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Jay 286 vs Blackmage
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Under 3 min No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting I never saw the first few set ups but it's set up now so let's do it good luck :thumbup: Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 03-06-06 at 04:52 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
Jay 286 has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-03-06 07:06 PM.
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accepted, and dropped in the same day....i dont take this shit serioulsy anymore....haha i even freestyled half of it....oh well... just check it out n vote
Set it all off - http://www.soundclick.com/bands/son...&songID=3584813 |
Blackmage has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-05-06 09:30 PM.
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86 that 286
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pag...m?bandID=303064 Link and if worse comes to worse then the link is in my sig This is the first time i ever took the time to write the lyric out, use them damn it do you know how hard it is to word for word a freestyle No beef jay just business good luck |
Voted For: Blackmage
Blackmage - Liked the beat. You flowed pretty smoovely on the beat. Came with punches that were pretty hard hittin.. even though I was lookin at the lyrics n' shit. Quality was straight, but it also seemed kinda fuck'd up. Don't know.. probably my speakers. Jay 286 - Liked the beat here too. Stayed on beat, unlike some peeps. But anyway, you came with punches also that were connecting, but seemed they weren't as hard as like your other battle punches though. Quality was straight too. Overall - Ima have to go with Blackmage here though. Just came with punches that were a little harder than 286's here. 286 you could've came harder than that like your other battles I listened too (which I'll vote on btw). But yea, Black came harder in this battle (to me he did). No hate.. RTF Black on my audio battle. If that's aight.. since that shit is gettin mad slept on. |
ehhh....freestyle....im not sure it was quite a freestyle....but none the less good verse bro...no hate...(considering you had alot of time to hear my shit...haha) word this might be the first battle i deserve to lose (not sayin you better but i didnt try at all you can tell...) but good shit....finally some good heads up in here battling....hopefully ill steal a vote or two tho....word
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Word your shit was nice too
Yea it was a freestyle but i did it in 3 parts cause i only have a half hour to record a day and my mic is shit. I have to tweak my vocals so much. But no i didn't listen to yours until mine was done. and btw sick wit it no it's not your speakers it's my shit quality. Good shit bro, you'll proly snatch some votes before this is over, shit you could win, you never know.... |
*^with reference to knuckles vs. Young UNF battle*
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Voted For: Blackmage
jay- decent track but the verse was rushed in spots and like u squished words together plus ya hook was the same so saying it twice only reminded me of it.. that who ripped it shit was the only thing u said against em there was no wordplay or metaz no punches whatsoever ur flow was the best part of ya shit blackmage-effects where fucking ya voice up dull that shit down cause i cant really see whether ya spittin metaz but i listened hard dawg and i gotta say u tried in every line to smack dude so big ups there couple decent lines which is all it seemed to take for ya the q diss was dumb shoulda compared em to carson jet rappin like his nose was held by clothespins |
oh man....i finally get people to vote and its on the only battle i feel like i lost....word...vote on my other shit...leave this one alone...haha
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uppin i guess for some votes for the best...holla at me
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Voted For: Jay 286
lol......seems like every other song u writes a work in progress.... that took it right there..... I don't quite see how or why people are voting for mage in here other than blatent cock riding...... jay took it with flo-delivery-punch-quality-everything... mage didn't even sound like he was spittin on the beat. |
ooooooooook..........cock riding from people i don't know that don't like me, i dont know maybe jay286 has enemies or something, but yea, even jay said he felt he lost that...anyway uppin :rolleyes:
and that was a good line carso, good job jay:thumbup: |
haha....trueeeeeeee but you did say you thought i would steal a vote.....so holla i got it....haha
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damn, aight johnny cochrane i'll give you that one:laugh:
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uppin man..........................................
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Voted For: Blackmage
vote mage had lot better flow and a few more punches, u do need to back off the mic or sumin and that one punch where jay says that was good but that was the only one he had. jay;'s freestyle was better than his writen stuff so jay when u say u dont take this seriously and u just freestyled the shit, u should take it less seriously and it woulda been better. dont know either of u so dont think this is a bias vote -fuck off if this isn't explained good enough peace |
This was feedback posted for Blackmage
................checkin the polls ..................
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This was feedback posted for Jay 286
lol...checking polls.... ain't gon vote with BOTH of y'all being in OYD!!!!...werd
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That's a better reason to fuckin vote lets get this over with, hey jay, you think we should let oyd vote on this if they want to get this battle kilt
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just checkin to see if this will up since it ain't even on the audio screen no more
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This was feedback posted for Jay 286
polllllllllllzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz you got this eesasyyy
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This was feedback posted for Jay 286
Black ur beat was boring to be honest and ur presence in the track was like not there in other words.punches werent that hard..wordplays were umm basic?...nice try anyways
jay..nice beat yo..u were a lil more creative yeah..freestyle was iight...voice was just to damn low dude!... ahh mayne i aint voting...this is gonna be a feedback |
Voted For: Jay 286
damn the quality. is garbage. but ill try to ignore that because this is a audio battle black mage: your quality is not good at all..i can barely hear you...but the punches are OK. you have to make them more clear and stand out. I can barely hear anything clear. this shit was ok at best.You'll get better famz...fo sho jus tget a mic and its set. but the punches were just ok. 4.9/10 Jay 286 this shit is ok. Your punches were ALRIGHT. the quality was better and more pleasing to my ears...the flow was off though. your voice was ok. should of been more amped and you should of made the good punches stand out more. but overall this is ok. better then BM's this is 5.5/10 Blah weak battle but Jay 286 get this. And LMFAO ROFL LMFAO @ I RUH RUH RUH |
uppin to try n get another battle closed......comonnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn
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This was feedback posted for Blackmage
blacmage ya links aint workijn in tha sig and in ya post
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errrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr upppppppppppppppppppp
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ummmmm i checked and they both work, iono what to tell ya
Lmao at jay uppin this battle like all of a sudden its gonna get votes lmao |
Voted For: Jay 286
Blackmage- had some nice lines and read the lyrics along with listening....had some good wordplay man..Not feeling your beat at all...meh lyrics were good dissed him minor...felt your flow coul dhave been better....overall 5/10 Jay-Pretty dope beat...kinda off beat with ur flow but deliverance is nice...liking some of your lines punches were good...liked how u mixed it up with the freestyle i like that....seems like ur being witty and making a mockery of ur opponent i like that confidence...overall 6.5/10 v/jay 286 |
uppin for the last vote yep yeup.....................................
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uppin....tryin to get my last battle closed so vote for meeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
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Voted For: Jay 286
Punches-D Flow-Tie Delivery-D Personals-D Presense-D unno over-all jay came nicer, delivery and punches was nicer to. Vote-Default |
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