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La Cosa Nostra 12-05-05 05:30 PM

Rofl... Internet kids...

There are 10 songs on the cd I'm putting out.. This is a poorly practiced 170 bar pre-release track and your trying to judge my entire style off this saying "you talked yourself up to much".......

If thats how its done, then I'm looking at your sig L.Veracity and you calling that a hot hook of the month is nothing short of hilarious...Thankyou very much............

(btw, ecko I aint talking to you in this post....you posted while I was typing)

Paranoid 12-06-05 08:57 AM

not bad, yea quality didn't reall stand out there nos. but one thing that stands out in the begining of your track you mumble across words, not liek mumble but liek you can't understand you and your vocals should be turned up a bit. but as it went on it got better man, nice solid lyrics fa sho!. dope beat choices fuck these people who say mainstream beats aren't cool. anyway not bad man keep it up.

rtf "Murder ft. Gangstarr & Mos Def"

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La Cosa Nostra 12-06-05 10:15 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Paranoid
not bad, yea quality didn't reall stand out there nos. but one thing that stands out in the begining of your track you mumble across words, not liek mumble but liek you can't understand you and your vocals should be turned up a bit. but as it went on it got better man, nice solid lyrics fa sho!. dope beat choices fuck these people who say mainstream beats aren't cool. anyway not bad man keep it up.

rtf "Murder ft. Gangstarr & Mos Def"

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Yeah, when I started writing the track I hadnt written anything for a good 2 weeks.. So after I got back into the swing of things, my lyrics took a big jump forward, and you'll see that when I release the other 9 tracks on this cd sometime before christmas..

Thanks for the feed though..

Mentalz 12-06-05 11:44 PM

Highly anticipated on my part bro. Nice shit. Personally I didnt care for your flow altering each beat, but not much avoiding that. Your vocals were, well I dont drop much audio feed. any at all. Your word play was pretty nice, I woulda went rasp by 6 min.props to that. Vocals coulda been upped abit, but as it stands it doesnt hinder the piece much. The accent didnt fuck shit up, americans are wack and use to there own shit. Good luck on that demo bro. You got a good start at it.

Dont forget later this month. I'll be sending you some shit to work with for a collab.

Peace and out.


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