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Solitude vs V.i.P
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8 Lines House Rules check in 3 hours Due in 24 hours Minimum posts to vote: 200 Check in by: 10-05-05 at 03:17 PM Must drop verse in 1440 minutes after check in. |
Solitude has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-05-05 12:18 PM.
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yes sir....im ready.................................
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V.i.P has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-05-05 12:20 PM.
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God your gay, i hate fags, but especially this bitch
Ur the Shit? actually, that's 1 thing i'd have to agree wit I'ma smash this Fake before all the rumors get around Liar....when's the last time herbs got in the VIP lounge Rapverse will stay dope providing your not in the sequel If your VIP then i'd rather sit with the normal people I woulda dropped better, but it woulda been a waste N giving Grace to God won't help, you'll still b a Dis-Grace |
its a new day, and im hittin up dude like lunch bullys, give up the pay
or witness pain from an upper classman, but it isnt freshman friday its to late, crushing bones and all like a dog with an toothe ache so C safe, cuz the bars'll clean out ya mouth like if it was toothepaste and im only 5 lines down, so scream Kayo(K.O) like im a ref that counted to 10 and he thought he could win, and solitude have skill? only if the voters pretend so feel the movement, V.i.P never falls, so creep in the dark and keep it moving so im close to him? nah..im goin hard on my last two like new recruitments Kayo is my alias..if anyone needed to know |
This was feedback posted for V.i.P
Uppin fah fam.....good battle.......................
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wow, his bars were stretched like whoa!
uppin |
yea...oh well..looked fine on a piece of paper...uppin
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damn...can we get some votes in here
bumpity |
bumpity....chyea..............................
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Voted For: V.i.P
its a new day, and im hittin up dude like lunch bullys, give up the pay or witness pain from an upper classman, but it isnt freshman friday 2..meh..seems more like a threat than a punch its to late, crushing bones and all like a dog with an toothe ache so C safe, cuz the bars'll clean out ya mouth like if it was toothepaste 3...borderline self glorifing and im only 5 lines down, so scream Kayo(K.O) like im a ref that counted to 10 and he thought he could win, and solitude have skill? only if the voters pretend 4...decent enuff... so feel the movement, V.i.P never falls, so creep in the dark and keep it moving so im close to him? nah..im goin hard on my last two like new recruitments 5....ok...... God your gay, i hate fags, but especially this bitch Ur the Shit? actually, that's 1 thing i'd have to agree wit 1....set-up suked cos gay is played..and u just complimented him. I'ma smash this Fake before all the rumors get around Liar....when's the last time herbs got in the VIP lounge 3....decent concept..worded badly. Rapverse will stay dope providing your not in the sequel If your VIP then i'd rather sit with the normal people 5....nice. I woulda dropped better, but it woulda been a waste N giving Grace to God won't help, you'll still b a Dis-Grace 2.....played. Ok..pretty close battle.. VIP... Make ur lines shorter.Ur flow is bad.U started off weak..as ur 1st bar seemed to be a threat and 2nd bar was SH.But you picked shit up near the end. Solitude... Ur 1st bar was horrible.U had a gay line..and then u complimented him.U said that he's the shit...and that is a term people use to say someone's good.I know what ur trying to say and all,that he's shit...but man..you worded it completly wrong. Vote-VIP Drop a vote in the link below....or this vote will be DQ'd. http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=210224 |
1-0 uppin............................................. .......
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This was feedback posted for Solitude
dammit vote people before i vote for myself
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YOU FUCKIN DUMBASS, how the fuck is my first bar complimenting him??? i said he was SHIT s' called word play learn how to use it |
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ur the shit <---term people use when someone's dope. That shit is not wordplay...That shit is just trash...you fuckin suck. I would merk you too peices in one second..so don't even try steppin to me kid. Know your place. |
no bitch, your fuckin shit
don't even know wtf wordplay is then get the fuck outta here |
This was feedback posted for V.i.P
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and im only 5 lines down, so scream Kayo(K.O) like im a ref that counted to 10 and he thought he could win, and solitude have skill? only if the voters pretend so feel the movement, V.i.P never falls, so creep in the dark and keep it moving so im close to him? nah..im goin hard on my last two like new recruitments VS God your gay, i hate fags, but especially this bitch Ur the Shit? actually, that's 1 thing i'd have to agree wit Rapverse will stay dope providing your not in the sequel If your VIP then i'd rather sit with the normal people TIED ON PUNCHES... CANT DECEIDE A WINNER, COULD GO EITHER WAY. PLEASE HIT A BATTLE IN MY SIG, I WAS GONNA VOTE BUT IT WAS A TIE TO ME. GOOD SHIT FROM BOTH. |
Voted For: Solitude
vote-solitude...came with harder punches(decent) and more personals off nameplay..flow was better than VIP overall...Vip your shit was hella stretched and the structure was bad.Punches didnt come as hard. overall-this was one-sided effort...keep elevating and work on the points were are needed. RTF link in sig or Vote Will Be Removed |
This was feedback posted for Solitude
v/ solitude..
a much better, cleaner verse. some ight punches also. the opener was the better one tho. even tho i used a line like this in the punchline league couple days ago. not enuff post to vote, ill leave this as feed Vip- i think you lacked punches in this, they just werent strong enuff. try to think up better concepts and keep your verse clean without stretchin ya lines. word. return the favor- me vs. elite Return the favor- |
Voted For: V.i.P
Aiight imma have to go wit V.I.P. on this one... its a new day, and im hittin up dude like lunch bullys, give up the pay or witness pain from an upper classman, but it isnt freshman friday- V.I.P God your gay, i hate fags, but especially this bitch Ur the Shit? actually, that's 1 thing i'd have to agree wit-Solitude V.I.P def got my attention when it really came down to the opening lines. The first 2 of Solitudes seems played kinda now adays. Over all V.I.P sounded a better verse. Good battle. |
bumpity...........
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Voted For: Solitude
this verse was fucking hilarious Rapverse will stay dope providing your not in the sequel If your VIP then i'd rather sit with the normal people ^hahahahahahahahaha...classik!! Solitude, pretty to the point verse...funny...nyce punches...just if yu gonna use his name...dont do it repeatedly...thats redundant..and shows us...yu realli have no creative skill....i like that line i pointed out though...good shit VIP, yur verse was more of a self hype, especially the way yu ended it....wasnt feeling it at all....Solitude took 100% shots at yu, yo up ya content and focus on ya opponent...dont tell us waht yu can do...show us....unless, of course, yu do it with good taste... |
thanx for the votes
uppin |
funny how you came on an alias...and tried to battle newbies..and still having a hard time beating them....2-2...
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wow, funny how all the vets realized that u didnt even come close to beating me
and i made an alias becuz i wanted to join another crew so stfu and i would say stick to OMs but you suck at that too |
This was feedback posted for Solitude
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Voted For: Solitude
"If your VIP then i'd rather sit with the normal people" lmao that's harsh... I liked it... best line in the battle... Solitude pretty easily dominated in this battle... He just had the harder punches and personals... V.I.P. didn't throw too many punches to begin with... The 1's he did throw were either weak or played concepts... Opener: Solitude (just for having more feeling and being far more harsh) Closer: He (ended his verse much stronger than V.I.P. did) Punches: Solitude Personals: Solitude Creativity: Neither Complexity: Neither Structure: Solitude Vote: Solitude |
This was feedback posted for V.i.P
jus checkin polls..................................
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Voted For: Solitude
well solitude did come better, just had some wittier punchlines and didn't come played. solitude, you did have a very weak closer but the rest of your verse helped it win this battle. |
Voted For: Solitude
i voted fo solitude cus he had better punches and flow v.i.p i didnt like ur lines u can do better elavate no hate rtf to one of my battles |
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