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DaTrusHurtz 07-14-05 09:03 PM

Thanks Mim, yeah once I saw he got banned on B-Boys and who it was by I knew I had him beat haha. Unfortunately no such easy personals exist on Spitacular :(

N.Tavarez 07-15-05 08:17 AM

shit if thats him in his avy

u can make a punch on how ugly his ass is

looking like he blow kisses at the camera

i signed for 1-2 over there......if theres no personals than basically its easy to pre write wordplay soooo, it seems easier to do wordplay than a good personal, i think ill be aiight

DaTrusHurtz 07-15-05 09:53 AM

Yeah I'll prolly do a pic diss, I just need something really witty.... yeah like blowing a kiss, but gotta be even more. I'll take suggestions haha

N.Tavarez 07-15-05 10:14 AM

shit i'd love to help you
i've been viewing all of those top 5 people you gave me
and i really think they are overratted self glorifyers
i wouldnt battle them cuz their DR is UNBELIEVABLE
i signed for 1-2 punch, lets see if they take me.......

but def do one on his pic, if i get i good idea i'll give it to you

DaTrusHurtz 07-15-05 10:22 AM

Hmm, that's weird, I rarely see those 5 I mentioned use self-glory. Occasionally they'll get away with it, but not often. I think you're just not used to their style.. it's a little different than here like I said.

Only things I've thought of is his title is "Da Motherfuckin Champ"... and my name is Da... and this battle is for a champ...so I'm thinking I could do something off that, but prolly wouldn't be good enough. His pic seems to have a lot to diss, I dunno, will just take some thinking, thx

N.Tavarez 07-15-05 10:38 AM

use "da" in the set up line for his champ title
then use his pic as the punch.........u right it gotta be real good though

MiSk 07-15-05 10:47 AM

^^^^ only time ya verses make sense is when ya bang yur head on the keyboard...
just an idea... playing off his sig

DaTrusHurtz 07-15-05 11:01 AM

Yeah thanks for the try, but I don't think that's enough.. a little too simplistic, but yeah maybe something good could be made outta his sig if you applied a cliche to it.

Maybe here's a thought....like hot mentioned it looks like he wants to kiss me.. so I could put that in the setup and say I'm playing hard to get or something then in the punchline be like

Go away ho, or I'll put a seal to ya lips like the one ya jacked from the zoo

N.Tavarez 07-15-05 11:10 AM

like the zoo concept....re word it to a punch and add a set up

Daubs 07-15-05 11:19 AM

lol at gettin rvs help :cool:

DaTrusHurtz 07-15-05 11:24 AM

Who ya tryin' to kiss in ya pic? Stop, cause the girls ya pursue
Always put a seal to ya lips like the one ya jacked from the zoo

Maybe something like that? I think it could still be better...hmmm

DaTrusHurtz 07-15-05 11:24 AM

hahaha, shut up Daubs :laugh:

Daubs 07-15-05 11:24 AM

I like it, decent concept.

N.Tavarez 07-15-05 11:27 AM

HE'S UP FOR HEAVYWEIGHT
decent wont cut it
but i like it too

how long u got to drop it?
might be able to add more to it

DaTrusHurtz 07-15-05 11:28 AM

Yeah I like it too, but I don't know if it's enough... prolly not assuming he tries

It's due at midnight just like around here so I got plenty of time though I have actually a total of 28 lines due tonight so I can't spend like hours on this lol


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