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Reloaded vs death
Battle Rules:
10 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting g'luck kid :shoot: Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 01-01-05 at 03:35 PM Must drop verse in 15 minutes after check in. |
Reloaded has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-01-05 03:06 PM.
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Death has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-01-05 03:07 PM.
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dog why do it........you know you cant see me/
im bout to cut you up and pass you around like thanksgiving turkey/ ill leave dis nigga dead under a white sheet/ you "duck" more than a bitch in the streets(gun fire)/ its simple come on dog get at me/ how you gonna "reload" when your already on empty/ my flow flows like water and will sweep your ass away like a flood/ your verse is just like a malfunctioning granade.....a dud/ no way you were gonna win this battle anyway at any rate/ nigga named death done already ripped your ass and sealed your fate/ |
death, its time you reloaded your gun and set a viper to bite,
you sold me your profiles, with wank records cos you know your shite, you reseted it, you lost about 15 and won about 4, isn't that plenty, two profiles one from atlanta and one from england, he doesnt have an identity, your a fucking rookie, even elevating seems unreachable from your veiw, making a thread saying i got 500 posts... but people still know your new, you probably wont make the deadline, he asked till wednesday to finish, i can tell your gonna write wack, it's overconfidence, that thinks your gonna win this, youve battled two newbies, to get your undefeated record, you should'nt have give me the pass, this fam will, die from shock, to see his own profile own his own ass. |
lol good verse aight uppin for votes..................
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lol.nice verse.upping for votes.
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^^ i see your undefeated record is coming to an end very soon :thumbup:
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maybe.........got another battle open right now....
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aight you want me to hit that up?? drop a link here
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Voted For: Death
Reloaded death, its time you reloaded your gun and set a viper to bite, you sold me your profiles, with wank records cos you know your shite, this was a weak opener you reseted it, you lost about 15 and won about 4, isn't that plenty, two profiles one from atlanta and one from england, he doesnt have an identity, this was a coo personal your a fucking rookie, even elevating seems unreachable from your veiw, making a thread saying i got 500 posts... but people still know your new, aight...nothin special you probably wont make the deadline, he asked till wednesday to finish, i can tell your gonna write wack, it's overconfidence, that thinks your gonna win this, this was aight youve battled two newbies, to get your undefeated record, you should'nt have give me the pass, this fam will, die from shock, to see his own profile own his own ass. this was kinda weak and a little stretched Reloaded-4/10...your verse was aight...it could've been better...ur opener was weak tho Death dog why do it........you know you cant see me/ im bout to cut you up and pass you around like thanksgiving turkey/ lol..this was funny...and a nice opener ill leave dis nigga dead under a white sheet/ you "duck" more than a bitch in the streets(gun fire)/ kinda played its simple come on dog get at me/ how you gonna "reload" when your already on empty/ kinda nice my flow flows like water and will sweep your ass away like a flood/ your verse is just like a malfunctioning granade.....a dud/ aight no way you were gonna win this battle anyway at any rate/ nigga named death done already ripped your ass and sealed your fate/ there's no punch here..that made this weak Death-6/10 Reloaded didn't come that hard...some of his lines were played and had no punches...Death came aight...he had a couple of lines that made me laugh...Death's verse was a little more complex and he had a little more creativty to his verse than Reloaded |
thanks.upping for votes................
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werrd i need 20 posts before i can vote lol ill vote later pz.
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alright dawg....
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This was feedback posted for Death
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^^ uppin for more votes come on people............
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uppppinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn........... again... all votes retuned leave a link
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uppinnnnnnnnnnnnnnn xcome on get voting we want this over with
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Voted For: Death
"its simple come on dog get at me/ how you gonna "reload" when your already on empty" this is my feedback for a wack line...(do u know what reload means?) I vote for reload... Unexplained.. removed |
wtf? dat didn't come out right :shoot:
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upping.............
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Voted For: Death
man dis battle was some shit. Both of ya was some cut. But if i had to pick a winner i have to give to death. you had some okay punches. Man reloaded you need to elevate more and use some multis. Hey here is a trick for you think about a show and a character in it. what can they do. Then say a rhyme that sounds tight. Then think how you could use it against somebody well this is my vote holla back! ~1~ |
^^^ yo you owe me money hoe...
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This was feedback posted for Reloaded
just checkin polls
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Voted For: Reloaded
Reloaded: yo both ya'll got alot of room to elevate! I voted for yah verse cause you came with harder punches. Death: i didn't fell yah verse especially the line about how he gonna reload when he already on empty. that shit didn't make sense. no hate! Return tha favor!! |
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uppinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn death man get that vote switched its 3-2 to you not 4-1 some guy voted for me then it came up as he voted for you sort it out....
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hey yo thanks reloaded for getting thaty vote removed. i want this to be fair.
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ok here's the proper vote:
it goes to reloaded, my previous vote came out wrong but I think reloaded came harder in this, he had more finesse if u like... and death u should elevate more with vocab or sumptin... vote=reloaded |
lol whats going on with all these mayne... its 3-2 naw and its comeing up 3-1 lol this battle system is fucked up naw... anywayz sort it and... uppinnnnnnnnnn
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