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M&rk 01-06-10 03:45 PM

Drop the World- Mark Schafer Original Remake
 
Drop the World- Mark Schafer Original Remake
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http://www.jamglue.com/mixes/141756...Original-Remake

and a zshare link for it
Drop The World remix- Mark Schafer aka Big Picture.mp3 - 3.43MB

M&rk 01-11-10 07:40 PM

uppin cuz i added the zshare link and no one likes me

Young Kidd (LM) 01-11-10 10:53 PM

ill check this when i get back home

_Talksic_ 01-12-10 05:22 AM

listening, not sure but pretty sure your spittng lil waynes verse with his vocals turned down lower then yours..unoriginal,he already spit that,common man,only positive thing about this track is your emotion..no hate but wack, your own written shit was alright.no offence but u gotta get off lil wang's dick..no hate.hes really not that sick.even he said he doesnt think about his lyrics most the shit he said he writes is just off the top of his head..hes wack.ive def heard better shit from u though.

M&rk 01-12-10 12:51 PM

i dont have waynes vocals under me, i just used his flow and concepts and put my opinion into what he was talkin about, i did the same thing at the begining of em's part where he kinda keeps waynes flow then i do my own shit in eminems part because i didn't agree with what he was talkin about at all really cuz he wasn't sayin anything important and i wanted to show my own flow rather than try to keep em's flow, which i could of but i wanted to be a little more original than that.
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wayne definately put thought into his lyrics on this and thats why i spit on his concepts, but i feel differently about the things he was talkin about, and i used his flow because it makes the words really obvious and i wanted to show my point of view and opinion on the same shit wayne was talkin about.
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like even my first line wayne says i got hate in my heart, love in my mind. and i say i got hate in my mind and love in my heart. that little change of words is a completely different way of lookin at the world compared to wayne, and i did that because i don't agree wit what wayne said cuz i'd never have hate in my heart cuz that goes against what i believe.
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idk, i put alot of thought into my lyrics and i think wayne did to. topics like talkin about your soul and the world in general your lyrics need to be very deliberate

_Talksic_ 01-13-10 02:43 AM

no offence but by the standerds of alot of people that would be called biting..just my opinion and honestly probly others as well.

M&rk 01-16-10 09:00 PM

no offense but your opinion doesn't matter on this topic. i'm biting the flow on his song on purpose because he purposely made it slow and deliberate so u listen to his words, so i dilibrately did the same so people would listen to my words aswell. w/e basically just uppin

.gunit101 01-17-10 12:58 AM

Do you like penis?


Anywho....its almost horrible to say, but you do wayne no justice :(



Can you please die?


kthnkxbye :thumbup:

Rats 01-17-10 02:00 AM

holy fuck. This is garbage. I tried my best to say somthing positive.

Capone 01-18-10 01:44 AM

garbageeeeeeeeeee

man just quit

_Talksic_ 01-18-10 01:47 AM

hes actually not a bad rapper its just this song.

Capone 01-18-10 01:49 AM

i use to like this song! but no

the chorus sounds wack sounds like u biting at parts man be creative make ur own shit up..... be diffrent
ur chorus sounds mono....................
sounds like u spitting lil wayne verse lmao tkaing alll his words den chorus again... wtf
wack

u dont sound like em stop trying to be like him

back to churs em aain gayyyyyyyyyyyy
dosnt sound good

it ends geatness it ended
2nd verse
ok u kinda came diffrent da diddy thing didnt feel but fdiffrent so ok ...better
2nd verse better cause u doing ur thing

JTR 01-18-10 02:39 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by _Talksic_
hes actually not a bad rapper its just this song.


stop, turn around 180 degrees, walk away.

yes he is a bad rapper man lmfao

M&rk 01-19-10 04:23 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by JTR
stop, turn around 180 degrees, walk away.

yes he is a bad rapper man lmfao

this coming from someone that doesn't rap

M&rk 01-19-10 04:30 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Capone
i use to like this song! but no

the chorus sounds wack sounds like u biting at parts man be creative make ur own shit up..... be diffrent
ur chorus sounds mono....................
sounds like u spitting lil wayne verse lmao tkaing alll his words den chorus again... wtf
wack

u dont sound like em stop trying to be like him

back to churs em aain gayyyyyyyyyyyy
dosnt sound good

it ends geatness it ended
2nd verse
ok u kinda came diffrent da diddy thing didnt feel but fdiffrent so ok ...better
2nd verse better cause u doing ur thing


i wanted to talk about the same things that wayne did thats why i took the hook, i could of just used a wayne accapella for the hook, but that wouldn't of worked but u wouldn't of hated and it woulda sounded gay that way.
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do u know how mixtapes work? wayne steals hooks all the time, and i'm not on his dick i just agree wit the hook here, its touching on a topic that i could relate to, that topic being that this world is make believe and if the trueth about whats goin on in it would crush peoples heads, thats why wayne is goin to jail, because of he new shit like this talkin about real shit. and thats why biggy and 2pac got shot cuz they talked about stuff that people in power don't want people to know.
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whatever i'm talkin to a wall, ya'll wouldn't be able to make that song any better than me, theres only three people on this site anymore that record on the regular anyway so your opinion doesn't matter either
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and JTR hit me wit a diss track if i'm so wack u homo thug :spit:

Fly-E 01-21-10 09:54 AM

I think that you should have took this beat a whole different direction honestly bra. Like i remixed it, and i'll post it up on here but eminem versee was on topic it was straight to the point wayne had good metaphors in it, as for you i don't mind your voice just was hoping to hear something worth listening to ya know? Know i don't wanna post mine up because i don't no how many cats will bite my lyrics and flip em. I do like how you flipped shit and ment it in different context because i could tell thats what you were tryin to do, but you should have switched ya flow up ya feel me bra.

WhoAmI 01-21-10 10:18 AM

^^trust me NOBODY would bite your lyrics lol

Fly-E 01-21-10 12:18 PM

lol text battles are different from actually recording and using concepts. I have said it 100 times it takes me 3 minutes to type a diss im not going to pre write and post my best shit on the net ya feel me especially on a dead site it jus aint worth it dawg. RV is jus something fun and goofy to fuck around.

JTR 01-22-10 05:15 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by JP Morgan
and JTR hit me wit a diss track if i'm so wack u homo thug :spit:


Yessir that's true. I'm raw homie I aint got any reason to lie and sugar coat shit. It's a bitchmove that I haven't got back at you yet, I can admit that myself cuz I'm pissed about it too. Forgot my mic at Japan, pops brought it back but when he did my computer broke but I'll get it fixed. Im getting you inevitably though, you used my good man terumoto to get at me with your diss, i'd be a punk to let you get away with that.

JTR 01-22-10 05:20 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by JP Morgan
this coming from someone that doesn't rap


"I took a break cuz spittin' got borin'
Left rap but came back a Wizard like Jordan"

I know I haven't recorded anything in moooooonths but I was writing until recently and I'm always rhyming in my head and hiphop is and always will be a part of me despite if I haven't played a rap song for myself in ages cuz I been jamming to oldies.

I got a studio at my disposal at my step-dads place now, maybe even him on the drums, older bro for guitar, sister for vocals. Demo album and/or mixtape will be done by end of summer.

Worry about yourself rapping don't worry about me man haha, I know you're gonna do your thing and I know I'll be doing mine

M&rk 01-22-10 10:34 PM

you always have excuses and you are always gay. i would make fun of u further but i honestly don't think you could take it, if someone burst your bubble you would probably cry in your closet(not a homo joke)

JTR 01-24-10 03:23 AM

I was just in Japan, where the fuck were you at?
Now I'm in Cali, where the fuck are you at?
I been spending huge cash, I been all across the world
I been pimping lots of girls, give them lobster and some pearls
But where the fuck are you at?

JTR 01-24-10 03:25 AM

i aint got nothing to cry over with this life i've been living and these experiences i've been blessed with

Fly-E 01-24-10 09:38 PM

Honestly JTR i been cool wit u for a while, but if you have all them experiences and you jus keep gettin more and more than u don't have to say nothin your life speaks for itself thats all i'm sayin its dumb to argue bout it if you really are at that kinda level in ya life ya feel me bra?


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