Sin`cere, if you pm strobe you can just take the win.

Strobe will close the battle, as it has been open for over 3 weeks and give you the win. However, if Paranoid requests to have it reopened after that, he'll only have 3 weeks to get the win or strobe will reclose permantely.

Just pm, yo. This shit has been open forever.

Voted For: Paranoid

This was a really close battle, it's quit hard to pick the
better verse as both had some really strong points.

Paranoid ~ come well dope on this I felt that his flow
and vocab was well on top. His verse painted a clear
picture of what was going on in his story, then imagery
was sic.

Sin ~ Come well dope as well, I felt that his verse was
a little bit more complex then Paranoid, flow was nice
and his imagery was nice, I like the way the verse ended
where it started.

All in all I felt that Paranoid's verse was the stronger, no
hate to Sin his verse was sic as well but I felt that Para
come just that little bit sic-er,....

Vote Para

Stay up both

1~

fuck you Mimesis now it can't get closed it's tie now, so Sin`Cere can't.

uppin for more voters. 2 more left.

Voted For: Paranoid

ok here's my breakdown...

flow: paranoid has this subject IMO his bar layout was much better organised than Sinceres and evenly spread. Sin had a good flow to his verse but some lines were longer than others causing lines to drag on

Imagery: again Para edged this IMO i could relate better to his topic than Sin's...the choice of 5 was a good thing to do because i felt it gave both ya a chance to experiment with different verses in ya own way and in this case, Para did better with his choice.

Structure: Both had similar styles...paragraph breakdowns...so no-1 really edged this it was clear to read on both ends really.

Topic...like imagery Para got this because like i said reading his verse i was feelin his topic more IMO particulary these bars

He defended his attentions, as he pretended to play
By loving his skill, to steal from the rich was his pay
He’d look to destroy, so he’d always like in betrayal
His brain messed up, and all he did was fight in denial
Never was he loyal to reality, nor royal to mentality
He scavenged for fame, by erupting his foil to fatality..
Eventually he figured, hesitation would grab him
And he was correct, never to suspect it’d stab him

^ there were others too but these few were jus an example...Sin stayed on point but i wasn't as attached to his verse as i was Paras...

All in all my vote goes to Paranoid...but good drops by both cats...Para can't RTF and i wouldn't expect Sin to so think of this as a free one :thumbup:

thanks for the votes, y'all cna leave links if your gonna vote then, O well don't matter I appreciate that anyway.

uppin for 1 more..

This was feedback posted for Paranoid
 

Nice battle you two, uppin' this piece... I can't vote so you fucks better do it justice! ;)

Voted For: Paranoid

ok complexity both of you had it to an extent i feell both could have been a little better but sin ceres was jsut basic reall however i liked the style of writing he used with the recap

flow both good not complaints really rhyme scheme much much beter that most of rv lol god damn pretty good but sin cere got this

structure paranoid got but who gives a fuck really as long as it has complexity and flows its all good on a topical for me
ok basically there were just soo many quotable lines in paranoids battle btu i didnt like his closing bar

A thief, someone that fiends for them millions in life
Never will that be, mentality controls the spy’s fight
simple but good
Then the government stepped in, saying he’d die a thief
So the peasants asked another, is this lie just brief?
His fear to appear, was only to determine wrong
The ending to this fact of this annoying violin song
i really liked this bar

sincere has a few good lines too so props btu this was by far my favorite
A bleeding pen on top of the desk with scared claws
I suddenly paused…. Then I saw a black and red paw
props to both of you one of the closest battles ive seen but i think ive seen better from both of you

if you could rtf i will rtf again
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=210494
or any other cs battles thatnks