Kesse vs Young Mix
 

Battle Rules:

6 - 16 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 02-04-05 at 08:26 PM

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Kesse has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-01-05 08:27 PM.

Young Mix has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-01-05 08:28 PM.

Fa you,I dont need a nine cause my mac ten piece good
On a mic,you'll get lyrically cracked,call me da rap Glenn Eastwood
Ill stuff yo rhymes all in yo socks while you-all in some cocks-
usin a telephone is da only way yo bitch ass-callin da shots-
Im next ta be da best emcee,you aint even next at me
you'll get ko'ed so fast,you'll be seein black and white like shirts on a referee
Fuck a dumbass battle,Im-choosin ta beef on ya-
cause yo punches'll miss terribly like Shaq-shootin a three pointer-
Ima beast lik Priest Holmes,you keep spittin dem weak poems
Ima wreck you and straight disconnect you like cheap phones
On a mic,you couldnt earn a cent like learnin shit in a tournament
Ill burn ya quick cause yo wackness is like a tattoo,its permanent
I spit hot fire,da shit dat'll put you-in-a-boil
so hot,da only way you protected is if ya wrapped in aluminum foil
It seems like every wack line ya heard,Kesse,dis boy owns dat
and you battlin me,you'll see more ko's than Roy Jones got

Young Mix

Fa you,I dont need a nine cause my mac ten piece good
On a mic,you'll get lyrically cracked,call me da rap Glen Eastwood
Ill stuff yo rhymes all in ya socks while you all in da cocks
usin a telephone is da only way yo bitch ass callin da shots
Im next ta be da best emcee,you aint even next ta me
you'll get ko'ed so fast,you'll be seein black and white like shirts on a referee
Fuck a dumbass battle,Im choosin ta beef on ya
cause yo punches'll miss terribly like Shaq shootin a three pointer
Ima beast like Priest Holmes,you keep spittin dem weak poems
Ima wreck you and straight disconnect you like cheap phones
On a mic,you couldnt earn a cent like learnin shit in a tournament
Ill burn ya quick cause yo wackness is like a tattoo,its permanent
I spit hot fire,da shit dat'll put you in a boil
da only way to protect ya is wrappin you in aluminum foil
Why would you even spit dat,nigga,yo shit wack
cause when da screen said" Welcome ta Rapverse"you shouldve clicked back

Young Mix

looks like time to up the prestige, this bitch is under lyrical siege
but i ain't gunna kill ya, just have you respond with "my liege"
no point in even trying, you're just another young chump
you'll never exist in this world, just like wheel-chair high jump
you spit alot of junk, im thinking you must be magnetic
your record is truly pathetic, and your rhymes are synthetic
you come with punches so frail, they dont even phase me
even offending the snails, they're calling you lazy,
cause your drop is trash, like your pimp-stash, all-round abysmal
but dont worry, along with the loss, you just got a free batptismal
i'll put you to end, leaving you to realize that your nothing but pretend
cause this is my playground, and defeat is your new best friend

Voted For: Young Mix

Kesse
structure is pretty good.. flow is also pretty good.. you had a few multis.. you attempted wordplay, but most of it didnt come out good enough.. a few, at best of ur punches connected.. no good personals..

Young Mix
structure is pretty inconsistent.. flow is still pretty good though.. u had a few multis.. wordplay is alright.. a few of ur punches connected.. no good personals..

Overall
Kesse had the better structure.. both had a good flow and a few multis.. neither had good personals.. Young Mix had the better wordplay and more connecting punches.. so basing off of that.. Young Mix gets my vote..

VOTE - YOUNG MIX

Voted For: Kesse

Weak Battle From Both Ends But Im Goin With Kesse On This One.Young Lost It When He Mentioned Using A Gun And Then Saying Glen Eastwood Instead Of Clint Eastwood.Coulda Atleast Gotten The Name Right.Not Many Credible Lines But Ill Give Daps To Kesse for The Wheel Chair Line.I Found That Kinda Creative But Amusing.

^ Why do you keep following me and voting against the person i vote for?

Vote on other battles then me asshole.

Voted For: Kesse

ok both basically had the same flow and struture as well as vocab also equal but i think young mix had better flow to his shit as well as slightly better punches n the beggining but got bad towards the end while kesse stayed with decentpunches all the way through therefore having a harder hitting effect on his oppenant and getting my vote

This was feedback posted for Kesse
 

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Voted For: Young Mix

dis was a decent battle but young just killed dis cat he had harder punches and a few nice meta's his structure was nice and he had a decent vocab with some nice multi's kesse had a decent verse too but he didnt match the skills of young kesse had a few nice punches and multi's but he just couldnt stand up to what was ahead of him dats my vote take it or leave it

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Voted For: Kesse

<center>this battle gives a new meaning to newbies x2
kesse only won this cuz of punches
structure was good
punches were better than young mix's
personals none

young mix
punches were aiight but were not good enuff
was good but some lines were overstrectched
personals were good
multiz were there and they connected</center>

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Voted For: Young Mix

this battle is a wrap 4 real woo but here's my view of it:
opener: yun mix
vocab: both
multis: both
structure: kesse
punches: yun mix
personals: yun mix
closer: both
yun mix won my vote 4 the simple fact he wrote more lines then kesse did & hit him wit more lyrical punches thru out the battle the whole time
make sure 2 return the favor

Voted For: Kesse

Kesse - Good flow, nice structure, some solid punches in there. You can work on better wordplay though. Your vocabulary was great. Pretty good drop. 7/10

Young Mix - Wasn't really feeling it to much. It seemed like a basic old played verse. You could just tell what your punches were going to be after read the first line. The rhymes were basic and all. Just didn't come as hard as Kesse did. 5.5/10

Vote: Kesse