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Voted For: Spektikul

Ight ima have to go with speks verse because you had punches multis and personals in this 8 line verse vs natraul killa. but Natraul you did good too this was a very close battle with multis and structure and everything else too. Oh spek i like the minimum wage line man keep it up both of you nice battle.

my vote = Spektikul

Voted For: Spektikul

And I seen ya' last battle,a win..against appoc..nice job,hold it true,
But then again,it's a little too bad..that only newbs and herbs vote for you
I'll Demote ya' too..cuz your wack 'n try to hide it,I'll bruise ur kind,
cuz your the 1st dude to be undefeated in record.......but lose 7 times

vs.

Fucka blinged out avy, your lucky to be making minimum wage
Natural Killa? Wouldn’t that just be killing people with old age?
Ill kick your nuts & rob too, gimmie all the cashew got on you
You say your reppin Trinidad, shit, Ill just drop an fuckin bomb you
Ill admit that on this site, you deal with lots of different choices
I chose to write this battle with a broken pencil……
……………………………………cause like you, its pointless

Narutal Killa: ok yours sounded like it was half assed... it doesnt even sounded like your rap. sounds like your talking with rhymes. no real hard punches there though i liked the 2 last bar.. it was pretty decent... overall no hard personals you couldve reworded the second bar to a better personal. the opener was all right. no multis which gave you bad flow

Spek: you came hard as usual you had punches that hit directly and nice personals that were straightforward te opener could ve ben reworded. but the closer punch was a 10/10 that wasw one of the best punches iv'e heard from you. Nice wordplay and the flow was better.

V/ Spek singlehandedly

lol Paramik.

Sup dawg, when are we gunna have our rematch???

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I wasnt feeling none of the verses, so I wont vote. I'll just up feedback. Tha creativity in both verses was there, but I think you guys were kinda pushing it to come out too much. I like how you wanted to come up with new lines, thats good and all, but they hafto make since at the same time. I think what both of ya'll did was focus too much on creative writing. Another thing I saw was soft disses. Dissing each other wasn't all that. I felt ya'll could've came a lil bit harder. Some of the lines should've been left out. Structure was easy to read in both verses. Usually I judge on delivery. Who delivered there verse better by staying more consistent, and I didn't see any of that. I think both of you have skill, you just rushed through these verses. Focus more on harder disses and better wordplay, and you probably will elevate more.

Good verses though.


-Take all critism and use it to better yourself.


-Eazy

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Spek won this battle his verse was nice, the opener
killed it...

Emcee? Kid used to be a tap dancer, till he fell in the sink
Shit, in his sig he cant even provide us with a proper battle link
^Good use of wordplay, nice punch good flow^

best punch:
Fucka blinged out avy, your lucky to be making minimum wage
Natural Killa? Wouldn’t that just be killing people with old age?
^Nice personal, good flow hard hitting punch.

Killa, come nice to, I kept losing your flow at times it wasnt
as fluid at Speks.. but u still come pretty nice..

Best punch:
Making all them excuses..but you could never meddle with dope,still,
cuz u don't half-ass SHIT,bitch..that's just the level of ya' skill
^Nice punch good flow^

Spek won this battle, he had better flow, more personals
dope wordplay and an all round better verse.

Stay up both Vote ~ Spek

Can't vote need 2000 post how rubbish is that, oh well
not my loss!!!

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Voted For: Natural killa

Natural Killa

Making all them excuses..but you could never meddle with dope,still,
cuz u don't half-ass SHIT,bitch..that's just the level of ya' skill
Lmao. I thought this was dope.
Your brain musta spilled,sayin no explanations?..well,it must be weed 'n shit,
cuz spek...Even if I drop the alphabet......you would still need that,bitch
Nah..
And I seen ya' last battle,a win..against appoc..nice job,hold it true,
But then again,it's a little too bad..that only newbs and herbs vote for you
Decent..
I'll Demote ya' too..cuz your wack 'n try to hide it,I'll bruise ur kind,
cuz your the 1st dude to be undefeated in record.......but lose 7 times
Dope.. because it's true..

Spektikul

Emcee? Kid used to be a tap dancer, till he fell in the sink
Shit, in his sig he cant even provide us with a proper battle link (vs nick)
No punch.. doesn't really relate to a battle..
Fucka blinged out avy, your lucky to be making minimum wage
Natural Killa? Wouldn’t that just be killing people with old age?
Nameplays on Natural Killa are played out..
Ill kick your nuts & rob too, gimmie all the cashew got on you
You say your reppin Trinidad, shit, Ill just drop an fuckin bomb you
Not a punch..
Ill admit that on this site, you deal with lots of different choices
I chose to write this battle with a broken pencil……
……………………………………cause like you, its pointless
Played wordplay..

Man, this was a different turnout then what I expected opening this thread. I thought Natural Killa was going to get smashed on, but it turns out that he did win this battle. His opener was dope, as was his closer. He had some average shit in the middle, but none of them were just like, horribly wack. Spektikul came with quite a bit of played shit. The nameplay, pointless lines. Some of the other shit didn't have punches. Like, saying your bombing Trinidad isn't a punch. Saying that links don't work in sigs isn't a punch. So, basing off of my breakdown of the verses, I have to give this battle to Natural Killa. Word.

Wow. These results are kind of disappointing to see. I don't have beef with either one of these guys, and when I opened this thread I thought Spektikul would win, but he didn't even come close to taking this battle. Whatever.