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Genocide vs Dopeman
Battle Rules:
10 - 20 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Wisemen vs D2R (Crew Battle) Minimum posts to vote: 250 Check in by: 10-24-04 at 03:14 PM Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in. Expired / Old battle close - win |
Dopeman has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-21-04 03:46 PM.
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fuck this, i'ma handle this lil herb quicker than he can buss a nut.......
aight, aight, check............ bitch! only thing ya destined for is defeat..... before ya check in, ya pulse is racin an you cant feel your heartbeat... blood rushes to the brain as you try an think of rhymes constantly hittin delete.. take a seat, cause this the wise men fleet runnin u n ya crew off the track like ah athlete.. this queer sittin here like ''tweet'' sayin ''oops! o my! theres goes my skirt droppin too my feet!''... faggot, you couldnt ''process'' a hot verse if u spent 5 hours trynna assemble it on a microsoft wordsheet!.. fuckin ''whiteboy'' leavin feed on flows like ''yo dude thats sweet'' when he knows nothin... i laugh at u while your cussin... u get bitch slapped by your mom for fussin, then she kicks u out the door... but i'm suprized, cause the ho is a fuckin incest whore..... i got a question, whats it like to have a mother whos fuckin her own husbands brother.. an have a auntie freak, that luvs buss'n nuts harder than ''dantes peak''... cause when its time to rhyme n ride genocide ya knowhere to be found... so call me ''big daddy'' cause i F'd yo momma when i was on the ''rebound''... first it was ya sister, then it was ya cousin i call ''rat''... cause she nibbled on my dick an attacthed to my shit like a fuckin jimmy hat.. boy ya dumb, even ya occupation is wrongly worded, it should say ''murderd''... an as for ya location, ya found at the wishin well, hopin to god i really dont send u to ''hell''... now ya broke, cause you used your cents for all those wishes..... its not all bad, u can be my bitch n i'll pay you a buck for washin my dishes... mother fucker! i think... boy ya dumb, even ya occupation is wrongly worded, it should say ''murderd''... an as for ya location, ya found at the wishin well, hopin to god i really dont send u to ''hell''... ^^^ those the only explanations i'll need... okay his occupation says ''murder''...an his location says ''hell''... yall should understand the rest.. |
genocide has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-22-04 09:26 AM.
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id never do this battle but its for the crew might as well there buddy.
yo I wish I was god and I could "heal your spits" but even if my hand was up your ass I couldn't "feel your shit" I'm suspensful with or without a pencil like a movie a "thriller" It's like your my helpless victim and I'm the psycho "killer" I'm overall iller your not gonna be able to "cut it" so before you open your mouth to speak please just "shut it" I got the tchnique to wreck bitches like you and leave them "speechless" If you were at the top of Mt. Everest you still couldn't "reach this" your lyrics are the weakest when I spit it's the "deepest" you could be 6 feet deep and still come close to be as "deep as this" your style is weak you freak you must be a "stoner" you cherish my rhymes so much when you read them you get a "boner" I'd rather you not spit back your shit rap that lacks it's own "tolerence" |
now uppin for votes man holla holla
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uppin yall, dont sleep
this a crew battle that needs votes |
This was feedback posted for Dopeman
Just checkin the polls for this crew battleness...
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This was feedback posted for Dopeman
jus checkin the polls.......nice drop to both of you.........
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uppin yall
crew battle that does not want to be slept on...... no hate votes no d/r no crew votes just good ol' fashioned well explained votes |
uppin folk
dont sleep honest votes will be returned |
uppin yall dont sleep on this we need some honest votes
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vote people.............
stop sleepin honest votes will be returned honestly |
uppin for some serious votes on this shit yall hey dope man lets get this one closed and put it in frount lines unsted cause there are never anyone gettin votes in here
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uppin this shit yall we do need votes Lets Get It On
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Voted For: genocide
Sorry, but I felt both were horrible. Genocide's was shorter and more "to the point" so I gotta give this one to him. But honestly, both of you need a lot of practice :thumbup: Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
uppin this shit for votes there boys and gurls so uppin i do return favors
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Voted For: genocide
Break Down For Dopeman: bitch! only thing ya destined for is defeat..... before ya check in, ya pulse is racin an you cant feel your heartbeat... ^^Opener Nah Not Feelin It .. And The Lines Were'nt Even Close To Matching Up ... That's One Thing I Don't Like.. A Run On... While Keying... 2/10 now ya broke, cause you used your cents for all those wishes..... its not all bad, u can be my bitch n i'll pay you a buck for washin my dishes... ^^ Kinda Fucked Up ... Closer ' ..! And Still You Have Run On's Vocabulary - Wasn't All There.. (Improve) Wordplay - You Had Some.. Was Aight.. (Could Improve) Multies - The Ones You Had Were Kind Of Weak ... Opener - Weak Closer - Weak Keystyle - Was Aiight .. But Them Stretched Lines Through You Off A Bit.. Because I Wasn't Feeling 'Em.. Over All : You Could Work On Some Of The Categories.. I Gave You ...!! But Decent...... ------------------------------------------ Breakdown For Genocide: yo I wish I was god and I could "heal your spits" but even if my hand was up your ass I couldn't "feel your shit" ^^Alright Opener... Was Better Then The Other Catt's ... your style is weak you freak you must be a "stoner" you cherish my rhymes so much when you read them you get a "boner" I'd rather you not spit back your shit rap that lacks it's own "tolerence" ^And For As Your Closer Goes... I Have Nothing To Say I Think It Speaks For Itself...!! It Was Beyond... Wack' .. I Mean You Could Improve On Almost Every Category.. '!! This Battle Was... Aight But Ya'll Catt's... Re-ad-vise Or Some Shit.. lol For Real .. *Props* To Both Though... -Battle Was Pretty Close...!!! If Dopeman Could Have Shortened Up His Stretched Out Lines.. I Would Of Gave Him The Vote....!! But I Wasnt Really Feeling His Shit ... It Was Way Too Long... And He Didn't Keep Me Intrested Through Out His Flow.. So ... Sorry I Had To Go With Genocide..... On This One..!!! -Vote Genocide |
uppin this shit yall we need votes on this shit
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uppin this i guess whys is it back up just wondering
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Voted For: genocide
ok this shit goes to Social Outsyder: Flow: Social Style: Tied punches: social personnals: social opener: dopeman closer: Social Social: dude the shit was hot i'm glad you still got the skills but i gotta no where you been dawg? don't forget your other site. yo and no need for the ""'s around the last word s we no it's the last word (damn i just thought of a hot new name... last word) Dope: it was hot but idk you were all over the place and i no you wasn't dissing whiteys were you? |
Voted For: Dopeman
DopeMan: He Came Way Better With Punches And Pers. His Vocab Was Tight He Had Some Good Structure And Flow Was Cool His Flow Was Harder Came With SOme Good Shit Genocide Need To Step It Up A Little DopeMan Had Personals That Murked Uhm Nice Going Good Shit 8/10 Genocide It Was Aiight But You Need To Step It Up A Notch To Murk DopeMan Boy Good Flow Structure Was Cool OverAll 6-7/10 |
Oh SHit Cuzzin I Got Tha Names Mixed Up I Thought Genocide Was DopeMan And DopeMan Was Genocide DQ That My Fault Hommie
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Voted For: Dopeman
ehhh....break down Punchez - Dope (harder hitz) Flow - Dope (relative bar length) Multiz - Genocide (felt them multiz) Structure - Genocide (kinda like a box) Personalz - Dope (barely got this) Vocab - Dope (more complex wordz then genocide had) close battle but my votez goes 2 dope man felt both versez jus felt dopemanz verse more big upz ta both tho keep that shit up fam |
Voted For: genocide
Dopeman’s Verse bitch! only thing ya destined for is defeat..... before ya check in, ya pulse is racin an you cant feel your heartbeat... ^eh…decent blood rushes to the brain as you try an think of rhymes constantly hittin delete.. take a seat, cause this the wise men fleet runnin u n ya crew off the track like ah athlete.. ^okay…w/e hea kid this queer sittin here like ''tweet'' sayin ''oops! o my! theres goes my skirt droppin too my feet!''... faggot, you couldnt ''process'' a hot verse if u spent 5 hours trynna assemble it on a microsoft wordsheet!.. ^lines too damn stretched…decent fuckin ''whiteboy'' leavin feed on flows like ''yo dude thats sweet'' when he knows nothin... i laugh at u while your cussin... ^wtf…no u get bitch slapped by your mom for fussin, then she kicks u out the door... but i'm suprized, cause the ho is a fuckin incest whore..... ^okay…… i got a question, whats it like to have a mother whos fuckin her own husbands brother.. an have a auntie freak, that luvs buss'n nuts harder than ''dantes peak''... ^pssh…decent hea cause when its time to rhyme n ride genocide ya knowhere to be found... so call me ''big daddy'' cause i F'd yo momma when i was on the ''rebound''... ^meh…kinda off & on ‘bout tha no’s hea first it was ya sister, then it was ya cousin i call ''rat''... cause she nibbled on my dick an attacthed to my shit like a fuckin jimmy hat.. ^wtf……hell 2 tha no boy ya dumb, even ya occupation is wrongly worded, it should say ''murderd''... an as for ya location, ya found at the wishin well, hopin to god i really dont send u to ''hell''... ^um…didn’t rhyme hea… now ya broke, cause you used your cents for all those wishes..... its not all bad, u can be my bitch n i'll pay you a buck for washin my dishes... ^eh…decent Social Outsyder yo I wish I was god and I could "heal your spits" but even if my hand was up your ass I couldn't "feel your shit" ^okay…decent hea I'm suspensful with or without a pencil like a movie a "thriller" It's like your my helpless victim and I'm the psycho "killer" ^nice hea… I'm overall iller your not gonna be able to "cut it" so before you open your mouth to speak please just "shut it" ^meh…no hea I got the tchnique to wreck bitches like you and leave them "speechless" If you were at the top of Mt. Everest you still couldn't "reach this" ^check ur vocab…decent hea your lyrics are the weakest when I spit it's the "deepest" you could be 6 feet deep and still come close to be as "deep as this" ^nice multi’s hea… your style is weak you freak you must be a "stoner" you cherish my rhymes so much when you read them you get a "boner" ^um…heh…no I'd rather you not spit back your shit rap that lacks it's own "tolerence" ^???? Overall Social took this becuz…had a better flow Punches were slight-harder than Dman’s… And tha structure wasn’t strecth’d like Dman’s… |
Voted For: genocide
social outsyder: nokay drop not the greatest but still nice 1st bar was kind of good but at the same time played I don't really like "shit" lines of any sort. 2nd bar was was okay had a aggressive/effective feel to it. 3rd bar was nice but you started it off with self-glorification and i don't like that kind of stuff at all in verses.....that aren't mine:thumbup: 4th bar was self-glorification all the way through and didn't even help the verse much at all. 5th bar was confusing honestly you keep on using words that have "deep" in it constantly but wordplay was in there. 6th bar decent! overall: 6.5/10 dopeman: decent at best...... i'm not gonna do a line by line review because it's too long but i'll sum it up. First off the entire verse was stretched and that wrecked it up the opener didn't do much for you barely. closer was a weak one but personal helped. the middle got retarded and you completely lost this battle once you did the "momma" line which to me is the most played line in the book honestly....overall: 5/10 vote: genocide |
ok ok ok good good its 4-2 and upiin for meeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee hope you got the casket ready dope because the grim reaper is coming for you...
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uppin for some serious votes on this shit mayn come on yall vote please come on 4-2 me thats all just 4-2
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uppin this for some more votes bitchessssssssssssssssssss
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uppin for some serious votes on this shit mayn come on yall vote please come on 4-2 me thats all just 4-2
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uppin for some serious votes on this shit mayn come on yall vote please come on 4-2 me thats all just 4-2
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uppin this shit boys and girls uppin
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