http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...055#post1319055

if u want me to drop another 5-10 or w/e thats cool

what do yall say ??

Yo im usin my Metaphorical Tecniques ta scar and kill you, Like lyrikal destruktion im balstin through//
I check it I spit so clean, you’d think im spittin shampoo, washin ya’ll bitches increasing my record by dropping ya crew//
Yo im destined 2 rhyme, cause I spit hot shit ya’ll know im in my prime//
Im stealin wins like I was in a syndicate of crime, ya’ll know im active cause im spittin all the time//
Your gonna catch my 22’s, cause you cant never be me, im ten times better then you//
Bitch FUCK THIS im taking over.. Hypnotik Strats merkin ya crew….


Kinda busy... so not my greatest... but tell me wut ya think and if im in....

Hey I Gotta Go, But I'll Drop Sumfin' on Ya'll Lata ;)

~1ne~

Publicity.......................

u need to work on ure punches playa and ure personals

maybe after u get a few wins under ure belt u can join, but until now u need to elevate quite a bit!!

and yo killah
that sig. is sickness dawg
wat's the link so i can get that shit in my sig. playa

the link is

http://home.cogeco.ca/~cmarch1/hs.jpg

i think...

im hosting it since i made it lol... anyways how did my try out go???

i'm gonna tell it like this powder
and plz. don't take offense to it

first off u need to work on that structure
and shorten ure lines cuz they are stretched playa

my answer is......................
put u in the crew on a one week trial
and if u improve then u stay, if not then u don't
can't get any fairer than that

Yeah.. wasn't my best... but im down wit dat lol....

Ill drop another try out later... peace.... jus cause i know i can do 20 times better....

aight playa
i know u can to
u dropped a lot better than that when u were in the LD

Members so far..........................................

1. Killah Bwoy
2. KiNg SoLo
3. Flow Intelligent
4. Phalanx
5. Tony Bricks
6. White Powder (Trial Phase)
7.
8.

only need two more to get a forum up and running

yeah so im gonna up for sure cause my LD try out was a lot better...

smart idea king...lol never thought of that

yo word you guys we need some hotness on this so here i got

fuck this haters man... they dont wanna see me succeed,
i creat punchlines in the heat of battle...when its in need,
but when its not... fuck fakers better take heed,
cuz i planting something....it the elevation seed,
see... i try to take these texters' under my wing,
teach them bout... personals..punches..metas and things,
rap is more than words its the indivual letters... right? fuck,
so i stay deviering theres letter on time like a mail truck.

did that in a min i will post some of my battles links like the one against t-lite