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OneMeanSaltine 12-21-03 10:46 PM

I'm leave-a deva to decieive ya?
Naw I'm the truth retrieva,
Your verse was more wack than Nicoles parents wearin OJs Jersey
You act hard, but want beef? Naw yer like GO HEAD HURT ME,
You ain't worthy don't even try to serve me,
Bitch ya heard me, you can't hurt me,
Stay suckin dicks like slurpys, Pickin up herpys,
I knew ust from lookin at ya yer dirty.

Dev 12-22-03 05:00 AM

onemeansaltine, a seen ya done edited ya post
if i was you id get a new fucking ghost
at most ya verse is novice, even for a pre-school
its dEva not deeva, cant ya fucking read ya fool
with a battle record of 0-1 tha reppin ya hood well
bunch of dumb ass fags... couldnt drop hot from the gates fo hell!

Anonymous Mike 12-22-03 08:40 AM

I'm like sex wit no condom basically I’m Fuckin raw, no chance ya luck is lost,//
You talk, but how you gonna win when you ain’t got no flow like menopause, //
have ya mentals sauced when I strangle you wit dental floss, it's regretable, //
how a 1 man wreckin crew, gets the best of you'n chewz u like a vegetable,//
You're verbally crippled, while my style stands out like an excited bitch's nipples,//
The only time deva is considered 'tight' is when he bends over and spreads 'em,//
I'm too much for him to handle, shit, he couldn't beat me if I let him,//

Dev 12-22-03 10:09 AM

who's this jak off, coming in with stretched lines
didnt ya read my verse, im a 'man' you'll find
so fuck off with ya shit, with ya skills of the handicaped
ya couldnt rap fast if a gave you some prozac
so go home 'burt' i think ernies waiting
hes got some fury meat... ready for ya taking!
......fag!

COM 12-22-03 04:20 PM

What the fuck is this?....is that Deva tryna battle?
Gonna make you feel sore like you arrived via saddle
You get shown the red card... when your hard verses flop
You couldn't pull it out the bag... if you bought it at the shop!
So stop get on track... and prepare to be smothered
And I know for a fact... this guy lives with his mother!

Dev 12-22-03 04:46 PM

Wow! COM recently got a woman…now thinks he’s the big man
But for 4 years before it… he was beating with his hand!
In 1990 we went to camp… most had fun and went crazy
Guess who was homesick… phoned grandma crying like a baby!
COMedian a fitting name… for someone with your luck
Couldn’t judge the longhurst barrier... left us tripping,, laughing to fuck!

COM 12-22-03 05:06 PM

I'm at the end of my tether with Deva... I'll feel no guilt
How can you hold yourself together?.... You're only partially built!
You won't grow you'll just wilt... all your stories sport stilts
You had a few girls... but they all got rid of ya
At least one gave you sumthin... a dose of climidia!
When I spit at ya you freeze...Light is faster than sound
Thats why you seem bright... till you open your mouth!

Dev 12-22-03 05:09 PM

This guy saying I live with my mom…but he jus moved out
He’s so weak… he’s been threatened to get his windows put out
He cant handle life… his girl fights his fights
Seen more beef on a turkey… after Boxing Day’s night
Go home COM… don’t try to act hard
Remember I seen ya on a whitey… being burned like a retard!

Mr W.Rite 12-22-03 06:41 PM

Dont need publicity...then get out the public bitch...
Pain in the ass..nah...........he barely a fucking itch...
This guys a nusense......worse than nats and flies...
And fallin harder.......than when two shaqs collide...
Seen not one good verse from u...no one else has either....
Go join Aretha...Whitney...Pattie to be wit the other DEVA's...

GIVEN 12-22-03 11:49 PM

you think ur too cool
well you a damn fool
dog you supposed to diss em
not bitch up and kiss um
you rappin to him like u miss him
now bitch payattention and listen
there must be something ur missen
cause ya rhymes suck more than you do
what did ya parents do to you
damn fuu you dont have a damn clue
that you cant rap and thats true

Sergeant_Barwak 12-23-03 12:03 AM

so Mr Rite's a fool who should not be livin
but he a fucking genius compared to young Given
'Given', damn, whatchoo gotta give?
a 3" dick and a brain like a sieve
won't help you rap hot (not wit whatchoo got)
keep wankin off until ya die from cock-rot
and even then you won't stop
coz you da biggest wanker since the day yo Mom dropped
Stop

Ferris 12-23-03 12:19 AM

danger danger watch out for the sergeant /im ready to kill and hes my first target/barwak more like bullshit/ ive heard better rhymes from a chinese immigrant/im so quick to kill and im on this/ your vision is so blurry you should see and optomitrist/you battle yeah in your dreams/your ass couldnt find the means to pick coffe beans/ im spittin quick and thats that /well this kid is definatley whack and thats a fact

deser_eagle 12-23-03 08:05 PM

oh shit! faggot ferris is in da thread...
"will u ride my dick?" he said. FUCK NO!
my lines are "dizzyin" they'll keep
ya "head spinnin in circles" like
"ferris wheels"
he think he hard, but he's just a fuckin seal...

Straight Ace 12-23-03 08:22 PM

Rhyme is a concept often neglected..ah what the hell..
Six-six record may explain that after 3 rounds......
................he's always 'saved by the bell'
Only statin his wins in his sig, his losses wont quite fit..
On two pages, so they created the [move] tag for it..
Beggin' for ban, but u aint worth the effort..ur of no use..
This man faced the mirror and the loser called a truce..
Snap outta ecstasy ur bubble been burst..ur now clowned..
And u cant escape it,not even if u read it the other way 'round

IceMan187 12-23-03 09:05 PM

str8 ace
your a disgrace
youll catch slugs str8 to the face
get off this site your wastin web space
im first so you must be in last place
cus theres a million cats worse than me but can open ya face
you reppin the windy city
blow ya scalp back back so you can feel the breeze shit aint pretty
leave nothing on ya head but a patch of hair like diddy
you sicken me severely
you prolly wana call truce "Dear IceMan, Sincerely"
all of yall cats on this site should fear me
killin anyone hatin who even steps near me
so lets hope yall wanna bees understand clearly


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