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noname 10-01-05 11:06 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Barz&Penstripes
lol

Unfold the sign its sure to be ur photograph
Ur right my dick itch from havin a hold of ur ass
See u turned some regular post shit to craziness
I'll have a good nite rest laughin after bein stalked -- crazy bitch
But its all love tho cause idiots need love too
Go head Mister 4000 plus with them internet blues


Peace Kid


I can sleep well now...cos readin ur shit made me bored 'n sagged
& ur dick on my ass?.....again.....you admit that your a fag?
must wanna play tag..or better yet...get a freind
cos like the 4 verses you spit before,it's whack....again..?
said peace once more..are trying to say goodbye..or are u a hippie?
I'm going with the 2nd one...cos you must be high..think u'd rip me

basement 10-03-05 01:03 AM

wtf is all them post for when u cant even spit a verse
jus u posting bullshit like that makes this site curssed
a text record of 25-6 cuz u jus battle newbies and fags
ur punches better put away or thrown out in trash bags
a natural killa cuz every time someone reads ur verse they die
after one of ur lines , tears came down from my left eye
its a shame that they even let wack mc's like u here
but now that basement has entered u sure to fry

PreZidict 10-03-05 08:42 AM


this clowns rappin skills lack, never countin them stacks
if u threw basement sense...he wouldnt know he 2 act!
all ya flows make us laugh, lmao so dont get all gassed
ya girl let u doggystyle a cow.......since u luv 2 her-ass!

Pro. 10-03-05 10:33 AM

Livin proof?...What!,Yeah of a nigga that cant rap well.
You a hidin spoof...lines More ass than tha pictures in Black~tail.
This is sorta like black mail...Cuz I wanna see my Son(sun) Rise.
But this cats frail...He spits pussy,cuz even his pearl tounge tied!
It said 6 lines min...
Fuck it...Cuz tha only time ur iLL is when you put ur sick time in.
Those lines are pitifull...I dunno if ur launchin or not!
Cuz I seen better punches...like when workers are punchin tha clock!

*Punches out*

noname 10-03-05 07:33 PM

be tappin eyes...cos str8 up...ur rapping pride's bout to be slit
relating son to sun?...WOW...how played out is that shit.
& try 'n get ya mouth on a clit,faggot,sukin dick's ur way to win it big
cos wat str8 man puts a pic of jay-z puckering his lips.....in they sig?!?!(fag!)
ur faker than a wig....'n spittin like a bitch shows ya panties still up in crunches
'n only thing I see worse than ur spellin...is the wit 'n skill of ya punches
only reason I switched sides is cos i got tired of constantly hurtin ya crew
'n ur own avatar tells me............that rap ain't the only thing working for you

shake-spear 10-04-05 04:50 PM

dissin this guy is pointless leave his head spinnin like coinflips.
on some hemroid shit, u a pain in my ass, and this verse is the ointment.
matter of fact ur naturally wack as for me im sick as shit.
u got it backwards u aint a 'killa u just gave my dick 'allik(a lick).
my bars'll rape ya, im positive only negative numbers could rate cha.
he da one thats droppin trash, but im the one destroyin natur.

noname 10-04-05 05:02 PM

check it,I ain't even using weapons..but i'm still bombing this cunt 'n
look at ur avy...how u gon retire
............when you neva accomplished anything?
wit 15 wins...i wonder why?...cos really.,,,ur punches never go through
and you quoting mad people in ya sig....but no-one ever qouting you..!
it's true...ya album'd just get overlooked,won't get burned & wont sell
& look at ur last bar...maybe I'd take ya serious if ya learned to just spell

shake-spear 10-04-05 05:35 PM

"cunt'n - anything", ill learn how to spell when u learn how to rhyme.
its like alchohal to shape-ups im str8 burnin ya lines.
u need to shape-up and work on ya sloppy flow.
got him froze like popsicles.....
....cause he dont wanna go down that rocky road'.
u gettin creamed' i mean u aint stand a chance at all.
u couldnt take out one dude how u "came to kill us all"
dis guy hatin on my sig mad cause i aint quotin u.
and if anyone thought u was nice u would be quotin too.
but nope theres no hope for u.
case closed now get out diss thread' and go deep throat a crew.

noname 10-04-05 05:49 PM

shit flows...maybe ya just need to learn to ACCENT rhyme like a man
cos only cats who think cunt-n & anything don't rhyme
..........are afgans.....
u holdin no weight like sand....just another one 'em whores tryna rhyme
'n it's obvious you've been offended
.....i mean...why else would you make more than 6 lines?
cos I ain't going more than the minimum just for your whack-ass..herb
'n ya right..I never killed a dude
...........but i killed a woman,in you, wit that last verse

shake-spear 10-05-05 11:49 AM

u like foreign spices, no ones ever heard of this herb.
how u killin women? when u lucky if u murder a verse.
this herb is the worst.....
......this boob wouldnt be hard if he was rubbin on his tits.
and he madd i can key a quick eight, when he be strugglin for six.
now stop huggin on my dick, im hurtin this 'square like i 'beat-boxed.
and if 'sand dont hold weight' i guess its true dis dude a be-ach. (BI-ATCH)

noname 10-05-05 12:00 PM

while u rubbin ya tongue on dicks..trust me..I just suk 'n clench on clits
& how's foreign spices unheard
.........................................when you just fukin mentioned it?
who u feel u got tension with?...shit..u nutin but a fag to get laced up 'n cocked
and it's ain't 'bout struggling
...................................it's 'bout knowin who's a waste 'n who's not
& trust me...i know you spend all night writing up on that verse,just for me
and sad thing is.....that shit ain't even that good to even hurt,bust,or bleed

shake-spear 10-05-05 12:43 PM

he keep critiqing my verse, u gettin mad at how many men-sonned u.
and no one heard of a this fag killa, but still somone mentioned u.
Quote:
Originally Posted by K.S.
and fucka natural killa to

cuz i've whored ure ass 5-0 to, and KO'ed u on two of ure other accounts to


every verse u spit u gettin wacker and wacker give it up kid god damn.
act like he dont care, 'dick u not hard, the reason u dont 'give a fuck's cause u cant.
distract ya then blind side ya have u prayin like he a natural pastors.
cause this kid 'blowin me like katrina, so im leavin him a natural disaster.

MurDah 10-05-05 12:51 PM

I Got a couple of bitch'es thats thifes, you snitching to de's?
you'll get a full combo to the jaw like a meal from mc'kie-d'es
you aint ready for a fraud, yet you asking me to write u'r verse
whats worse, a lame with no skills, or a male with a purse
either way you won the crown, someone dragg-them dress'es
im on top, you'll get pop'ed and splat when recived like pimple-message
simple-lesson that carry with you for life i call scar's
plus a 6 figuer shape, the only time you actully saw a STAR.... mother fucker

noname 10-05-05 02:29 PM

blah-blah...bitch...none of the shit you spit is even true
Fraud...you whack..so i ain't even gon bother wit you
you suck cock...fukin faggot..you mad gay...fuk you
cos if you even try to deny it...guess wat..it not true
and i ain't even spendin an ounze of effort on u..u suck
and guess wat...u can reply to this if ya want...but i don't give a fuck

(I did not bother with you Fraud :thumbup: )

Quote:
Originally Posted by shake-spear
he keep critiqing my verse, u gettin mad at how many men-sonned u.
and no one heard of a this fag killa, but still somone mentioned u.


every verse u spit u gettin wacker and wacker give it up kid god damn.
act like he dont care, 'dick u not hard, the reason u dont 'give a fuck's cause u cant.
distract ya then blind side ya have u prayin like he a natural pastors.
cause this kid 'blowin me like katrina, so im leavin him a natural disaster.


talking about members who sonned me..when my rec. got wins?
'n why the FUCK u bringing up Solo...when the fact is...your'e not him?
or it's a hot sin...cos maybe he sucks ya dick 'n your just paying him back
And wtf at this....?
Quote:
Originally Posted by shake-spear
'dick u not hard

.................shit^^..only a faggot'd be complainin bout that
ur whack,so it's no wonder my style's rubbin off on u...like u been abused in cages
cos look...ya using a katrina line on me......when it's been used for ages

shake-spear 10-05-05 02:54 PM

this fag be spittin trash more and more if u ask me.
i quote then u qoute...aww he wanna be jus like his daddy.
but damn u follow my every move doin everything i do.
i never said i was solo........but i will sololy shit on u.
in this cypha im 'defeetin this dick' like 'groin kicks'.
and like i said the first time merkin u would be pointless.
this shits a waist of my time u wont win, u unknown fuck.
and i aint even trien, im jus spittin to get my post up.

noname 10-05-05 03:05 PM

shit..makes me wonder..cos it feels like I'm only staying to pain queers
I said I wasn't even trying bak then...you end up sayin the same here
ur flames clear..ur done..get back to reality cos you need some help
I'ma WAIST of ur time?...nigga..keep your sick fantasies to yaself
'n don't bother to share the wealth..no one wants it..ur robbin blue
all the shit u posted..i already said
..............& you talkin 'bout me tryna copy you?

MurDah 10-05-05 06:43 PM

you didnt waste no time guess i have to, how lovely
since you the dumb mother fucker thats right above me
shit on you? i rather hold-it till it explods my stomuch
use a bit of effort?, if i did you're computer I.P would run from it
face it fag, youre style like a tast-less-star-burst you lost ya flavor
cuz like a pussy who get time, U is bound to leave on good-behavior
so start to pucker-up and slap on lip-gloss
cuz you'll be the bull they ryde when u getting ya hip-toss
so after you done with them 10-boy's
its gonna be harder to sit then a case of hemorides
mother fucker

noname 10-06-05 05:04 PM

get ur tongue roasted 'n have ya taste buds tastin the cultries
& shit..go to topicals cos ya punches are almost as basic as ya multis
it's all a tease..pick on newbs bitin my style..but comin off bad still
and your NOT dope..cos i'll punch ya chest and have u coughin advils
got ya cab filled 'n can tell ya diggin my style...way u rubbin on it
'n i'll take ya ass serious once you tell me what a STOMUCH is

Pro. 10-07-05 11:34 AM

What tha fuck r you talkin bout...Really!,your rhymes dont make sense.
Your str8 dense...usin"tongue roasted " as a line of defense?
And Coughin advils?..Really how played is that!
Let me relay it back...
Cant say he's wack..juss a Cheater..Im displayin tha facts.
You aint a respectable emcee...me Im forever chosin ga~llant.
...cuz tha only Impact you made was when ur usin ah font!

Theory 10-07-05 02:00 PM

^^ You suck... there, hows that for a diss

Pro. 10-07-05 03:27 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Theory
^^ You suck... there, hows that for a diss



^must be N.K.'s alias name...STop spamming!

noname 10-07-05 05:28 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by ColdSTEEL
What tha fuck r you talkin bout...Really!,your rhymes dont make sense.
Your str8 dense...usin"tongue roasted " as a line of defense?
And Coughin advils?..Really how played is that!
Let me relay it back...
Cant say he's wack..juss a Cheater..Im displayin tha facts.
You aint a respectable emcee...me Im forever chosin ga~llant.
...cuz tha only Impact you made was when ur usin ah font!


must think life's good to you..shit..cos i'm sure nutin go-wrong to this faggot
only people sayin my rhymes don't make sense
........belong in stray jackets.......
tellin me my advil line is played?..gimme a link to where it's been done before
ooh..that;s right..ya lost..cos u a biter..and i got the proof to run this chord
cos I think this qoute is best to finish the 6 lines and rearrange this cunt
Quote:
Originally Posted by R-Rated
Cause You Couldn't Make An Impact With Your Verse If You Changed The Font..


BITER!!!!!!!!
http://community.rapverse.com/showp...990&postcount=5

MurDah 10-08-05 01:03 PM

^^ whos a biter?, who cares since ya flow still biting the dust
right in the lust of the game, you should change-names.........................................
2 a noun... cuz no-one gives a FUCK
cuz you suck and thats pure facts,
if words was liqued, ya flow i'll make my mouth crack *dry-flow*
you got a couple of win due to all no-shows plus herbs,
try'ed bulling the vets, but only got trash like can on the curve
thought you was the man, but ya punchline got fillers
dog's the high-light of your career,
was making an old fool heart give-up, so now he claim to be a natrual-killer..... EZ!!

Theory 10-08-05 01:44 PM

^^ you FUCKING suck as well. damn herb infested forum

noname 10-08-05 03:09 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Theory
^^ you FUCKING suck as well. damn herb infested forum



I don't see you eva posting anything in the cyphers....

and my verse may suck...becuz I don't try...why?
BECAUSE IN CASE YOU DON'T KNOW...IT'S THE CYPHER!!
IT'S NOT A BATTLE...BUT A CYPHER.

Pro. 10-08-05 05:23 PM

*hah!*




edit free post.

MurDah 10-10-05 12:26 PM

^^WHAT I CAN SAY IS, YOU SUCK
N it sad as hell when,... you cant say shit since ya spot blew-up
thought he was a cocky nigga didnt think he was a fighter
NK proved me right, all he is, IS A FUCKING BITER
why waste-time on you, when youre place beneth-me
you fake, you biter, you snake.......... now thats what beef-be
you aint a killah........ i'll chop the fingger of this trigger-clown
why spit agenist you?, if my gun spit bigger-sound
then you claim you is ~TriggaTown's Executioner~
i'll stop-cock-N pop u, since ya ex-said i was-cute-to-ya... FUCKING FAG

im bored

Pro. 10-10-05 08:35 PM

What?....

Your wack..With those played punches forced after me.
Its a catastrophy...
Cuz I can hit you wit more magazines than a source Factory.
Your lines drag...no victory,cuz defeat is due.
Callin me ah Fag?...when ur bars arent strong enough ta beef wit Q!
Imma Lame?...HOld UP!,Check his record.
Oh!..I forgot he hid it,BITCH!,"Thats why nobody respects her."
BOred!
Yep,Ur raps are getting rewarded with yawns..
plus tha fact that You've been shit on more times than a portable john.

Battle?...An I dont No~Show.

Hah!

MurDah 10-10-05 11:11 PM

^^ set it up then N stop talkin
or listen to da beat ME N ya girl makes thats not for walk-mans
everyone knows i'll blast till ya duck'in low low
or have blood water-falls splashin up N down like a tomato lo-go
whoever said you was hot must of been dieing for you to leave
in a rush, cuz ya flow stink N you waste'in my time to breath
coldsteel?, more like a cold-meal thats been left outside
for animal to get, N you bite's so open your mouth-wide HAHA!!

fuck outta here

MexicanGuy89 10-12-05 12:11 AM

Ya say you Fraud, You Is,
Ya think ya hard, Fucking Diss,
To all the niggas out there trying to make it,
You put on a hard ass mask, act, but fake it,
Look at the shit at the bottom of ya diss, Hearts?, You make it?,
Don't put on a fag mask, But you play it,
Play it good too, That's my opinion, You faggot, Ya can't rhyme,
Try something better to do and not waste ya time,
On faggot shit like making drawings out of symbols and letters,
Ya should use ya time to make those weak ass rhymes better,
Fuck outta here, You said it ya self, Leave, Blah Blah Blah!,
My last line is as stupid as ya last one with the Ha Ha Ha,
Why you laughing, For what, Ain't nothing funny,
Stop fucking niggas in the ass for ya catch AIDS, Get colds and get ya nose runny,

Terumoto 10-12-05 05:03 AM

Just stop it kid. cos what your verse promises
you couldnt possibly deliver, you talk like you're on top of shit
and that type a talk is just a lotta shit.
You should spit from the heart... so ill stuff ya mic down ya asophygus
Your punches and bars are overused, like ya commas is
Try spitting modern shit, original lyrical masterpieces
kind of like mine. more pivotal than before and after jesus
Everytime I drop it causes mass change
evolution of had ways, but your shit just causes mass pain
It was a struggle to read the first line, let alone to reach the last phrase
You're a damn shame. a shame lyrically,
probably a shame physically, and worst of all,
you're a shame to the rap industry.

Meta.Phor.T.Cal 10-12-05 06:28 AM

Dude Whaddup? U Soundin Like A Pissed Off 50 Cent...
Ima Have Ur Shit All Over Da Sidewalk, Like U Forgot 2 Pay Da Rent.
I'll Spray At Lent...So Its Ur Life That I'm ''Givin Up''
Cos Ur Like Dentists, U Aint Neva Spittin Without A Cup...
Ya Lucky If I Dont Fuck U Up & Even Luckier If Ur Rhymez Prevail
Stuff Ya Punches In A Zip Lock & Somehow...They Still Remain Stale!
Im Generous, Let Ya Live 2 Tell Da Tale Of This Yung Black Male
& If Ya Skins Dark, After This Beatin...Ur Gon' Be Left Like Dandruff..Lookin ALL PALE
Da Mis-Match Mulites Fail, Ya Jus Mixin Words Together...
Now Ur Vacatin Da Premises..Cos Im Comin Down On U Like Florida Weather

MurDah 10-12-05 10:35 AM

you the scum of the earth the trash of the block
the fag with a purse that ask for the cock
why ask if you hot? you not so stop it dog
cuz you aint never seen a fog made of gun-shot-dog
LOOK, rat ta ta dont you know you're wack wack wack
skills lack lack lack, u'r like a legless man trying to run a track
i'll chip ya finger nails off with shotgun sheels
and chop ya 2 pieces an send ya remains throu mail-box
i shall not, think another pussy above me would go undetected
but who notice him?, like a kid in a home who gets negelected
you like spoiled milk, ya teast nasty when i swallow ya flow
i'll brake ya nostroals then give you a line to BLOW
how many-time has i got to flow, to let ya little me knows
i aint the one, and you aint the king, so dont get touched like big-boob's in the club
you and me, shit.....im in a good mode you lucky
so all i gotta say is why try to pluck me?, so fuck you for trying to fuck me FAG!

Adrenaline 10-12-05 01:22 PM

dats da wackest shit I ever heard u puerto rican bitch
prolly had his head on a cock when he was writin dat shit
fuckin fraud talkin bout dogs when he a son of one
Ad numba one on any track just kill dis fag for fun
RUN! like ghostface for I blow ya face n leave ya wit no face
u a no ace, I'll break ya teeth n kick ya down u an old case...

noname 10-12-05 04:20 PM

u just a student in the game when i'm the one wrecking the class
your lower than 2nd to last...how's you a legend when ur record is ass..?
i'll smack ur head pass.....the joint and make ya tooth pluck in 2
luck+you?..HA!...you've been here a yr...'n still..who the fuk are you.?
cluckin crews..?,but u been rejected countless times..so u come back for more pain..?
nigga,face it..ya BORE-AING!!...I'll see more "adrenaline" at PGA tour games

MurDah 10-13-05 12:47 PM

you a vet? so where ya dogs at?
turn back, cuz you cant see me like u in a foog-traped
so dont get ya jaw-crack, just for talking slick
you'll get buried alive where i cant hear you talk-shit

LOOK MAN,
you'll get chulk'ed quick, outline where i sparked
and have family and friends cryin at the park
drunk off flow how many basterds want it?
im like a natrual killah when i dispurst words from brains
and have niggas on the look out like them nyc treat on trains
LOOK MAN,
you the boss? fuck ya workers take one of them danm loses
or get hit with more holes in the front of ya air-forces
why you act'in stupid -for?, you know who caused it
making you fag like NK leak like open faucet
drop'in bullets in ya pocket like a deposit
and even if you had a vest 2 try N stop it,
you would take flight like a science-rocket
N with toss white-flag, those are sign's to know i got it on LOCK-KID.... CHEA!!!!!!!

what you want?

Young_law 10-13-05 12:51 PM

damn i was just about 2 diss u until i saw u diss NK

MurDah 10-13-05 01:00 PM

dont back-down clown, take it like a man
so what i diss N.K, cuz if "shit had a face" you'll be THAT-NIGGA
you wack as fuck, and ya only fuck comes after you whack
come gather youre facts, befor i gather them gats
and have the paramedics try to gather you're FAT
u'll like marshell mathers, geting slap till youre pale
and the only rock's you push is cleanin ya drive-way of hail CHEA!!!!

X-tortion 10-13-05 01:14 PM

The fact you don't diss, rock-solid as his sig..That nigga know he's-doomed
Everyone on this earth..buy majority..chews you up like grocery-food
Each crew questions ya loyalty..like watchin confidantes-for-treason
Locked in chains is your city..someone get amistad some freedom
I'm certain-to-smoke ya black-feats..'cause you're a personal-joke
Tryin to track-me..my knife's the obstacles..that hurdles-ya-throat
You as a burglar-is-hoax..only thing stolen..ya girl when I take-her
& I'm not talkin speedvision..when I say you birth a drag-racer

riddlemethat 10-13-05 02:17 PM

Big talk bout sig thoughts got you confused an extorted wiv remorse././
Imported my style may have took a while but u felt the full force././
Driven off course by the enigmatic thoughts puzzlin ya brain././
I don't spit to entertain, but my sense of humour helps, cos styles ur lame././
Ur verses are tame, like edited commercial rap tracks from mainstreem././
Slow kinda rapper whats wiv all the dots? Blatant on ur face like acne spots././
Pre-adolescent fool go to school an learn how to rhyme before you step to this././
For fuck sake, next time I see a hyphen I'll be back again to slew an diss././


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