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Voted For: Infurno

infurno took this one, cause he came harder with punchlines and wordplay. i think he was more creative in this one...u had better structure also, but i think u should work a lil on ur personals, they werent that hard, and they were a bit simple.
kamakazie-or w.e...ur verse was ight, but i think u should work on ur structure. a lil of tha lines were off....and some of ur rhymes were simple, but i seen a lot of creativitie in this one. i was feelin ur verse, but i dont think u came out on top. u came coo, in wordplay, and personals...but theres always room for elevation..
overall-yall came coo in this one. yall got skillz, but a lotta places in yalls verse was simple,but i seen a lotta creatitivie in this one. i think infurno came out on top with harder wordplay and punches, and personals...


plz return tha favor on battle link in sig, against CJ...tha last one...cause i took tha time out to vote on this...and plz make it xplained...



good shit.....elevate...no hate


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Voted For: Infurno

... damn, well it wasnt that bad for a noob, Ifurno got this, you will elevate and become a lot better one day... if you stay on this site, but this wasnt bad, I liked the few little personels, you beat him that... other guy terror, you were aight to, but you came a little more simple, work on the complexity of your punches both... pz

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