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GKillaz05 vs sabre
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10 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Good Luck :thumbup: Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 01-08-06 at 09:24 PM Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in. |
GKillaz05 has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-08-06 09:04 PM.
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Even if mistaken for cancer you bein sick is just the fake answer...
Sabre's stlye just flops around on the ground like a break dancer... Like an egg your gettin' beat,I am about to end ya winnin' streak... Why you grinnin' geek?.. when your only defete is verse technique... Growin' old like an antique, and its a shame your new to RapVerse... Sabres style is the worst I will have him leavin in a black herst... I pass the gat to Jesus...as your floatin' to heaven now ya trapt... Reachin the clowds n now you know how it feels to be soul clapped... Quick Keystyle - GOODLUCK! |
sabre has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-08-06 09:20 PM.
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loyalty right here....well, lets see how big you are
dudes not packin' anything, he's left totally hungry canada's finest? i guess everyone else left the country representing the flag, may not be white, but keep this in mind after this, you'll be more read than the new york times this isn't much of a battle, bitch, there isn't any doubt all i have to do is start a war....and he'll back right out i got a leg up in this one, while this dudes just a cripple the only beaver he's ever eaten, he swallowed a nickle bitch ass, bring your heat with ya, my lyrics will burn it i'll flatten your ass so badly, you can make use for all that syrup canadian bitch, get outta the country Explanation: the canadian nickel has a beaver on it |
This was feedback posted for GKillaz05
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Voted For: GKillaz05
Meh both was good.. Gkilla- Your verse started off good with the opener... there was a nice punch and i liked the multis that you had in the first half of your verse and then the second half they just died out...? Dont know why that is but you verse was solid all around... i liked your punches and your closer made me laugh cause thatw as something similar i used against pop in KORV1's final 4 Sabre- You arnt as wack as i though you was gunna be... i dont really know who either of you 2 are... i have seen G around the site but thats about it... your punches was alright... you had like 2 personals i think but it wasnt really connecting... like i said your PUNCHES was alright... but thats it... you could still use alota elevation... v. G |
you're a fucking whack, obviously dickriding because you're not even active, like seriously
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Voted For: GKillaz05
aight this was a good battle this.... Gkillaz, you had some nice hard-hittin punches in your verse, like this one: Like an egg your gettin' beat,I am about to end ya winnin' streak... Why you grinnin' geek?.. when your only defete is verse technique... ^^^that woz decent, and you pulled off quite a nice multi there aswell. you stayed consistent with your punches throughout your verse which is a good thing, and it flowed well, and had a good structure aswell. sabre, you had some decent punchlines aswell (the one about the new york times), but you had a few played & simple ones aswell, such as this one: this isn't much of a battle, bitch, there isn't any doubt all i have to do is start a war....and he'll back right out ^^that woz kinda basic. i think thats what gave Gkillaz the win, because he had more of a consistant verse. i think he had a better rhyme scheme aswell. your flow was good though, and your structure was fine, just work on your creativity nd stuff. good battle but v/Gkillaz no hate.................. |
stfu this is ridiculous, maybe if you understand my punch
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stfu, you're whack and shouldn't have any votes....you said i'm flopping like break dancers? break dancers have skill you wanker, try throwing a fuckin' decent punch |
Voted For: GKillaz05
gkillaz definately got this shit....i really liked you soul clapped thing and you break dancer part. good job killaz Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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Voted For: sabre
dudes not packin' anything, he's left totally hungry canada's finest? i guess everyone else left the country ^Decent punch... I feel like I've said something like that before........ So it must be good. Lol. representing the flag, may not be white, but keep this in mind after this, you'll be more read than the new york times ^Haha, dope. Took me a second to realize it. this isn't much of a battle, bitch, there isn't any doubt all i have to do is start a war....and he'll back right out ^Meh... Alright. i got a leg up in this one, while this dudes just a cripple the only beaver he's ever eaten, he swallowed a nickle ^hahaha. bitch ass, bring your heat with ya, my lyrics will burn it i'll flatten your ass so badly, you can make use for all that syrup ^That was dope. I loved that line. Even if mistaken for cancer you bein sick is just the fake answer... Sabre's stlye just flops around on the ground like a break dancer... ^best line you had. Like an egg your gettin' beat,I am about to end ya winnin' streak... Why you grinnin' geek?.. when your only defete is verse technique... ^Not that funny... And thats what counts hoss. To me anyway. Growin' old like an antique, and its a shame your new to RapVerse... Sabres style is the worst I will have him leavin in a black herst... ^Whats with the gangster line? Minus 27 cool points. I pass the gat to Jesus...as your floatin' to heaven now ya trapt... Reachin the clowds n now you know how it feels to be soul clapped... ^Second best line and not that great. Sabre wins due to creativity and the ability to make me laugh and keeps reading. As soon as I saw Gkillaz "i'll murder you" line i was just like "maaaaan, what have i gotten myself into." But yes, vote for SABRE!!!! TOOTH TIGER! |
What the fuck? 3-1? You have to be fucking kidding me? gkillaz, stop pming for votes.
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Voted For: sabre
GK you keyed your verse and it showed. Overall weaker punch's, though it flowed better in my opinion... thats not what wins battles. Sabre had better punches overall, a few played but for the most part they had more spice than GK's. Nice little battle here. Keep it up. V/Sabre Peace. Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
I seriously dont see how you got 3 votes already GK it's an obvious KO for sabre in my opinion. :p
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hmmm...? I really dont see that at all, and yes I did key my verse, but still how is it a KO for me?.. hmm.. W/E - UPPIN'!
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Meh. Nevermind. If you can't see it that's your own set back. Good luck.
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Voted For: sabre
Flow: G Personals: S Punches: S Multies: G Metaz: S Creativity: S Structure: G V - Sabre even tho sabre did not have the multies to help his flow (which was decent) he did have the punches and metaz that hit,and im canadian too, so i kinda felt it...LMFAO, jp.... but overall it was the punches and personals and multies that got it for me... good work to both of you Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: GKillaz05
dudes not packin' anything, he's left totally hungry canada's finest? i guess everyone else left the country 3/10...weak, need i say more representing the flag, may not be white, but keep this in mind after this, you'll be more read than the new york times 3/10...ummm...makes no sence this isn't much of a battle, bitch, there isn't any doubt all i have to do is start a war....and he'll back right out 3/10...boreing, played, old news dawg i got a leg up in this one, while this dudes just a cripple the only beaver he's ever eaten, he swallowed a nickle 0/10...not even good enuff to score, especially dissin' handicaps man...weak..dude, that was the worst line i have seen in a wile...seriously bitch ass, bring your heat with ya, my lyrics will burn it i'll flatten your ass so badly, you can make use for all that syrup 4/10...sadly the best line, and it had the word syrup in it, weak dude Overall...13/40...weal dude, didnt flow very well, hardly any multis Even if mistaken for cancer you bein sick is just the fake answer... Sabre's stlye just flops around on the ground like a break dancer... 3/10...kinda weak, dissin' cancer patients, weak dude Like an egg your gettin' beat,I am about to end ya winnin' streak... Why you grinnin' geek?.. when your only defete is verse technique... 4/10...also a lil weak, geek?, dude get outta the 90's Growin' old like an antique, and its a shame your new to RapVerse... Sabres style is the worst I will have him leavin in a black herst... 4/10...played, i need not say more I pass the gat to Jesus...as your floatin' to heaven now ya trapt... Reachin the clowds n now you know how it feels to be soul clapped... 8/10...best line, flowed pretty good Overall 29/40...was prety good, flowed good, good multis as well, was a tough decision but it goes to GK Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
you're a fucking joke man, you can't say shit, i've seen your rhymes
this is ridiculous, you get the biggest herbs to vote for you man |
I dont get anyone to vote you cry baby. They vote on there own will. Also, thx for bitchin' about the votes to Strobe more or yours got DQ'd then mine.
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man, every credible head that has come in here has said i'm fucking better than you and your garbage and i should've had the win already, so stfu, you get d/r's, look at all your other fucking battles, the same cats always vote for you man
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Voted For: sabre
Even if mistaken for cancer you bein sick is just the fake answer... Sabre's stlye just flops around on the ground like a break dancer... VS dudes not packin' anything, he's left totally hungry canada's finest? i guess everyone else left the country i got a leg up in this one, while this dudes just a cripple the only beaver he's ever eaten, he swallowed a nickle sabre was more consistant, both had a filler bar and a couple of plays wernt fresh but sabre got this. G, you went for more of a flow than solid punches. NO HATE Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: sabre
hey sabre ur lines were better and were more punchin canadas finest more like canadas worst Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: sabre
sabre deffinately won this one.. letss review dudes not packin' anything, he's left totally hungry canada's finest? i guess everyone else left the country doppee opener 8/10 representing the flag, may not be white, but keep this in mind after this, you'll be more read than the new york times ^ lol all you can do is laugh at this. funny bar 7/10 this isn't much of a battle, bitch, there isn't any doubt all i have to do is start a war....and he'll back right out ..=( played .. 2/10 i got a leg up in this one, while this dudes just a cripple the only beaver he's ever eaten, he swallowed a nickle lmfaoo.. it took me a while to get it.. but only because im not canadian and dont know the nickle has a beaver .. funny line 8/10 bitch ass, bring your heat with ya, my lyrics will burn it i'll flatten your ass so badly, you can make use for all that syrup .. =( whyd you leave this peice with a played line 2/10 27/50 G Killaz Even if mistaken for cancer you bein sick is just the fake answer... Sabre's stlye just flops around on the ground like a break dancer... pretty good.. multis in there.. eh 6/10 Like an egg your gettin' beat,I am about to end ya winnin' streak... Why you grinnin' geek?.. when your only defete is verse technique... dope 9/10 Growin' old like an antique, and its a shame your new to RapVerse... Sabres style is the worst I will have him leavin in a black herst... =( played 3/10 I pass the gat to Jesus...as your floatin' to heaven now ya trapt... Reachin the clowds n now you know how it feels to be soul clapped... eh=/ 3/10 you said 10 lines.. you gave 8 21 / 50 |
This was feedback posted for sabre
i was feelin both verses actually,anyway, jus checkin tha pollz
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Yo, w/e man. I dont really give a fuck who wins. Everyone seems to think its a good battle, so let it be and whoever wins fuckin' wins. your votes "seem" just as much a D/R as mine do. so STFU!
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lmfao @ you saying i whine to strobe then you get votes DQ'd, you had the support of all the noobs, anyone who's been here over 6 months said i won, lmao @ saying i'm get d/r's
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What are you talkin' about Kid?.. You are the one that got Strobe to DQ the votes, I havnt complained once! Your the bitch here, that cant fuckin' realize your not that fuckin' great. I have been here 2 Years bitch, so I say I win, and I know Plently more who would say the same. You sayin' One Mic and Common are noobs?.. NOPE! Shady Lady aint a noob either, just on this site she is. SO therefor NotoriousM is the only noob, and I didnt ask him to vote, he did it on his own. so get WHORED bitch, and get bitchin' to strobe like a BITCH!
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Voted For: sabre
GKillaz05 Even if mistaken for cancer you bein sick is just the fake answer... Sabre's stlye just flops around on the ground like a break dancer... Terrible punch.. Like an egg your gettin' beat,I am about to end ya winnin' streak... Why you grinnin' geek?.. when your only defete is verse technique... Your multies are so choppy and shitty.. Growin' old like an antique, and its a shame your new to RapVerse... Sabres style is the worst I will have him leavin in a black herst... Wow @ the biggest n00b punch of the year.. I pass the gat to Jesus...as your floatin' to heaven now ya trapt... Reachin the clowds n now you know how it feels to be soul clapped... Dumbest wordplay I've seen in months.. sabre dudes not packin' anything, he's left totally hungry canada's finest? i guess everyone else left the country Hahaha, I laughed.. representing the flag, may not be white, but keep this in mind after this, you'll be more read than the new york times Cool wordplay idea.. this isn't much of a battle, bitch, there isn't any doubt all i have to do is start a war....and he'll back right out Pwned.. I'm Canadian and I laughed.. i got a leg up in this one, while this dudes just a cripple the only beaver he's ever eaten, he swallowed a nickle LMFAO! bitch ass, bring your heat with ya, my lyrics will burn it i'll flatten your ass so badly, you can make use for all that syrup Word... sabre came waaaaaaaaaay harder, and had some dope punches. GKillaz05 dropped so newbish and played and I was very dissapointed in his verse. So... Vote: sabre |
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i keyed this in 10 minutes, you keyed yours but it took longer, lmao thinking you're better because you've been here 2 years and that automatically makes you better and deserve the win, i whored you buddy, you had nothing against me, and if people weren't dumbass yankees, they'd understand all my punches...and you obviously know shady lady so she dick rid you, so in conclusion, you need to STFU because you are whack |
Voted For: sabre
sabre- some nice punchez. some wack ones. the personals were pretty good, hit hard. i didnt like that syrup line though. you are glorifyin yourself more than dissin. gkillaz- no real good punchez. no personalz. overall you didnt have anythin that good in this verse. work on making more punches that r creative. v- sabre |
Voted For: GKillaz05
Gkilla took this one his punches felt mo directed and made mo sense to me. Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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i though Gkillaz took it cause he had better punches and
personlas i cant vote so this is just some feed back |
This was feedback posted for sabre
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