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La Cosa Nostra 11-07-05 02:48 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Will S.Unyu
OH SHIT
I fuckin love this song
but, I dont know why you quotin it, because Im sure you dont understand ANY of the Detroit references in it
anyway

I know it's past visiting hours
But can I please give her these flowers
The doctor dont wanna take procedures
He claim my heart can't take the anastesia
It'll send her body into a seizure
The little thing by the hospital bed, it'll stop beeping,
Hey chick, im at a lost for words
What do you say at this time?
Remember when I was nine?
Tell her everything gone be fine?
But i'd be lying, the family crying
They want her to live, and she trying
I'm argueing like what kind of doctor can we fly in
You know the best medicine go to people thats paid,
If Magic Johnson got a cure for A.I.D.'s
And all the broke muthafuckers past away
You tellin me if my grandma was in the N.B.A.
Right now she'd be ok?
But since she was just a secretary
Working for the church
For thirty five years
Things sposed to stop right here
My grandfather tryin to pull it together, he strong,
Thats where I get my confidence from
I asked the nurse "did you do the research?"
She ask me, "can you sign some t-shirts?"
Bitch is you smokin reefer?
You dont see that we hurt
But still...

yeah, I posted this verse for a reason
to show how different Kanye Wets and Eminem rap.
their lyrics are COMPLETELY different.
but on another note, Kanye's delivery STILL shits on Eminem's.

No... No it honestly doesent...

I'm cancerous, so when I diss you wouldn't wanna answer this
If you responded back with a battle rap you wrote for Canibus
I strangled you to death then I choked you again
Then break your fuckin legs till your bones poke through your skin
You beef wit me, I'ma even the score equally
Take you on Jerry Springer, and beat yer ass legally
I get you blunted off of funny home grown
Cause when I smoke out I hit the trees harder than Sonny Bono
(Ohh no!!) So if I said I never did drugs
That would mean I lie AND get fucked more than the President does
Hillary Clinton tried to slap me and call me a pervert
I ripped her fuckin tonsils out and fed her sherbet (Bitch!)
My nerves hurt, and lately I'm on edge
Grabbed Vanilla Ice and ripped out his blonde dreads (Fuck you!)
Every girl I ever went out wit is goin lez
Follow me and do exactly what the song says:
smoke weed, take pills, drop outta school, kill people and drink
And jump behind the wheel like it was still legal
I'm dumb enough to walk in a store and steal
So I'm dumb enough to ask for a date with Lauryn Hill
Some people only see that I'm white, ignorin skill
Cause I stand out like a green hat with a orange bill
But I don't get pissed, y'all don't even see through the mist
How the fuck can I be white, I don't even exist
I get a clean shave, bathe, go to a rave
Die from an overdose and dig myself up out of my grave
My middle finger won't go down, how do I wave?
And this is how I'm supposed to teach kids how to behave?

Me and Marcus Allen went over to see Nicole
When we heard a knock at the door, must have been Ron Gold'
Jumped behind the door, put the orgy on hold
Killed em both and smeared blood in a white Bronco (we did it!)
My mind won't work if my spine don't jerk
I slapped Garth Brooks out of his Rhinestone shirt
I'm not a player just a ill rhyme sayer
That'll spray an Aerosol can up at the ozone layer (psssssssh)
My rap style's warped, I'm runnin out the morgue
witcha dead grandmother's corpse to throw it on your porch
Jumped in a Chickenhawk cartoon wit a cape on
And beat up Foghorn Leghorn with an acorn
I'm bout as normal as Norman Bates, with deformative traits
A premature birth that was four minutes late
Mother.. are you there? I love you
I never meant to hit you over the head with that shovel
Will someone explain to my brain that I just severed
a main vein with a chainsaw and I'm in pain?
I take a breather and sighed; either I'm high, or I'm nuts
Cause if you ain't tiltin this room, neither am I
So when you see your mom with a thermometer shoved in her ass
Then it probably is obvious I got it on with her
Cause when I drop this solo shit it's over with
I bought Cage's tape, opened it, and dubbed over it


NONE of the verses you have posted so far have been dope.... Your so fucking ignorant and diluded and you dont even realise it...

How fucking embarrasing..

Triple_N 11-07-05 02:50 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Will S.Unyu
OH SHIT
I fuckin love this song
but, I dont know why you quotin it, because Im sure you dont understand ANY of the Detroit references in it
anyway

I know it's past visiting hours
But can I please give her these flowers
The doctor dont wanna take procedures
He claim my heart can't take the anastesia
It'll send her body into a seizure
The little thing by the hospital bed, it'll stop beeping,
Hey chick, im at a lost for words
What do you say at this time?
Remember when I was nine?
Tell her everything gone be fine?
But i'd be lying, the family crying
They want her to live, and she trying
I'm argueing like what kind of doctor can we fly in
You know the best medicine go to people thats paid,
If Magic Johnson got a cure for A.I.D.'s
And all the broke muthafuckers past away
You tellin me if my grandma was in the N.B.A.
Right now she'd be ok?
But since she was just a secretary
Working for the church
For thirty five years
Things sposed to stop right here
My grandfather tryin to pull it together, he strong,
Thats where I get my confidence from
I asked the nurse "did you do the research?"
She ask me, "can you sign some t-shirts?"
Bitch is you smokin reefer?
You dont see that we hurt
But still...

yeah, I posted this verse for a reason
to show how different Kanye Wets and Eminem rap.
their lyrics are COMPLETELY different.
but on another note, Kanye's delivery STILL shits on Eminem's.



This nigga posted roses....this is the same song in the second verse this nigga does his own echo..."sleep, sleep, sleep".......kanye spit that whole verse bluntly....if u don't know what "abstract" writing is..u dun know lyrical talent.....he wrote this like a country singer would tell a story.....very basic...no subliminals, no double meanings, jus blunt statements....an he uses the same flow as always jus he kinda whispers it this time.....lmao@you trying to defend kanye with this verse...however the hook on this song is bananas...I'll give him that

Zone Out 11-07-05 02:52 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Nostradamus
No... No it honestly doesent...

I'm cancerous, so when I diss you wouldn't wanna answer this
If you responded back with a battle rap you wrote for Canibus
I strangled you to death then I choked you again
Then break your fuckin legs till your bones poke through your skin
You beef wit me, I'ma even the score equally
Take you on Jerry Springer, and beat yer ass legally
I get you blunted off of funny home grown
Cause when I smoke out I hit the trees harder than Sonny Bono
(Ohh no!!) So if I said I never did drugs
That would mean I lie AND get fucked more than the President does
Hillary Clinton tried to slap me and call me a pervert
I ripped her fuckin tonsils out and fed her sherbet (Bitch!)
My nerves hurt, and lately I'm on edge
Grabbed Vanilla Ice and ripped out his blonde dreads (Fuck you!)
Every girl I ever went out wit is goin lez
Follow me and do exactly what the song says:
smoke weed, take pills, drop outta school, kill people and drink
And jump behind the wheel like it was still legal
I'm dumb enough to walk in a store and steal
So I'm dumb enough to ask for a date with Lauryn Hill
Some people only see that I'm white, ignorin skill
Cause I stand out like a green hat with a orange bill
But I don't get pissed, y'all don't even see through the mist
How the fuck can I be white, I don't even exist
I get a clean shave, bathe, go to a rave
Die from an overdose and dig myself up out of my grave
My middle finger won't go down, how do I wave?
And this is how I'm supposed to teach kids how to behave?

Me and Marcus Allen went over to see Nicole
When we heard a knock at the door, must have been Ron Gold'
Jumped behind the door, put the orgy on hold
Killed em both and smeared blood in a white Bronco (we did it!)
My mind won't work if my spine don't jerk
I slapped Garth Brooks out of his Rhinestone shirt
I'm not a player just a ill rhyme sayer
That'll spray an Aerosol can up at the ozone layer (psssssssh)
My rap style's warped, I'm runnin out the morgue
witcha dead grandmother's corpse to throw it on your porch
Jumped in a Chickenhawk cartoon wit a cape on
And beat up Foghorn Leghorn with an acorn
I'm bout as normal as Norman Bates, with deformative traits
A premature birth that was four minutes late
Mother.. are you there? I love you
I never meant to hit you over the head with that shovel
Will someone explain to my brain that I just severed
a main vein with a chainsaw and I'm in pain?
I take a breather and sighed; either I'm high, or I'm nuts
Cause if you ain't tiltin this room, neither am I
So when you see your mom with a thermometer shoved in her ass
Then it probably is obvious I got it on with her
Cause when I drop this solo shit it's over with
I bought Cage's tape, opened it, and dubbed over it


NONE of the verses you have posted so far have been dope.... Your so fucking ignorant and diluded and you dont even realise it...

How fucking embarrasing
..

if you cant compare the 2, then what was the purpose of postin another eminem song?
lfuck text
listen to a Kanye West song then listen to an Enimem song.
their styles is MILES apart. there are NO similarites at fuckin all.
YOU are the only ignorant one, and I can also tell that you're a slim shady dickrider aswell.
and BTW, Why you keep postin old shit?
whats wrong, cant post any NEW shit from Eminem thats good?
yeah, post up that shit where h says
"DONG DONG DONG"
And compare those lyrics to some kanye shit

La Cosa Nostra 11-07-05 02:53 AM

And to finish off...

Find the kanye lyrics that are even half as good as this...

I'll have you taken back to Christ when you sacrifice
The way you acting slice when I tear your back with knifes
Jacking life's of MC's, now I'm set to launch a plan
For blowing up the stage with illegal contraband
A stomped your man so unless you want what he got
You better set the mic down, I'm steaming like a teapot
I'll make the tea hot, people get in my face and ask
If I wanna battle, then I chase them in a Jason mask
It's an amazing task to battle with success
I never gave a fuck, now I give a fuck less
And in a slug fest I get physical like physicians
Invisible like magicians with mystical mic traditions
Wicked wizardry, like a sorcerer and no remorse for you
When I torture you throughout the course of my orchestra
So feel the force of my spiritual images
Slicing up an enemy's appendages till he hemorrhages
My skin itches every time a rapper recites
And when he's through with his verse, I'm all covered in flea bites
You wanna see fights I got a match for you
You couldn't flip shit playing in toilets with a spatula

You bitches get a hysterectomy disrespecting me
You wanna feel the full effect of me, hand a tech to me
Intellectually superior, I'll make the whack wearier
Inferior, deterior rate, like bacteria
Materially, killing serially, clearly you'll see
How much in fear when u hear me you'll be
Shiver and shake, quiver and quake
Bite a rhyme and rip it off then stiffer and ache, whither and break
You slithering snake, gibbering fake, fibbering flake
I'll twist you into a different shape
And toss you in Michigan Lake, for fisherman sake
If this is a dream you'd wish you can wake
Every dis you can take, personal
We ain't friends trying to make amends
If you ain't ever stole a gate you can take a fence
I make intense masterpieces and smash to pieces
Your last releases, you bad diseases, that's the reason
I'm showing you the proper way to operate a mic
So pass it like a hot potato
I've never been less than clever and fresh
Severing flesh of fools who never impressed I can confess

Ltizzle 11-07-05 02:55 AM

but i like ja rule :(

Blay'all 11-07-05 02:55 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Ltizzle
but i like ja rule :(

fuck you Tizz, nobody asked you.

La Cosa Nostra 11-07-05 02:56 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Will S.Unyu
if you cant compare the 2, then what was the purpose of postin another eminem song?
lfuck text
listen to a Kanye West song then listen to an Enimem song.
their styles is MILES apart. there are NO similarites at fuckin all.
YOU are the only ignorant one, and I can also tell that you're a slim shady dickrider aswell.
and BTW, Why you keep postin old shit?
whats wrong, cant post any NEW shit from Eminem thats good?
yeah, post up that shit where h says
"DONG DONG DONG"
And compare those lyrics to some kanye shit

I've listened to both... Kanye's flow really doesent impress me at all..

Your whole fucking idea of what makes good rap is just plain retarded....

Get a brain and then come back to argue...

RichD 11-07-05 02:56 AM

Ja rule is a fuckin disgrace to R&B and Rap.....jus for the fact that his cd is sold under those catagories.

Blay'all 11-07-05 02:57 AM

Tobacco is wack-o

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if you're a teen... word :cool:

Zone Out 11-07-05 02:57 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Nostradamus
And to finish off...

Find the kanye lyrics that are even half as good as this...

I'll have you taken back to Christ when you sacrifice
The way you acting slice when I tear your back with knifes
Jacking life's of MC's, now I'm set to launch a plan
For blowing up the stage with illegal contraband
A stomped your man so unless you want what he got
You better set the mic down, I'm steaming like a teapot
I'll make the tea hot, people get in my face and ask
If I wanna battle, then I chase them in a Jason mask
It's an amazing task to battle with success
I never gave a fuck, now I give a fuck less
And in a slug fest I get physical like physicians
Invisible like magicians with mystical mic traditions
Wicked wizardry, like a sorcerer and no remorse for you
When I torture you throughout the course of my orchestra
So feel the force of my spiritual images
Slicing up an enemy's appendages till he hemorrhages
My skin itches every time a rapper recites
And when he's through with his verse, I'm all covered in flea bites
You wanna see fights I got a match for you
You couldn't flip shit playing in toilets with a spatula

You bitches get a hysterectomy disrespecting me
You wanna feel the full effect of me, hand a tech to me
Intellectually superior, I'll make the whack wearier
Inferior, deterior rate, like bacteria
Materially, killing serially, clearly you'll see
How much in fear when u hear me you'll be
Shiver and shake, quiver and quake
Bite a rhyme and rip it off then stiffer and ache, whither and break
You slithering snake, gibbering fake, fibbering flake
I'll twist you into a different shape
And toss you in Michigan Lake, for fisherman sake
If this is a dream you'd wish you can wake
Every dis you can take, personal
We ain't friends trying to make amends
If you ain't ever stole a gate you can take a fence
I make intense masterpieces and smash to pieces
Your last releases, you bad diseases, that's the reason
I'm showing you the proper way to operate a mic
So pass it like a hot potato
I've never been less than clever and fresh
Severing flesh of fools who never impressed I can confess

ok
he makes ENITRE songs on how bad he's goin to hurt you and kill you
honestly, where's the "TALENT" in that?
both of those verses was just "I'll kill you because im so lyrically dope, vigerously smoke you hearin me dope" bullshit
sorry to inform you, but those are NOT lyrics.
:thumbup:

Triple_N 11-07-05 02:57 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Will S.Unyu
if you cant compare the 2, then what was the purpose of postin another eminem song?
lfuck text
listen to a Kanye West song then listen to an Enimem song.
their styles is MILES apart. there are NO similarites at fuckin all.
YOU are the only ignorant one, and I can also tell that you're a slim shady dickrider aswell.
and BTW, Why you keep postin old shit?
whats wrong, cant post any NEW shit from Eminem thats good?
yeah, post up that shit where h says
"DONG DONG DONG"
And compare those lyrics to some kanye shit


This is the stupidest arguement ever^^^U cant judge who's better cuz their styles is different....what mainstream rapper has the exact same style as another anyways?.......wtf are u talking about?.......shit...people argue over who's the greastest of alltime btw Biggie an 2pac.....u dun get much more diff than them too....an people still judge them.....but now the rules changes when it comes to EM an kanye.....plz go to bed youngster

Blay'all 11-07-05 03:00 AM

*watches the dude with the trashcan over his head on MentalFunk*

word, yall suck :cool:

Zone Out 11-07-05 03:00 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Nostradamus
I've listened to both... Kanye's flow really doesent impress me at all..

Your whole fucking idea of what makes good rap is just plain retarded....

Get a brain and then come back to argue...

so, a rapper that repeatedly reminds you OVER AND OVER AND OVER how he will kill you and hurt you and kill you some more and rape his own mother and beat his family is dope to you?
that shows where your mind is.
seriously, I was likin Eminem when I was in the 5th, 6th and 7th grade.
I knew the words to ALL the songs you was naming, its nothing new to me.
but Kanye West is a breath of fresh air with his flow, delivery, lyrics, presence and emotion.

..Decree.. 11-07-05 03:02 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Will S.Unyu
if you cant compare the 2, then what was the purpose of postin another eminem song?
lfuck text
listen to a Kanye West song then listen to an Enimem song.
their styles is MILES apart. there are NO similarites at fuckin all.
YOU are the only ignorant one, and I can also tell that you're a slim shady dickrider aswell.
and BTW, Why you keep postin old shit?
whats wrong, cant post any NEW shit from Eminem thats good?
yeah, post up that shit where h says
"DONG DONG DONG"

And compare those lyrics to some kanye shit


^Go D/l Emulate em an trice.....

Blay'all 11-07-05 03:05 AM

who wants to fuck with some Tupac?


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