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Valor 06-16-09 06:39 PM

hell yeah....lets get some collabs cracken

XM 06-17-09 04:52 PM

Just PM me a topic and i'll have it for you the following day....I just might drop a piece I wrote im in the process of writing a story topical called "The Ultimate Weapon: Elements of Defense" if anybody wants to hop on it

Valor 06-18-09 06:00 PM

well maybe let me know more....i might hop on it

fuck yuu 06-19-09 03:02 AM

I'll colab with you valor.

SUPERVILLAIN 06-19-09 03:24 AM

horray for activity!!!


s.v.

Valor 06-21-09 03:56 PM

ight....flash and mardu lets get a topic cracken

In-Vision 06-21-09 08:44 PM

cracking*

or crackin' for short.

not cracken..

the only cracken i know is ernie McCracken from king pin

Valor 06-21-09 11:24 PM

lol, how are you doing dickhead where have you been?

In-Vision 06-22-09 04:48 AM

i've been around...i'm always watching.

i just don't feel like activity matters, when 80% of it is from the likes of cali
when i was running this joint, we were all really active..but it's not just about quantity..it's about quality...right? and when cali came, he added to the quantity, but then brought the quality wayyy down

In-Vision 06-22-09 04:49 AM

oh, i'm good though....how have you been?

Valor 06-22-09 10:22 PM

good, and word remember me and you brought this shit back to life......and word i hate the facts im crew mates with c.a.l.i seinng how we never got along but hey it's c.s mayne

XM 06-23-09 11:58 AM

I still think C.a.l.i is a fuck'n herb...

...and yeah im bout to send you the specs of the collab now Valor and Flash

XM 06-23-09 12:03 PM

fuck it i'll post it here...

The story is about a ancient named Alizia, Part I is the second part of the last part which there will be five parts.

I started with this part to be right before an epic battle between Alizia and an army of bronze soldiers.

In part II it will be a flash back of who she is and where she comes from, her past pretty much and how she obtained the power to control the water element.

In part III im going to take the approach of the army of bronze soldiers creations by her rival another ancient yet to be mention (Forbidden Creation: Lethias of the Sun's Flare)

In part IV the take will be on the battle of Alizia and the bronze soldiers

In the last part of V the take will be the true appearance of Lethias as he explans Alizias true purpose and existance before she dies from being wounded in the battle with his bronze army. Also with his life being linked to his own creations he fades away back into darkness and the two great weapons of the world are gone forever. Alizia and Lethias




The Ultimate Weapon
An Element Of Defense

Written By: XM aka Mardu Entite

Part I

If there is magic on this planet, it is contained in water.
LORAN EISELY, The Immense Journey, 1957


The Battlefield: Endless Distruction Flows

From the horizon laid bodily fluids of enemies
Scattered blantantly amougst eachother were memories
Side by side, rows of hundreds they seem to bleed
Endless dreams of blood which holds their tendencies
The ground rumbles, earth quakes, from foul numbers
While down under vibrates with loud thunder
Clouds cover, warmth breeze and mild summers
Sound tumbles, moist showers and round slumbers

Shining Death: A Plague of Bronze Soldiers

Light glistened off the armor of warriors hearted colder
Eluminating with darkness, but hardly parted as vulgar
Many minions as statues their stature was slightly older
Plain sight upward vision, eyes never reaching the shoulders
No faces frowning upon them nor do they hinder emotion
While marching over the casualties casually 'til it's over
Bashing their feet on soil the spoils regarding service
Should surface, be ignored, materials serve no purpose
For what they seek is no contest of objects but an objective
Knowledge stands in perspectives a message must be accepted
One hundred thousand in record the counter is sort of pending

Alizia: "I find it hard to believe...they'll challenge my water bending"

The Ultimate Weapon: Alizia of The Mist

Such beauty and nonchalant, skin tone resembled flakes
Black hair with murky eyes, frost nails in hollow shapes
She stood but five eleven, with heels to add the inches
Body state is perfection but nothing you'll live to mention
Fore when she raised her defenses she left massive prints
And every step she took the whole camp had to quit
While trying to match her wit, as she grazes pass...
...yours with the horror she creates through pan's labrinyth
With a wave of her arms and her keen concentration
She could dense the air matter, cause extreme condensation
Her essence of technique forming countless of fashion..
...able to mold liquids to any three forms with her passion

*Alizia stands firm against an army of bronze soldiers, an arrow
from the distance is fired. Still she stands firm until dead silences
take over the rugged ends of the battlefield.

Alizia: "Liuid Barrier" she whispers.

The arrow becomes intertwined in her words.

Alizia: "So let us begin" she says.

...To Be Continued...


yall just let me kno how yall wanna go about it everything is subject to change when more ideas arise the storyline....i pretty much threw together for filler but how I am planning on writing it will replace the filler with imagry and emotion plus vocabulary of course....

....let me know wassup

Valor 06-23-09 07:06 PM

damn lol, g'shit i unno if im even able....it's weird i havnt wrote in awhile

XM 06-24-09 08:18 AM

same here...its almost as if i refuse to write lol but I wanted people to write a part and i'll follow their part with the next part and so forth and so forth.


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