YoungSoulja vs Ill.Bill
 

Battle Rules:

6 - 8 lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 12-21-04 at 08:55 PM

Must drop verse in 15 minutes after check in.

Ill.Bill has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-21-04 07:56 PM.

YoungSoulja has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-21-04 07:58 PM.

well homie,im really glad you acceptted dis battle and didnt duck it/
actually im feelin pity on you cuz you didnt duck dis/
ill bill,is wat dae call you i presume/
i know you shy,dats why you left off da K,mr.Killbill/
is wat im here to do,wit mah double-bladed lyrical sword/
call me uma thurman,"HOMIE" cuz im here to finish you like before/
and as i finish dia verse dat will be leavin you buried/
go ahead Chilled bill,cuz you know i just popped you like mah
girls cherries/
holla back

explainations,"HOMIE",its becuz he didnt want me to call
him dat,and i think dats it

good drop homie you made me laugh haha........
........................... :laugh:

Voted For: Ill.Bill

Ill Lynch Solja On A Tree, & Pierce Thru His Plastic Armour.
I Mean Your Lyrical Barracks, Is Just A Wackness Harbour.
decent
Im Playin On Ya Name, Punchs'll Leave Ya Fuckin' Shell Shocked.
Impale A Stars & Stripes Flagpole In Ya Sinus, That'll Leave Ya Dome Rocked.
decent
Run Outta Clips Soulja? Well Drop The Act & Gimme' Fifty!
Your Shootin' Blanks Dipshit, Thats Why They Fucking Missed-Me.
……okay

well homie,im really glad you acceptted dis battle and didnt duck it/
actually im feelin pity on you cuz you didnt duck dis/
not feelin it
ill bill,is wat dae call you i presume/
i know you shy,dats why you left off da K,mr.Killbill/
nah
is wat im here to do,wit mah double-bladed lyrical sword/
call me uma thurman,"HOMIE" cuz im here to finish you like before/
ok…
and as i finish dia verse dat will be leavin you buried/
go ahead Chilled bill,cuz you know i just popped you like mah
girls cherries/
nope


Bill took this one…punches were harder
And had a better structure with it too…

Yes, Lets Get Some More Votes In.

Voted For: Ill.Bill

YoungSoulja – iight spit man, flow wasn’t that hot.. and you coulda same harder with the punches.

Best Line - ill bill,is wat dae call you i presume/
i know you shy,dats why you left off da K,mr.Killbill/

Worst Line - and as i finish dia verse dat will be leavin you buried/
go ahead Chilled bill,cuz you know i just popped you like mah
girls cherries/

Ill.Bill – Good solid verse, flow was on.. and you had some good punches in that verse.

Best Line - Run Outta Clips Soulja? Well Drop The Act & Gimme' Fifty!
Your Shootin' Blanks Dipshit, Thats Why They Fucking Missed-Me.

Worst Line - Ill Lynch Solja On A Tree, & Pierce Thru His Plastic Armour.
I Mean Your Lyrical Barracks, Is Just A Wackness Harbour.

OVERALL – this battle wasn’t to bad but I gotta give my vote to Ill.Bill. I feel he came harder with the punches and flow. Young you need to work on your bars to make em flow better and you more creativity in your punches.

Vote – Ill.Bill

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This was feedback posted for YoungSoulja
 

nice drop YoungSoulja..I wish I could vote but chu in my crew

vote yall help me out help put dis cat
down.........................................
.................................................. ........help me help you

Voted For: Ill.Bill

aight your first two lines were weak, long bars ending with duck it n duck dis, which was wack, then u rhyme presume with kill bill, the punch was wack., rest was horrible, pop u like my girl's cherries, thats some 89-90s rhymes.

Mask was better with the flow and punches, matter fact i think he killed him with the first bar.

Ill Lynch Solja On A Tree, & Pierce Thru His Plastic Armour.
I Mean Your Lyrical Barracks, Is Just A Wackness Harbour.

come on i dont need to break this down anymore i think its fairly obvious to see who won this match

Voted For: Ill.Bill

Boo@this shit. Mask won because he didn't suck as badly as YS did but he sucked badly no doubt. Both need to elevate on everything. Read the tutorials and read more vet battles and get an idea of what a punch actually is. Diss your opponent, don't just talk shit. lol. Mask, stop being self-conscious of you verse and keep it regular font and strcuture. and LMAO@ people not getting you punches. There wasn't any complexity in that shit yo. ;)

v-Mask

Voted For: Ill.Bill

yo dwag u got this shit on lock ya ripped the bitch im high as a mutha fucka so this is the best i could do
mask or ill bill what ever u got em him the complex rhymes and punches