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Jo-JO 02-11-04 02:21 PM

Outcome i told you before and I say it again
Your place is in Open mic where you can write what u sayin
Now you didn't get a chance to take a second glance
At the shit you said before you picked up your lyrical lance
Now your untrained and confused leaving me plenty amused
Your structure is wack and skill is lack tell me wich ryming dic. you used
Your blind to any type of forthright topic
And your tears droping fast like a forest in the tropic
I know I know it's metaphors and bull shit
But homie piece of advice you have to learn how to use it

DAARK 02-11-04 02:49 PM

JoJo? nigga ur name soundz so gay~u should be branded "poster-boy" faggot
I have no luv fa weak "text-rappers"~round em up and "knee" em up like ma nigga Sagat / (Street Fighter)
Who da fuck gave U power to tell nigz where dey belong~bitch U wrong
U a 1 hit wonder like dat bitch who did tha "my neck my back" song but
don't get confused bout me callin U a "1 hit wonder" ur shytz totally wack
infact I was meanin how U go dat x-tra mile fa ur fagz~breakin ur back
str8 up...down and muthafuckin across this boy "Jo" iz @ a friggin loss
this fucker let his french poodle "cummed" on his fish burger fa tatar sauce :shocked: :laugh:

Evil_SoLo 02-11-04 02:52 PM

huh?
 
Daark...what the hell were you thinkin when u wrote that? damn

Aite,
Im gunna show you a lil sumthin//
give ya a head start to ya runnin//
by stickin my dick ya ear so ya know when Im cummin//
take a trip to da whackness emergency center and heal quick//
theyll take a dump in ya mouth n maybe then ul spit some real Shit//
my bad...I aint feelin it today. Oh well...
LaTeR

OutCome 02-11-04 03:01 PM

Can some one please help this poor man of of my penis???
I love it how this cats needs to to act like he's the king shit
But your just drowning in your own watered down rain
in accuality im in control, its got you pounding with pain
I see you spit biblical, or at least well... your sig does
So dont lie to yourself, hell i mean birds dont buzz
Quit the fronts, its somthing you really need to do
Cuz like how water runs, this aint froma dic to.......
I mean does it Look like it was SPitten by you?
Man i MUST be hungrey, I mean man you got me feeding
Im to Old for this.. Well sonny, good luck with the meaning
Now if you need some help, have your mommy read it
After all you education looks Stealth, what did you eat it?

DAARK 02-11-04 03:18 PM

^^^^^yea evil I did'nt put much thought into that one :laugh:


Wackness center nigga? plz~I drop "hot" shytz dat "freeze"
and leave "solo" dick suckerz who think their "evil" to dey kneez
yea I'll be tha bigger man and admit I slip up fo a quick minute
so wat!! that'z my worse verse~if we battled U still can't win it


P.S. damn I think am losin ma flow mayne gotta go re-charge :banghead:

Unwritten Hazard 02-11-04 04:03 PM

yo bro, rhymin against me is a no no///
its impossible to win like sword fightin Zorro///
so dont go "solo"///
how can you say Outcome sucks dick, when u snow blow?
ill rip your arms off like Goro, then have him fuck you, for being a homo///
tape it, then make your mom watch it in slowmo///
keep it on the low low, cause my flow glows like a jordaon promo///
i slap hoes though, kill anything that moves, and foes know///
spit at me and ill wipe out your species like the Doe-Doe

Chase 02-11-04 04:18 PM

Unwritten how anout un heard of
I would touch this kid with OJ's glove
Drop you at the bottom of the atlantic
And you know I'll do it thats you looking so frantic
Majic could even bring you back
If Hova was ya gost writer you'ld still be wack
Back up and breath easy
Cuz it takes more than a boy to please me
Do yu like my 9 and squeeze the

lilrenegade89 02-11-04 04:21 PM

damn rite ur losin ur flow u gotta recharge
everyone here noes ur a fuckin lyrical retard
ur flow is ill i mean sick like a dizise
ur so dum u think u hear the birds en da bee's
dis whore is a hoe en a fuckin sleeze
she'll do it in the car with ne pimp she see's
i blow this slut up even in darkness
wanna fite c'mon b lets fuckin start this
with a glock to ya head my ass u wanna kiss
hit or miss i drop u down in the ditch with this diss

Unwritten Hazard 02-11-04 04:28 PM

OMG.......... posting again and again doesnt make you faggots nicer///
scroll back a couple of pages, i served you both at the start of this cypher
im the mic slicer, cutting your lines///
yours aint nothing to mine///
im flooding you rhym'as////
chopping off dicks and butt plugging vaginas///
im sicker than a white kid starved, aids infested livin in China///
i dont show gun or renegade love, or gothic forgivness///
both u stop posting, P.S. this TOPIC IS FINISHED

OliverClohsoff 02-11-04 04:29 PM

Lilrenagade89 ur ass needs to calm down
U avy looks like a high white boy who dressed up as a clown
In ur sig it has pics of gunz but u took young to use them
Stick to ur waterguns but please dont abuse dem
U say u rising up da ranks but u still aint go no wins
Ur ass is just like a shark in water but without any fins

Chase 02-11-04 04:35 PM

Oliverclohsoff Jump off the nearest cliff
We don't need another weak kid with rymes so stiff
I couldn't even smoke a spliff, and laugh at that fact that
your weak ass got riped
Here's a tip just simply back up
cuz every time you open your mouth you get fucked up
So sick I'm trowen up somethin tight every verse
And sticken fags like you in a hurst

OliverClohsoff 02-11-04 04:43 PM

First of all chase u needs to stop bitin off 8mile
Slap u all da way back to egypt and have u swimming da nile
Ill slit open ur wrist and choke you with ur own veins
and just like ur career dat post was all down da drain
No one gives a fuck about wat you have to say
Ill stab ur ass up but still have a Great day :)

Chase 02-11-04 04:48 PM

Just cuz i'm from the D don't mean i rep 8 mile
But while we're the subject Joy Road is killen 7 mile
On the other hand your about as scary as a chucky doll
I'll rip your face in two or put you to sleep on the green mile
better eat your spinach, cuz unless your pop pie your weak ass is finshed
Actually it wouldn't matter if you were him or bam bam
I don't tune in to toons who keep a dick in thier hand
And one in they mouth boys who dress like like girls
For freaks down south

Unwritten Hazard 02-11-04 04:54 PM

freaks from the south? you sound weak in the mouth...///
you spit and i barely speak, then your out///
both your parents were gay, then they spawned FAGlings///
out pop two bad things, chase and renegade, 2 born drag-queens///
WTF am i saying? im not trying, in all honesty///
imma save my real shit for when a real MC disses on me

Chase 02-11-04 05:02 PM

Wha ?
That was most jiberish I have ever read
I can tell your talking out the side of your neck and not usen your head
Go to bed before I put your ass in the street
A day on the sun couldn't compare to this heat
Don't speek, cuz I know your hurt
I can see you skulls leaken thing I guess the 38s do work


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