+cut vs .snap.+
 

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house rules
blind spit
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good luck!

aight yo........


you don't even gotta check in, we all kno u'r verse is crap
my hands could be covered in pnb but your still the worst snap!!*
a purse snatcher, that's the only way you get money
text is crummy, less then funny, flows like i intend it's sunny
fifteen lines? i could beat you in two-let's not get carried away...
have ya lookin down like that dude in your sig u betta call it a day*
tryin to knock me out, give me a keg and a couple qualudes
see your a newbie, so take this truthfully, you'll .snap. and break loose!!
nigga i payed my dues, you just wishin u been noticed...
fixin the votings-i'll get all up in your grill-like my dicks in a foreman
so just sit and listen, my shit dismisses to clock clowns
you so full of it, make like the quick forum box and drop down!!*



explanations for morons...
*peanut butter/snap...tr snappin with peanut butter on your fingers..lol
*dj in his sig is lookin down must have no penis
*quick forum box in control panel..u kno





peace
gl

Each time ya battle me, ya life's a little bit shorter/
Beatin you is like puttin M&M's in alphabetical order/

This newb couldnt fool-me wit a muthafuckin uzie/
Sprayin shit like grass feeder leavin himself in a doozie/

Poor cutastraphe, im spittin a masterpiece, of disaster so-please/
get on ya knees, an' realise i got the keys to your fuckin release/

Your spits~are~hopeless, theses lips strip~your~focus, leaving your body decaying in pits~of~locus/
The closest, you've come ta ferocious doses of rap potions was when ya hocus pocus'd yaself in atrocious lotions/

I bet the record companies hated your style, all it did was bore 'em/
Now you've realised you true dream is to own an internet forum/

Dude, Your Forever 'doomed to text', you'll never -rap on wax-/
And I'm leavin' this cat like Dale Earnhardt, -dead on tracks-!!/

Techinically and tactically proficient when spittin'...illicitly written provisions, testin' this is forbidden/
So sit back and listen as i destroy ya by verbal division..dismissing you for the simple fact that ya aint any competition!!/


HoLLa baCk YouNgIn..w00t w00t!

damn man, nice spit..this'll be good

Good luck man

yeh u too i felt yours u'r structure kinda changed..but u kept the flow pretty consistent....good luck

Puches= cutastraphe- more direct, snap didn't hit hard enough
Wordplay=snap- used lots of good words in the same line, cut-ur direct style went against u on this
Flow=snap-some of cuts stuff didnt make sense till i'd read the explanation at the bottom, so it messed it up a little
Structure=cut-liked the direct style, snap-u mixed it up a little too much
Creativity=snap-got too go to snap cuz of the usage of words,it was interesting

Vote=snap

okay, well...my shit was so direct i don't know how you couldn't understand it. anyways uppin for some more votes.

you don't even gotta check in, we all kno u'r verse is crap
my hands could be covered in pnb but your still the worst snap!!*
You mentioned peanut butter, in a rap, shame
a purse snatcher, that's the only way you get money
text is crummy, less then funny, flows like i intend it's sunny
whack
fifteen lines? i could beat you in two-let's not get carried away...
have ya lookin down like that dude in your sig u betta call it a day*
ehh ok
tryin to knock me out, give me a keg and a couple qualudes
see your a newbie, so take this truthfully, you'll .snap. and break loose!!
decent
nigga i payed my dues, you just wishin u been noticed...
fixin the votings-i'll get all up in your grill-like my dicks in a foreman
played, but ok
so just sit and listen, my shit dismisses to clock clowns
you so full of it, make like the quick forum box and drop down!!*
ok closer



Each time ya battle me, ya life's a little bit shorter/
Beatin you is like puttin M&M's in alphabetical order/
whack and played

This newb couldnt fool-me wit a muthafuckin uzie/
Sprayin shit like grass feeder leavin himself in a doozie/
blah..whackness emergency center kid
Poor cutastraphe, im spittin a masterpiece, of disaster so-please/
get on ya knees, an' realise i got the keys to your fuckin release/
whack, multis are useless if they aren't part of a good punch/personal
Your spits~are~hopeless, theses lips strip~your~focus, leaving your body decaying in pits~of~locus/
The closest, you've come ta ferocious doses of rap potions was when ya hocus pocus'd yaself in atrocious lotions/
I now have a headache. But that was ok. Owwww
I bet the record companies hated your style, all it did was bore 'em/
Now you've realised you true dream is to own an internet forum/
whack
Dude, Your Forever 'doomed to text', you'll never -rap on wax-/
And I'm leavin' this cat like Dale Earnhardt, -dead on tracks-!!/
played and whack
Techinically and tactically proficient when spittin'...illicitly written provisions, testin' this is forbidden/
So sit back and listen as i destroy ya by verbal division..dismissing you for the simple fact that ya aint any competition!!/
played, stretched, and a weak punch

Cutastraphe takes this battle. He had a ok verse, some good punches and personals in there. .snap. came with a weak verse, played lines and such. snap lose the multis until you can make them into witty metas/personals/ounches cause they are worthless on their own. Vote Cut

Please drop an honest vote here guys. please READ the verses, having a prob with that lately http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112157

Punches-snap
Flo-snap
Multies-snap
Metaphors-snap
Closure-snap
Personals-cut
Vote- Snap

Man U Got Mad Propz On That M&m Line Damn!!!!!!!

Hit This Up:
Alyssa
Rap In Astar: She Fought Cuz Natalie Wanted To Fight Kyle And Alyssa's Lil Ass Whooped Natalies Ass Threw Her Head Into The Locker And Started Punchin The Shit Out Of Her

FUCK MY SISTER COPY N PASTED OFF HER A.I.M. SHIT AND PUT IT ON PASTE INSTEAD OF THE LINK BUT HERE IT GOES

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111056

aight this shit is getting slept on...

i thought it was a pretty good battle

can we get some more honest votes, ann we'll hit up any links, if snap don't i'll twist his neck and pop his head off like a bottlecap...aight!!

Yo, i'd hit up your threads, but I'm a newbie...cant poll vote..im more than willing to vote and give my input, but most people sont like it when you vote if u cant poll vote too...


Thanks for your votes

w00t~

snap giving your opinion is better then not giving it..you feel me? when i couldnt poll vote..i still voted regularly..i gave my opinion cuz i don't give ashit bout a poll...it's not like poll votes are a pasttime or anything...lol

This line was very clever and if i could vote i definitely would vote for snap. i liked the Jr. line too.

wake up!!!

upping for some honest votes.
hella slept on this shit may never close.

now I can vote. Snap's multis were a lot better and he used punctuation really well to help to understand his flow. A couple of Cut's punches hit harder, but Snap just had more solid punches and overall better wordplay. In a close battle, i vote for SNAP because he was much more consistent.

Hit this up:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111280

CUT:
you don't even gotta check in, we all kno u'r verse is crap
my hands could be covered in pnb but your still the worst snap!!*
^....ok punch/personal...flowed ok...decent line...6/10
a purse snatcher, that's the only way you get money
text is crummy, less then funny, flows like i intend it's sunny
^....didnt get it quite..not too good here....4/10
fifteen lines? i could beat you in two-let's not get carried away...
have ya lookin down like that dude in your sig u betta call it a day*
^.....ok punch/personal again not too shabby...6/10
tryin to knock me out, give me a keg and a couple qualudes
see your a newbie, so take this truthfully, you'll .snap. and break loose!!
^.....decent set up nice u could have connected it much better 5/10
nigga i payed my dues, you just wishin u been noticed...
fixin the votings-i'll get all up in your grill-like my dicks in a foreman
^.....ehh....filler kinda attempted punch.personal....lacked i thoguht 5/10
so just sit and listen, my shit dismisses to clock clowns
you so full of it, make like the quick forum box and drop down!!*
^......ok closer...nothin special......ok punch....self glorfication is no good(1st line a little)6/10
overall: not a bad verse....punches could be better struct was good....wordplay decent....flowed ok...disses/personals...were ehh....overll u got 32/60

snap:
Each time ya battle me, ya life's a little bit shorter/
Beatin you is like puttin M&M's in alphabetical order/
^ cant be done? cuz thats what that says to me...bad line 3/10
This newb couldnt fool-me wit a muthafuckin uzie/
Sprayin shit like grass feeder leavin himself in a doozie/
^....not good punch...nice multies....filler tho 4/10
Poor cutastraphe, im spittin a masterpiece, of disaster so-please/
get on ya knees, an' realise i got the keys to your fuckin release/
^...fake personal....self glorfication...not too good a punch nice multi ues tho 5/10
Your spits~are~hopeless, theses lips strip~your~focus, leaving your body decaying in pits~of~locus/
The closest, you've come ta ferocious doses of rap potions was when ya hocus pocus'd yaself in atrocious lotions/
^...stretched lines...good multies tho...they were sick here...ok punch...6/10
I bet the record companies hated your style, all it did was bore 'em/
Now you've realised you true dream is to own an internet forum/
^ better punch....good job there....7/10
Dude, Your Forever 'doomed to text', you'll never -rap on wax-/
And I'm leavin' this cat like Dale Earnhardt, -dead on tracks-!!/
^ another good punch/meta....nice u got better here...7/10 loose the hyphens and shit tho
Techinically and tactically proficient when spittin'...illicitly written provisions, testin' this is forbidden/
So sit back and listen as i destroy ya by verbal division..dismissing you for the simple fact that ya aint any competition!!/
^...stretched again....:nono: good clsoer all in all...nice multies again....6/10
overall: you got better toward the end w/ ur punches...work on them....shorten some of your bars...find a way to fit those multies in tho they are sick....40 - 70
overall i vote cutastraphe.....he had 32 out of 60 ...snap had 40 out of 70....those extra two points give CUT the win.....good battle tho....snap u have the idea u'll elevate...but cut's verse was just better here...
vote - cut