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Evolution vs metaman
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8 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting 3-0 = KO Minimum posts to vote: 100 Check in by: 03-17-05 at 07:07 PM Must drop verse in 25 minutes after check in. |
Evolution has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-13-05 07:08 PM.
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I’ll come half-assed, & your rhymes are easy to break like foam
But your punches are getting old too... ................................................go put them in the retirement home This kid thinks this is all fun & games, hah, your just prattle* You’d have to get an alias... to vote on your own matches, just for you to win your battles Look at this hoe, trying to act ill, your punches won’t even hit His drop is loud, cuz not even deaf peeps don’t want to hear it Why am I facing you? You’re just a waste of time You’ll never elevate son... ...cuz you already having trouble trying to rhyme Key’d *Prattle means: idle or foolish and irrelevant talk |
I’ll come half-assed, & your rhymes are easy to break like foam
But your punches are getting old too... ................................................go put them in the retirement home This kid thinks this is all fun & games, hah, your just prattle* You’d have to get an alias... to vote on your own matches, just for you to win your battles Look at this hoe, trying to act ill, your punches won’t even hit His drop is loud, cuz not even deaf peeps don’t want to hear it Why am I facing you? You’re just a waste of time You’ll never elevate son... ...cuz you already having trouble trying to rhyme Key’d *Prattle means: idle or foolish and irrelevant talk |
metaman has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-13-05 09:08 PM.
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this dick is out his zone so now imma handle you quick,
you da best poet? faggot i aint maya angelou bitch,* text cuz you weak cant stand in the same ring or ill end ya, even if yo name was sly you wouldnt be a contender,** you evolved from a poet to the wackest site member, change your name to clef cause imma banish you til november, you picked this fight with me makes me think yo head be a mess, i done cramped you left you bloody cause of yo p-m-s,*** explanations: * - in his sig he has best poet for september ** - sylvester stallone aka sly is the host of the boxing show the contender ***he private messaged me to challenge me (pms = private messages / a girls period where she gets cramps and bleeds) |
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Voted For: Evolution
V/Evolution...he came wit hard hitting punchs also his structure was on point an he had good personals...meta u had a good verse but i seen better from u i felt u came to lightly u need to use more personals in ur punchs....Nohate...RETURN THE FAVOR..... Opener=E closer=E structure=Tie punchs=E personals=E overall=Evolution.. Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
upping.. thank you sir.. somebody plz vote on dis ish..
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Voted For: metaman
I like this verse alot better it had more better punchlines and better wordplay nice flow aswell I just enjoyed reading this battle more it was a pretty close battle and the other verse wasn't consitant in beating metaman... Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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Voted For: Evolution
these verses were actually pretty weak, but evo definitly took this one, better punches and structure, the link also helped a lot, couldve had a lil better flow though metaman, not wut i expected, you actually have some potential, just elevate some then try again naw mean, this was pretty one sided tohoguh, rtf, link in sig v/ evolution |
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Voted For: metaman
good verses from both of ya. heres how it breaks down: Open: Both openings was ok, Metaman's, i didnt even get really and evolution's was a little basic and been done before but was better cos i understood it better. Close: Again with evolution, i seen that punch in different ways before a few times. Metaman's was more original but could have been worded better, but i still liked it. Overall: Metaman had some ok punches that were on target, no real personals and metas not working, but i really liked the Sly -contender line, nice one! Overall it wasa good verse and i can see you doing big things in the future.. Evolution: Had a good verse aswell, the punches were ok but could use some elevation wiv more metaphors and more complicated lines. The punches weren't hitting as hard so you came off a little weaker but i can see potential there. Good luck man, no hate. |
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This was feedback posted for Evolution
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uppin dis for votes
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Voted For: metaman
Metaman Nice Flow Man I Was Feeling This One Through Out Your Whole Verse, Punches Was Here And Hitting Well Man, Personals Ey, Man It Was Dope, Wordplay Yo This Was One Sided Man, Metaman Verse Was More Elevated, Punches Was His Best In Here, And Vocab Good Job Evo Nice Verse, It Was Alright Towards The Begining But The Ending Was Where It Fell Of Man Elevate, Throw Some Multi's In Here And Meta's And You'll Be Doing Wel, Also Up Your Vocabulary Man Vote-Metaman Return The Favor Link In My Sig Preferebly Me Vs .K.onfliktz |
Voted For: Evolution
metaman u had a decent verse some decent diss, flow was aight personal was ok but u could of came at him harder and more celever ur punches could of been harder as-well but a decent verse this dick is out his zone so now imma handle you quick, you da best poet? faggot i aint maya angelou bitch,* text cuz you weak cant stand in the same ring or ill end ya, even if yo name was sly you wouldnt be a contender,** you evolved from a poet to the wackest site member, change your name to clef cause imma banish you til november, you picked this fight with me makes me think yo head be a mess, i done cramped you left you bloody cause of yo p-m-s,*** decent verse 7/10 Evolution ya verse was more celever and was hitting harder with punches good flow as-well good vocab , tight verse I’ll come half-assed, & your rhymes are easy to break like foam But your punches are getting old too... ................................................go put them in the retirement home This kid thinks this is all fun & games, hah, your just prattle* You’d have to get an alias... to vote on your own matches, just for you to win your battles Look at this hoe, trying to act ill, your punches won’t even hit His drop is loud, cuz not even deaf peeps don’t want to hear it Why am I facing you? You’re just a waste of time You’ll never elevate son... ...cuz you already having trouble trying to rhyme tight drop 9/10 |
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Voted For: Evolution
Evolution.....nice shit structure was good flow was on point...shit was kinda weak in some areas but you made the differnce with your personals.........if you had a real COMPeTITION then this would have bee n alot better.....because this kid is a newb...he actaully bolded some one words to make his bars work....lol but yeah some shit was dope.///the drop is loud, cuz not even deaf peeps don't want 2 hear it line was nice Metaman......nice shit but wack at the same time...your structure was mad weak yo...youve been on this site for along itm now and your shit is still wack yo.....try to stay with one name or just be more consistant in battling yo... but good for a newb..........stay up and elevate.... one love yo vote=evolution make sure 2 return the favor |
Voted For: Evolution
u won fam...i dont gota explian dis shit....just off ya personal it was betta than meta's whole verse Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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