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Ebircs 01-24-06 08:09 PM

Unfinished Dream Ft TitoBronsky
 
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/son...&songID=3396493
"unfinished dream Ft Tito"

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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=219987
Q n Duece
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=220432
H.D

Tha Q. 01-24-06 08:44 PM

im sorta in a "don't fuck with me" mood

so...I'll leave abbreviated feed


CHO...learn better breath control brotha...u sound like u have ADD

I don't like ur dubbing...out of sync


also...the clips are gimmicky...keep em at the beginning or the end...they took away from ur verse


Tito...flow was stock...str8 all the way through, nothin major one way or the other


Cho...flow was cool...not great...not bad...= pretty decent


lyrically...heard a few good lines here and there


str8 drop fellas...it lacks direction though



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Willa 01-24-06 09:04 PM

u dropped 2 of the same links

Ebircs 01-24-06 09:17 PM

sry mom....

fixed

G3MZ 01-24-06 09:32 PM

aight dis beats coo...1st dude...lyricz is aight..flows ok could be tighter...deliverys aiight nahmean doesnt really sound natural tho...2nd cat lyricz is aiiight dont like dem clips in da verse shit is stupid 2 me honestly...flows str8...deliverys ok...overall dis track was decent could use sum work hea & there

TitoBronsky 01-25-06 10:31 PM

dope... preciate the lunchin

fo'trill 01-25-06 10:38 PM

beat is pretty cool...1st mc- ur style is cool nothin i wannna comment on 2 much maybe more emotion 2nd mc- wasnt feelin at all...sorry dude i just wasnt feelin ur delivery...and add some more emotion ur talkin tough man u gotta sound it... lyrics was cool though...LOL like the outro...didnt like the sample before it...keep at it ya'll
peep me:http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=220467

TitoBronsky 01-26-06 07:18 PM

riseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

Ebircs 01-26-06 07:34 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by fo'trill
beat is pretty cool...1st mc- ur style is cool nothin i wannna comment on 2 much maybe more emotion 2nd mc- wasnt feelin at all...sorry dude i just wasnt feelin ur delivery...and add some more emotion ur talkin tough man u gotta sound it... lyrics was cool though...LOL like the outro...didnt like the sample before it...keep at it ya'll
peep me:http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=220467


i'll leave feed rite here....

umm you suck ..... k ?

TitoBronsky 01-29-06 04:30 PM

top it .................

Shawn Phillips 01-29-06 07:05 PM

cho ure flow sucks ass

TitoBronsky 01-30-06 06:31 PM

thanx for the feed dumb ass^^^


rise

TitoBronsky 01-31-06 07:02 PM

rise.....................

TitoBronsky 02-03-06 02:34 PM

to the top .....

TitoBronsky 02-04-06 01:13 PM

can we get a lil feed damn it???!!!!!!!!^*%*($##$(^#(^($^#(^(*^(*())(*&)%%&^^@@@@$UOIUUP^^%((%*^(*&^*&

werd

Enygma 02-04-06 11:56 PM

Good shit fellas. Way to rep the OYD and shit.....lol. Tito, your shit is dope as hell man. You really came a long ass way. Cho, you can still use a little bit of help, but you are definitely coming around man.

Good shit :thumbup:™

TitoBronsky 02-05-06 06:18 AM

aightttttttttttttttttttttttttttttf

ILL GEE 02-09-06 05:11 PM

yo yo yo.... my man tito killing with da flow as usual... i'm a lil outta touch...omma holla atcha bout that and uhhh...put some bass on ya vocals...lol.... beat was aiight... sumn canibus would spit to.... cho.... didn't like the effects in ya verse.... took away from what you was saying.... not feeling the snippets at all... lyrics were cool throughout, though... an aiight track....


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