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new york state your in....its an average spit...but you in....
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C-Quence has landed in tha BluePrint-Try-outs
gonna werk this whole site, a room-rent-buy-out watch this, ill jump from a tree wit 10 swords at my chest bump a few branches wit my knees and grab a birds nest a crazy, insane character of non-fiction novels hate lazy, i won fame from bomb n ditchin brotherels(hoehouse) i only got two weapons that i really like-to-use ones an axe, i get into fights cuz i like-to-re-use tha other is my verses cuz in light im all news an efficient MC with sufficient battle chews unlike NY State of Mind, i read but suffer from insanity i have scitzofrenic rhymes with a degree in Humanities my vocab and style is neverending, please obey-your-thirst unlike Sprite im not caffeine free so ya need to ok-this-first... |
*May I Audition* lol
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sure you can....i'll get with vango
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VanGo Is The One Who Told Me To Check It Out :) Mmm lol
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We Already Know You Got Skillz, But Go Ahead And Bless Us With A Little Somethin Girl.
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hell i say dps in
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Aight I Got You VanGo' .. ! :)
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Dapz.. (I Want In On This) ...
In Or Out? |
ya in
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ay you know my answer...........lol
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here's a demo: I'm the new kid on the street, the one with tight flos and musical beat, watch me kill and burn, my rhymes so sick it makes ur stomach churn, Some call me Dr. Dre's brother, im so good u cant pick no other, I,m packed with lyrix and verses, most filled with rymes and curses, so make up ur mind, to choose me just sign the bottom line.......
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blueprint tryouts...damn...it's on ya'll
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Personally I Think .. You Can Do Better..!! 1.) Your Flow Is Off Balance 2.) Could Be In Better Form 3.) Need To Elevate! (So Doesn't Everybody) 4.) Could Work On All Aspects But You Do Have Potential..!!! .. Out Wun Luv... Lil Swirl!!!!!!! |
aight yall want more shit here's more keystyle tell me if i'm in
my rhymes hit u in tha ~head and cause a contution/ make u fall back on your ~bed and say his shit confusen/ fill your body full of ~led and no this isnt a illusion/ now see my rhymes are just ~plainly obtrude/ (means to force on others) look me in tha face and say i'm ~strainly rude/ my rhymes ~aint just one way u could call them intermigle/ (means blended) they will make u ~faint it's a hunger that leaves u weak and febel/ my rhymes stay ahead of tha~ pack like erostion/ i never fell ~back cause of my none stop devotion/ other rappers rhymes i just consume/ ive been rappin since i was locked up in tha woom/ (yall know wat that is) |
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^^^nice battle girl
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thanx... JPoll
i'm lookin' fa a crew i tried out in four forums before this so i don't kno... wut's happenin' right now... Get At Me... |
I Say Elevate Some.. Sweetie.!! ^^ And Its All A Go From There...!!
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I just started in dis community...... Take a look and tell me what u think iight
Just tryin 2 B the first sella on tha block// Crazy thoughts keepin my smooth flow like fire...hot// Cocky....nah, thats somthin dis niggaz not// just tryin 2 make sure all these rhymes is off the top// the Crazy kid'll just sit back... flow if you dare// but I will knock your fuckin head back like rocking chairs// and realize bitch, that I show no fear// i will wear your ass out, like European cashmere |
nice flow........
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since i no that shit wasn't perfect let a nigga no what I need 2 work on... cause Im tryin to be in dis BluePrint an I no that ya always need 2 Elevate... hit me up
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Work on structure...stack ya lines don't mash them together...that style won't work on this site for some reason. Or better yet that style won't work for you. Stronger punches...i guess that really doesnt matter cuz this is was not a battle verse it was a tryout one. Take those smileys their played...all new people do that...Work on your vocabulary...this is just pertaining to that verse so don't take it personal.....uh that's about all..that i can think of right now...but there is probably more.
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Fam they wanted to me cget ing....im 3-0 IN votes here my drop see if ya like it....
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=127499 |
wait until vango comes back online...he hasnt been on all day....but i say your in so don't worry about it.
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KillaCam ^I Say Your In... And DaClassic Says.. Your In..!!! ...
I Guess VanGo' ... Has To Approach Every SIngle Catt.. Thats Trying Out For This..!!' So Most Likley Your Waiting For VanGo's.. Say So..!! Your In.. or Your Out.. But Most Likely Your 'In' ... Acuna Matata..!! (No Worries) lol |
Well pm if im in im trying out for this and ill Legal..so whoever accepts me first
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ight i want in,.... so check me out and holla back
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okay............
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killacam is not in and daclassic agrees. killa had some problems with our crew last saturday and doesnt get what were trying to do here. if you need any further explanation im sure daclassic can give you details.
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Whitey - Seriously You Need To Evelate Son....!!!!!!!!!! ..
-You Could Work On All Aspects Stay Up ..!! Wun Luv, - - - Lil Swirl - - - |
^^^truth from the lady and vang
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Last Saturday .. Was Last Saturday'!! Why Bring Up The Past I Mean, FoReal Was It A Serious Matter But I Guess... VanGo .. Says Your Out... So There For Your Out 'KillaCamFlow' .. Take It Eazy Boi You Know I Respect You To Da Fullest!! No Doubt About That!! Good Look With Ill Legal!!!! -Out- - - - Lil Swirl - - - |
yeah it was serious enough that we told him he should find another crew.
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fine all just clik my ass back to the front lines/...................................bitch
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-Enough Small talk- .....!!!!!
:) .... Lookin For Catts' ... That Could Bring Something Into This Crew' ...!!! |
Pardon me soldier, but you're just a thorn in a garden of hopefuls…
I'll stick your arm and your shoulder down the garbage disposal… The carnage is total, a sort of irreversible slaughter… While a surgical doctor tries to place your body back in vertical posture… Just burned an imposter, tried rapping with a lexicon… Now I'm shape shifting like square dancing in the pentagon… Fuckin retard,Take a foot to your chin bone… Its been known, the only thing you ever get down with is syndrome… Man fuck your big headedness and extensive flare… I'll slap you so fuckin hard your ego will be in intensive care… This battle’s like bowling, and your team is outnumbered… I’m debating whether to spare you or leave you in gutters… Im takin this nigga in one and droppin like herbs… Fuck the battle,just focus on your death,like a morgue photographer… Even tho this kid is not new why are u on RapBattles...? Cuz your verse’s sound like an 5 year old askin for a baby rattle… that was my verse against KillaCam...^^ http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=128312 Battle Link^^ |
^^^pretty nice...uppin
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http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=126942
^^^except you had tha same text against EDIT... and you say you used this on KillaCam' |
Femcee your in the crew battle. check out the thread.
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