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this is my debut for which im long overdue
no need to reveiw im here to come through i make niggas become beleivers threw my rhymes while their chicks blow me more then wind chimes i left the throwbacks shaking with a heart attack you skip a beat and your fucked worse then iraq Desmoloshing these weak rappers verses worse then m&m stemulating your body like cancer befor it hits your brain stem leaving fake ass wannab emcees looking like the red sea i garantee il suceed with everything your can thow at me |
theirs my tryout i know im new but im active alot so give me a chance or atleast some feedback
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with work you will get better.....i'll give you a chance welcome .......okay now everybody report to our new sub forum |
I'll be droppin somthin for ya soon
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I'm still workin on it
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yo check out mah stuff in freeagents
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wait didnt ya used 2 be in D2R???????
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aint ya ctually prdigy the person from D2R
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Heres my tryout...
Im not Santana but ill bring the Jewelz(Juelz)... Im not the paper boy but ill bring the news... Just sit down unless u ready to lose... I came here to collect my dues... I bust shots n leave ur white t lookin like a jersey... Im like the orkin man eradicatin the pest... When my rounds r empty ull b left wit out a chest... Itll make the mortician sick and the athiest think hes blessed... Nuthin can protect u from me not even a vest... Ive finally emerged, the one they call the best... So step down or be defeated like the rest... check out my open mic 2 |
iight... checkin in. trigga you already peeped my shit but i'll spit again if you want me to?
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go check in our sub crew fourm
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click the link in my sig
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this is the white night, outa site
if you wanna get with me just holla tonight you know i'm tight, i bring light to all the darkest situations, damn right i'll be on every radio station, i'm so good, i spit rhymes in my sleep make you weep, to your mom who's a creep come and get me, catch me if you can goin 93, all the way across japan runnin circles 'round your house, laughin in yo face makin u cry, with my bottle of mace i'm too fast, too furious for you i hope you know what your getting yourself into khuz u noe u gonn lose to me, can't you see i'm not one of these rednecks from tenesse i'm the happenist playa, you've ever seeen i spit mean rhymes like some kinda machine this isn't it, i've just begun i'll make you run home back to ure mum if you want me, come nd get some i'll be here all week, puncturing ure rectum if you think yoself to be some kinda... cool guy i'm here to put a stop to you... and that lie loved by few, hated by many respected by all, and that is plenty people always tellin me be real friendly and people will be nice to you like mr. bently but i aint into that, true pimps are cruel there's a true pimp, standin right in front of you if you think you betta, stop actin a fool khuz u noe i'll make yo mouth drool no, not with spit.. but with blood khuz i'm the only one spittin spit in the hood i'll take you to the top, homies gotta stop bow down in front of me and i'll hit u with a block when things are dark, i make 'em bright when there's nothin there i, show the light when things are bad, i make 'em tight do you know why? khuz i'm the white night |
WhiteNight:
Nice, But i think you need more elevating.. I'm not sure... Probably not... I'm not the head of Lyrical Virus... I'll let the others decide... |
he needs too elevate a lil........
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