches wordplay and personels and it'll be a deadly conection. As of now, you look like you would do well in songs and topicals... try a lil of that |
ayo this is an open mic done by me and Zeke. mine is the last 2 verses.
let me know what yall think of my portion of it...... Zeke First Verse-My First Girl Thinking About You Girl Coz I'm So Far Away From You... Wanting You To Know That This Love For You Is Always True... Not A Day Goes Bye That I Dont See You In My Eye... But I Try To Cary On My God So Lonely I Could Die... And My Hart Feeling The Sparks That You Be Giving Me Why We In Two Different Places Girl You Know It's Insanity Seeing You Is What I Need To Carry On..... This Song Is What I'm Sending To Your Girl It's Bin To Long Hook-Zeke You Are More Then Just My Friend....I'm Gonna Love You Girl Untill The End...Coz You Are More Then Words Could Say...I Love You Girl In Every Way.. Zeke-Second Verse Movoing To A New RelationShip I'm Standing Closer Don Know What To Say But I Wanna Get Close To You....... Your Looking Lovely Delicous And Fantastic Attracting So Refreshing Girl You Make Me Feel So New..... But I Dont Even Know Your Name Girl Spology.......... And I Just Saw You Smile But That Wasnt Nuff For Me 5 Minutes Of Your Time A Short Converse And I Will Be Satisfied.... So Tell Me What Would You Do If I Came And Talk To You Would You Turn Your Back And Walk Away?... Or Will You Stay Give Me The Time Of Day Girl I Wanna Get To Know You Tell Me What's The Best Way?.... I Dont Know If I Stand A Chance With You In My Arms Tonight... Tell Me Baby That You Want Me Like I Want You So I Can Hold You Tight... Hook x 2 WickedClown-His Relation Ship Status just me an' you baby boo, imma hold you true all through the night and to your delight i turn down the lights slip under the covers outta sight gettin to the sexual healin you deserve, makin ya swearve payin attention makin sure to hit every curve, tantalizin every nerve gotcha hollerin out sayin my name, hold tight baby gurl to this moment right now we the closest we ever been just take my hand and hold-it while i take you away to a land of extacy, come away with me and you will see the beauty of this land to be while i show you things outta this earth and wordly cause with me baby gurl nothin will ever harm you, slip away and let ya mind drift too ya here with me baby boo and and nothin can change that, not even the time that insues Hook x 2 WickedClown-Closer Ending It ... now that the motion has ceased the magic dont have to end thats why this letter of love im here to send and your past wounds to mend never could i hurt you in any way, a thousand poems i could say but none of them could ever show the way i truley feel inside every day so lay back and relax baby gurl as you fall asleap in my arms know deep inside you will never know the meaning of pain and harm slip away into a deep slumber and dream of the days to come and know the love we share is felt only by the luckyest of some no one could ever come inbetween us and thats my word as a man we can do it all boo, belive me if anyone can do it we can togeather forever, you and i as we watch the hour glass lose its sand Hook Fade Away |
Battles only.....
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.... ok, well its posted so why not tell me what u think any way... mines in red
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...Smartass....
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^^how??im testin my skills....lol....
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Super Smartass
Don't fuckin come in here when you KNOW I can't hear it and that you wouldn't give a fuck about what Mike would say. It's not funny. Fuck you and your audio. [/tired] |
LMFAO...i do care...i take any critic...good or bad....but dats yo fault...u aint got no speakers...
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heres some simple shit for u kids to rate
Acid in their veins,morphien in their brains, So insane, life follows death,escaping the pain, My blue eyes seem to be blind,darkness over light, Pitch black vision,how can i believe in love at first sight, AIDS infected players,inseminating dead seeds, Save neglected prayers,desinegrating testies, Decelerating technology,to prevent this planets obiesity, Treat the streets equally,so that we can live piecefully, |
........wtf don't u get?
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Back open but dont post whack yo.
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Vs. led poetic
This is quick said, I'll get cred for droppin' on this shit head You only had a bitch when I heard you were dope...I was "Ms. Led" I ain't even gotta try, you'll never de-feat me You'll prolly no-show, like rock n' roll on BET You'll get smoked like a Newport, no wonder you changed your account name In other words, you're like the XFL...without game Don't pout mayne, go blow ya nose and wipe ya tears Fuck Tyrone Biggums, talk about you's the biggest hype in years! I must be prophesizin', I'm not meanin' to boast But an "L" is the very first thing I see when you post! Get at me Soc:thumbup: |
This is quick said, I'll get cred for droppin' on this shit head
You only had a bitch when I heard you were dope...I was "Ms. Led" i get the concept, poorly worded I ain't even gotta try, you'll never de-feat me You'll prolly no-show, like rock n' roll on BET too simple You'll get smoked like a Newport, no wonder you changed your account name In other words, you're like the XFL...without game slight chuckle, think harder Don't pout mayne, go blow ya nose and wipe ya tears Fuck Tyrone Biggums, talk about you's the biggest hype in years! ehhhhhh I must be prophesizin', I'm not meanin' to boast But an "L" is the very first thing I see when you post! fuckin ill It was all extremely mediocre cept for the closer which was dope as fuck, keep tryin at it. |
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^^Not a battle verse :nono:
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lol blah, lol anyways, This a punch froma battle verse I'm puttin' up soon, weerd....
My rhymes are “cerebral”, hit you wit ‘em, say “you’re mental” And I’ll “beat” you wit “no words”, like you was an “instrumental” blah. :) |
~Sonofisis~:
9th Degree tries to fight, but he doesn't have Enough Rhymes Been Gone, Came Back to see him using My Old Punch Lines! You're The Dumb Kind, I didn't wanna have to Mention You Ur 9th Degree coz u've been tossed outta 9 Different Crews In rhyme school he was Cuttin Class, thats too Fuckin Bad Now the only time u get a thumbs up is when it's Up Ya Ass So now for your career we all Got Bad Hopes Coz Like diluted cocain, your "Lines Are Not That Dope" This is too much of an Easy Job Disgracful MC's like u make me really not Believe In God Giraffe Status, I Showed U Couldn't Be Neck Ta Neck I've shook u & erased yo fake image like an Etch a Sketch 9th Degree: My punches jab and "cross", like men who dress like ladies I'll send you to "Hell, bitch", make you the Daughter of Hades So maybe, you shoulda thought twice like twins conjoined at the head Your drops put me to sleep, like you and your boyfriend in bed That's prolly why you hang on your S's when you spit a flow Get of this "website", you don't deserve 3 W's in a row If you don't know bout his audios, he might get pissed But I peeped and thought I was listenin' to Too $hort with a lisp Reppin' the West, thinkin' you Ice Cube, but California's hotter, clown Puttin' that together explains ya skill level...watered down You're only felt when molested, yeah I know I tested But now the streak has ended, like naked people gettin' arrested Word :thumbup: |
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