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••••Dice•••• vs Zeus'
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10 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 200 Check in by: 02-23-05 at 01:48 AM Must drop verse in 15 minutes after check in. |
Zeus' has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-23-05 01:30 AM.
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Opener Name=Dice? This Kid's Nothing He's Barely Bigger Then Rice He Could Be Nelly's From Pimp Juice And Still Wouldn't Be Nice Body He's On A Review Mirror, Coz Defeat Is Closer Then They Apear The Only Way He'll Get More Wins Is A No Show By Will A Peer He Tryed To Scare Me By Making A Name Like Cali's D-Iced(Dissed) But He Dissed Himself, By Thinking He Was Twice As Nice Your Elevation Is Like Parallel, So Your Provide Your Humiliation Blurred With Smoke You Couldnt See Defeat If Troop's Your Affiliation Closer This Kid's Shaking Like He Was The Star In A Jello Commercial Step Up Or Step Out, Now I'm Abusing You With Ya Verbals *C.A.L.I's Old Name (D-Iced=Dissed) *Will A Peer Always Do No Shows *He Was In A Crew Verbal Reformatory |
••••Dice•••• has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-23-05 01:45 AM.
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TYPE YOUR WHOLE VERSE LIKE THIS, ONLY WAY YA GOT KEY’S ON LOCK.
Tried to drop a hard-bar so he started write’n his verse up on the cock, But pack’n 2 inches get’s you bout 1 sentence so he settled or another loss, Yes sir, your in desperate need of elevation, someone call Dr. Spock Fake and played, couldn’t get your nut’s off, if ya last name was planters, Last time I saw shit like that on paper, MF I was in pampers! My post’s produce a finer thread that mean’s I’m better attired, just better retire Cause your “battle’s” should come equipped with rattle’s and pacifiers Ya edible like cookies ya crumble-son, in text, I’m incredibility cumbersome So who’s next? I got this one wrapped up like fuck’n cumber-bun Cumbersome- Difficult to handle because of weight or bulk. |
Check the registration date on your big hommie D-Iced, mine was before, way before.
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He Had D-Ice Under His Name On Member Title Way Long Before You Kid
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Lmao... no he didn't. I joined Sept 2004 He joined a few days before that, Empire didnt' have that until the end of October.
Get your facts straight. |
This was feedback posted for Zeus'
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Voted For: Zeus'
this was an 1-sided battle all the way out: opener: zeus' vocab: zeus' structure: zeus' multis: zeus' closer: zeus' zeus' hit wit much harder punches thru out this battle & came harder in his verse; dice u need 2 elevate in ur rhymes & work on wordplay make sure 2 return the favor Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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One sided my ass, your next.
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Voted For: ••••Dice••••
dice took this shit with ease better mettas better everything a blow out in all categories zeus your lines failed to connect your opener was weak and your vocab was basic you rhymed dice nice and rice come on man where is the compexity in that return the fav honest vote on my battle vs aurora Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
^Un-Explained Vote-No Favor Returned Man
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Voted For: ••••Dice••••
honestly i think dice took this battle....he had more creativity with his punches.....i like your 4th bar..it was pretty good..... zeus you should try batteling with more stuff directly to him instead of using other people names and experiences to compare to him....it would be probably help you out a little more.....1 |
Thanks for that vote, I'm pretty sure i ripped this one, up'n.
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dice return da favor H......http://community.rapverse.com/showb...002446&posted=1
me vs. mista authentiq 1-1 |
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