2. hotshh! Vs. 16. Jack The Ripper
2. hotshh! Vs. 16. Jack The Ripper
10 Line Minimum - 16 Line Maximum Please Check-In by Wednesday, and Drop your verse by Friday. Good Luck to both of you.. |
I'LL FUCKING KILL YOU BITCH.. oh ya, and good luck :thumbup:
Checkers . . . . King me |
Word, and checking in for my homie hotshh!! good night hoes, im drunk
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hahaha. good luck jack
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Rippin da Jacker, with elbows and low blows below the Waist Kid
Im takin Head out da game quicka than pitchers wit Loaded Bases He's run his mouth in every thread, talking shit like He's Tough By now his breath stink so much,when he speaks his Teeth Duck Not playing HEADGAMES but my "jedi mind trick'll" Spark Haters O hh, he cant BI the WON ......... his alias is DARTH VADER! See Headgames was lame... his status couldnt pay Dividends Came back a 'new man', this is just The Bitch in him Revisiting Final Four is like the NBA playoffs, stayed long but Leave Fast So I'm sending "Sun" home for the summer, Like Steve Nash* Or maybe I'll lose....... and Jack'll prove to be the Better Man With all those D/R's, ya ass gets fingered like Wedding Bands! "Back to ya roots"? must be spitting from a womb dats Polluted Gimme your Titles, cuz "All whores get ripped"... Jack Included Your elevation proves you only stood up to get Knocked Down So U'd have to a go to da dentist, just to say u got "Crowned" .................................................. ......................King ME *I know Marv used a canadian Sun line, this isnt the same, mine just means u going home like steve nash and the suns...voters GET the difference *also JTR's title is " jack rips whores" and his other alias is " Darth Vader" WE'RE BOTH IN THE SAME CREW, WE'RE BOTH DOPE, D/R'S STAY AWAY |
**Royale is a toilet paper brand
. . We prism you to lose when korv takes shape, and that aint sway Cuz closest hotshit comes to royale is when he gets wiped away Ya, hot is fucking gay, so i'll pound your chest like fucking apes Cuz MaRVJay got hotshit over his dick like sweaty prison rapes He's not respected, falls short to legend, dawg is frowned upon Cuz saying the best look up to shit... is defined as an oxymoron Come on son, "Da medicine man" is really wack, I been watching Give hotshh! a taste of his medicine and lower his coffin(coughin) Your not pimp, and not much of a baller either, ya skills is ass Cuz hot couldn't catch a dime... if J-kidd threw him the pass Lack the sex-drive, not really a stud, hotshh! man please behave Cuz the only time he's fucking bitches dead ...is after he's dug up their grave C'mon kid, a loss in the final four again, lemme hand you a clue Your like last place marathon finishers ...you've come so far just to lose Hots my dawg, but when tempers flare, i'm bound to commit a sin Grab your kneck, treat your face like a bar-code and punch it in (peep the wordplay) |
hotshh!
Rippin da Jacker, with elbows and low blows below the Waist Kid Im takin Head out da game quicka than pitchers wit Loaded Bases open was too polite...decent He's run his mouth in every thread, talking shit like He's Tough By now his breath stink so much,when he speaks his Teeth Duck haha. Fiya Not playing HEADGAMES but my "jedi mind trick'll" Spark Haters O hh, he cant BI the WON ......... his alias is DARTH VADER! ha, ok...step it up See Headgames was lame... his status couldnt pay Dividends Came back a 'new man', this is just The Bitch in him Revisiting so so, flow was juggled Final Four is like the NBA playoffs, stayed long but Leave Fast So I'm sending "Sun" home for the summer, Like Steve Nash* good Or maybe I'll lose....... and Jack'll prove to be the Better Man With all those D/R's, ya ass gets fingered like Wedding Bands! haha, another hit "Back to ya roots"? must be spitting from a womb dats Polluted Gimme your Titles, cuz "All whores get ripped"... Jack Included dope bar Your elevation proves you only stood up to get Knocked Down So U'd have to a go to da dentist, just to say u got "Crowned" closing with this line was ite, could have been great *this verse for the most part was fire. real good punches, the personals came in every line. shit was hot. the comdey was a plus, had my chuckle a few times. word. umm real hot verse, the flow was juggled in a line or two. but again for the most part, ya verse was FIYA... 91% Jack The Ripper We prism you to lose when korv takes shape, and that aint sway Cuz closest hotshit comes to royale is when he gets wiped away good open, not special Ya, hot is fucking gay, so i'll pound your chest like fucking apes Cuz MaRVJay got hotshit over his dick like sweaty prison rapes bar wasnt bad, i just didnt like it He's not respected, falls short to legend, dawg is frowned upon Cuz saying the best look up to shit... is defined as an oxymoron oxymoron = most used punch-word, but still a good bar Come on son, "Da medicine man" is really wack, I been watching Give hotshh! a taste of his medicine and lower his coffin(coughin) ite, again...nothin special Your not pimp, and not much of a baller either, ya skills is ass Cuz hot couldn't catch a dime... if J-kidd threw him the pass haha, good Lack the sex-drive, not really a stud, hotshh! man please behave Cuz the only time he's fucking bitches dead ...is after he's dug up their grave new concept, was that relavent though?[b] C'mon kid, a loss in the final four again, lemme hand you a clue Your like last place marathon finishers ...you've come so far just to lose [b]confidence is good Hots my dawg, but when tempers flare, i'm bound to commit a sin Grab your kneck, treat your face like a bar-code and punch it in haha, ite...good shit *you worked completely different than hotshh! here. ya verse was good. i liked the confidence as well.punches were hot, but you had a little more filler than hotshh!. the more personals you can intertwine with ya punches the better. and thats the tie breaker here. good read, especially the closuer...good shit. but my vote still goes to hotssh! for less fill and more comdey....88% vote: hotshh! good shit yall & good luck. |
Rippin da Jacker, with elbows and low blows below the Waist Kid
Im takin Head out da game quicka than pitchers wit Loaded Bases 6...this was an ok punch, i wasn't really feelin the setup with the whole you takin him out with all the low blows and shit, loads of people have dropped shit like that!! He's run his mouth in every thread, talking shit like He's Tough By now his breath stink so much,when he speaks his Teeth Duck 7...LMAO!!! comedy lines are cool!!! the whole teeth duck idea was nice and it went with the setup well so props on that!! Not playing HEADGAMES but my "jedi mind trick'll" Spark Haters O hh, he cant BI the WON ......... his alias is DARTH VADER! 8...DOPE!!!! the wordplay in this punch was dope as fuck with the whole Obi Won shit, you played nicely off his vader alias with the star wars concept!!! See Headgames was lame... his status couldnt pay Dividends Came back a 'new man', this is just The Bitch in him Revisiting 6...decent personal, a nice punch although i think that the whole bar was kinda basic and cud've been better with some dope wordplay!!! Final Four is like the NBA playoffs, stayed long but Leave Fast So I'm sending "Sun" home for the summer, Like Steve Nash* 6...yeah, not all that similar to Marv's punch in fact, but still i wasn't feelin it and it lacked really in comparison to ya earlier punches!! Or maybe I'll lose....... and Jack'll prove to be the Better Man With all those D/R's, ya ass gets fingered like Wedding Bands! 6...played concept, but ya made it funny with the wedding bands piece!! "Back to ya roots"? must be spitting from a womb dats Polluted Gimme your Titles, cuz "All whores get ripped"... Jack Included 7...DAMN!!! playin off his user title like that was dope and nuthin too basic with the rhymin either!! Your elevation proves you only stood up to get Knocked Down So U'd have to a go to da dentist, just to say u got "Crowned" .................................................. ......................King ME 5...NO!!! worst part of ya verse, the whole elevation and dentist concepts are both played, i have seen them many times before!! OVERALL: 51/80 We prism you to lose when korv takes shape, and that aint sway Cuz closest hotshit comes to royale is when he gets wiped away 5...not feelin the opener, i mean even with the link.....talkin about hot shit to play off his name has been done too many times, i am yet to see an original play on his name!! Ya, hot is fucking gay, so i'll pound your chest like fucking apes Cuz MaRVJay got hotshit over his dick like sweaty prison rapes 5...callin him gay was stupid and pointless, and the whole dickridin concept is fuckin played like shit man!! i mean at least try to make it funny when ya use it!! He's not respected, falls short to legend, dawg is frowned upon Cuz saying the best look up to shit... is defined as an oxymoron 7...LOL!!! a nice line at last, the oxymoron part was dope, although i feel the setup was kinda basic!! Come on son, "Da medicine man" is really wack, I been watching Give hotshh! a taste of his medicine and lower his coffin(coughin) 7...NICE!!! a good play off of his user title and with the dope wordplay it made a nice punch altogether!! Your not pimp, and not much of a baller either, ya skills is ass Cuz hot couldn't catch a dime... if J-kidd threw him the pass 6...nice punch, the setup was pretty average but the J-Kidd shit was nice!! Lack the sex-drive, not really a stud, hotshh! man please behave Cuz the only time he's fucking bitches dead ...is after he's dug up their grave 8...DAMN!!! LMFAO!!! this was a killer line, original concept and an overall dope punch!! C'mon kid, a loss in the final four again, lemme hand you a clue Your like last place marathon finishers ...you've come so far just to lose 7...nice wordplay, the marathon concept has been done a few times before but you put a new twist on it so props for that!! Hots my dawg, but when tempers flare, i'm bound to commit a sin Grab your kneck, treat your face like a bar-code and punch it in 7...good wordplay again, a nice closer, the barcode - punch it in concept was pretty nice!!! OVERALL: 52/80 damn...that was a close battle... both came good, although not as consistent as i expected...both had a REAL DOPE line and both had some wack lines....i thought that hotshh had it at first cuz JTR had a couple of gay lines to begin with, but he brought it together to the end with some real nice punches....hotshh had some nice punches, just not as hard hittin as jack and he had that gay line at the end......... no hate... VOTE = Jack The Ripper |
hotshh! Rippin da Jacker, with elbows and low blows below the Waist Kid Im takin Head out da game quicka than pitchers wit Loaded Bases —4, not feelin this opener He's run his mouth in every thread, talking shit like He's Tough By now his breath stink so much,when he speaks his Teeth Duck —6, average Not playing HEADGAMES but my "jedi mind trick'll" Spark Haters O hh, he cant BI the WON ......... his alias is DARTH VADER! —4, nope See Headgames was lame... his status couldnt pay Dividends Came back a 'new man', this is just The Bitch in him Revisiting —5, decent Final Four is like the NBA playoffs, stayed long but Leave Fast So I'm sending "Sun" home for the summer, Like Steve Nash* —5, decent Or maybe I'll lose....... and Jack'll prove to be the Better Man With all those D/R's, ya ass gets fingered like Wedding Bands! —6, pretty decent "Back to ya roots"? must be spitting from a womb dats Polluted Gimme your Titles, cuz "All whores get ripped"... Jack Included —7, nice Your elevation proves you only stood up to get Knocked Down So U'd have to a go to da dentist, just to say u got "Crowned" —4, weak closer Overall – 41/80 Jack The Ripper We prism you to lose when korv takes shape, and that aint sway Cuz closest hotshit comes to royale is when he gets wiped away —6, average opener Ya, hot is fucking gay, so i'll pound your chest like fucking apes Cuz MaRVJay got hotshit over his dick like sweaty prison rapes —4, weak.. He's not respected, falls short to legend, dawg is frowned upon Cuz saying the best look up to shit... is defined as an oxymoron —6, bar was good Come on son, "Da medicine man" is really wack, I been watching Give hotshh! a taste of his medicine and lower his coffin(coughin) —5, decent Your not pimp, and not much of a baller either, ya skills is ass Cuz hot couldn't catch a dime... if J-kidd threw him the pass —4, weak Lack the sex-drive, not really a stud, hotshh! man please behave Cuz the only time he's fucking bitches dead ...is after he's dug up their grave —7, nice C'mon kid, a loss in the final four again, lemme hand you a clue Your like last place marathon finishers ...you've come so far just to lose —5, decent Hots my dawg, but when tempers flare, i'm bound to commit a sin Grab your kneck, treat your face like a bar-code and punch it in —5, closer was aight here Overall – 42/80 Winner – Jack The Ripper |
[uHotshh[/u]
Rippin da Jacker, with elbows and low blows below the Waist Kid Im takin Head out da game quicka than pitchers wit Loaded Bases ok He's run his mouth in every thread, talking shit like He's Tough By now his breath stink so much,when he speaks his Teeth Duck This joke is played when casing niggas Not playing HEADGAMES but my "jedi mind trick'll" Spark Haters O hh, he cant BI the WON ......... his alias is DARTH VADER! eh.. See Headgames was lame... his status couldnt pay Dividends Came back a 'new man', this is just The Bitch in him Revisiting good Final Four is like the NBA playoffs, stayed long but Leave Fast So I'm sending "Sun" home for the summer, Like Steve Nash* ok Or maybe I'll lose....... and Jack'll prove to be the Better Man With all those D/R's, ya ass gets fingered like Wedding Bands! nope "Back to ya roots"? must be spitting from a womb dats Polluted Gimme your Titles, cuz "All whores get ripped"... Jack Included nice Your elevation proves you only stood up to get Knocked Down So U'd have to a go to da dentist, just to say u got "Crowned" good Jack The Ripper We prism you to lose when korv takes shape, and that aint sway Cuz closest hotshit comes to royale is when he gets wiped away eh.. Ya, hot is fucking gay, so i'll pound your chest like fucking apes Cuz MaRVJy got hotshit over his dick like sweaty prison rapes weak He's not respected, falls short to legend, dawg is frowned upon Cuz saying the best look up to shit... is defined as an oxymoron weak Come on son, "Da medicine man" is really wack, I been watching Give hotshh! a taste of his medicine and lower his coffin(coughin) nice Your not pimp, and not much of a baller either, ya skills is ass Cuz hot couldn't catch a dime... if J-kidd threw him the pass good Lack the sex-drive, not really a stud, hotshh! man please behave Cuz the only time he's fucking bitches dead ...is after he's dug up their grave weak C'mon kid, a loss in the final four again, lemme hand you a clue Your like last place marathon finishers ...you've come so far just to lose weak Hots my dawg, but when tempers flare, i'm bound to commit a sin Grab your kneck, treat your face like a bar-code and punch it in weak Vote = Jack the Ripper |
good battle, but wtf with tremendous saying 5 lines of jacks were weak, and still giving him the win
rate the punches nucca!! good shit JTF |
lol Trem ain't even in the VC, I don't think
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Rippin da Jacker, with elbows and low blows below the Waist Kid
Im takin Head out da game quicka than pitchers wit Loaded Bases ^^nice opener He's run his mouth in every thread, talking shit like He's Tough By now his breath stink so much,when he speaks his Teeth Duck ^^ive seen this concept lots... but it relevent so koo... Not playing HEADGAMES but my "jedi mind trick'll" Spark Haters O hh, he cant BI the WON ......... his alias is DARTH VADER! ^^didnt connect great, good concept but wordin was off here See Headgames was lame... his status couldnt pay Dividends Came back a 'new man', this is just The Bitch in him Revisiting ^^nah, wasnt feelin this line hot...sorry homie Final Four is like the NBA playoffs, stayed long but Leave Fast So I'm sending "Sun" home for the summer, Like Steve Nash* ^^koo............................ Or maybe I'll lose....... and Jack'll prove to be the Better Man With all those D/R's, ya ass gets fingered like Wedding Bands! ^^ohh, best bar so far....very relevent..lol.. "Back to ya roots"? must be spitting from a womb dats Polluted Gimme your Titles, cuz "All whores get ripped"... Jack Included ^^nice.......................... Your elevation proves you only stood up to get Knocked Down So U'd have to a go to da dentist, just to say u got "Crowned" .................................................. ......................King ME .nice closer.........good verse. . We prism you to lose when korv takes shape, and that aint sway Cuz closest hotshit comes to royale is when he gets wiped away ^^funny stuff.. Ya, hot is fucking gay, so i'll pound your chest like fucking apes Cuz MaRVJay got hotshit over his dick like sweaty prison rapes ^^nah homie He's not respected, falls short to legend, dawg is frowned upon Cuz saying the best look up to shit... is defined as an oxymoron ^^this was koo Come on son, "Da medicine man" is really wack, I been watching Give hotshh! a taste of his medicine and lower his coffin(coughin) ^^decent concept...bit to wordy Your not pimp, and not much of a baller either, ya skills is ass Cuz hot couldn't catch a dime... if J-kidd threw him the pass ^^eh...personally wasnt feelin it Lack the sex-drive, not really a stud, hotshh! man please behave Cuz the only time he's fucking bitches dead ...is after he's dug up their grave ^^ok......good concept C'mon kid, a loss in the final four again, lemme hand you a clue Your like last place marathon finishers ...you've come so far just to lose ^^ok Hots my dawg, but when tempers flare, i'm bound to commit a sin Grab your kneck, treat your face like a bar-code and punch it in ^^decent . . not voting, :thumbup: |
3-1 me if tremendous counts, otherwise 2-1
We got a battle here fellas |
Only 2-1, Tremndous is not on the voting council..
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weerdness, upping them
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We prism you to lose when korv takes shape, and that aint sway
Cuz closest hotshit comes to royale is when he gets wiped away ^ only good line wow hot came ass X 200000000 v/ the guy who wasn't hot... |
3-1............ upping yo yo
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pretty sure it's 2-1
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King Solo - Me
Skriptz - Me Sdizzle - Me Eph - hotshh! 3-1 bro |
ight i aint gonna have time to vote properly so ill just break uit down as easy as i can..
hotshh! i thought u had some real dope lines in there... good punches decent concepts and some good personals... other lines wernt as hard hitting or not as effective in other words as the other ones here is some lines i liked anyway: He's run his mouth in every thread, talking shit like He's Tough By now his breath stink so much,when he speaks his Teeth Duck ^^ this line was dope... not played and very effective Not playing HEADGAMES but my "jedi mind trick'll" Spark Haters O hh, he cant BI the WON ......... his alias is DARTH VADER! ^^ good concept went off star wars and came off wit a dope personal here are saome lines i didn't like: "Back to ya roots"? must be spitting from a womb dats Polluted Gimme your Titles, cuz "All whores get ripped"... Jack Included ^^ this was ok but i wasn't really feeling it as much as the others... overall im gonna gvie you 86/100 Jack the ripper: ight i felt u had a real strong verse... good punches not played punches... good structure and flow i didn't think u had one shit punch they were all dope here is 1 bar i liked: We prism you to lose when korv takes shape, and that aint sway Cuz closest hotshit comes to royale is when he gets wiped away ^^ this was real dope lol... good wordplay aswell here is 1 bar i didn't like: Hots my dawg, but when tempers flare, i'm bound to commit a sin Grab your kneck, treat your face like a bar-code and punch it in ^^ kinda played but it was alright.. overall imma give you 88/100 this is hard to call becuz both of them had a real good verse but i think imma give it to Jack coz he stayed more concistant and had better wordplay in his verses... pzz v/ jack |
word, I knew this one was gonna be close, good battle yo', 4-1 me..
I wish there was the 4-1 k.o. rule :thumbup: |
i sincerely hope that sdizzle's vote doesnt count
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.................. it was an honest vote
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.................. 3-1, or 4-1
wt/v upping yoyo |
3-1
sdizzle asscheeks good battle, if u beat me, better win it all Jack.... |
weeeerd, but it aint over just yet
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hot-shh:
Rippin da Jacker, with elbows and low blows below the Waist Kid Im takin Head out da game quicka than pitchers wit Loaded Bases that was skraight...first line was weak...6/10 He's run his mouth in every thread, talking shit like He's Tough By now his breath stink so much,when he speaks his Teeth Duck played...thats an old joke..and i said that to this boy when i was rankin on his momma...3/10 Not playing HEADGAMES but my "jedi mind trick'll" Spark Haters O hh, he cant BI the WON ......... his alias is DARTH VADER! nice...9/10 See Headgames was lame... his status couldnt pay Dividends Came back a 'new man', this is just The Bitch in him Revisiting no...that was weak...4/10 Final Four is like the NBA playoffs, stayed long but Leave Fast So I'm sending "Sun" home for the summer, Like Steve Nash* played after marvjay used a suns line in the last round...4/10 Or maybe I'll lose....... and Jack'll prove to be the Better Man With all those D/R's, ya ass gets fingered like Wedding Bands! lol...good...7.5/10 "Back to ya roots"? must be spitting from a womb dats Polluted Gimme your Titles, cuz "All whores get ripped"... Jack Included that was alrite....6.5/10 Your elevation proves you only stood up to get Knocked Down So U'd have to a go to da dentist, just to say u got "Crowned" good...8/10 overall-48/80(60%) jack the ripper: We prism you to lose when korv takes shape, and that aint sway Cuz closest hotshit comes to royale is when he gets wiped away lol....8/10 Ya, hot is fucking gay, so i'll pound your chest like fucking apes Cuz MaRVJay got hotshit over his dick like sweaty prison rapes lmao...that was pretty good...8.5/10 He's not respected, falls short to legend, dawg is frowned upon Cuz saying the best look up to shit... is defined as an oxymoron not feelin that oxymoron shit anymore after mase used it...4/10 Come on son, "Da medicine man" is really wack, I been watching Give hotshh! a taste of his medicine and lower his coffin(coughin) concept was skr8...delivery wasnt as strong....str8 tho...7/10 Your not pimp, and not much of a baller either, ya skills is ass Cuz hot couldn't catch a dime... if J-kidd threw him the pass weak...4/10 Lack the sex-drive, not really a stud, hotshh! man please behave Cuz the only time he's fucking bitches dead ...is after he's dug up their grave ehhh...5/10 C'mon kid, a loss in the final four again, lemme hand you a clue Your like last place marathon finishers ...you've come so far just to lose decent...5.5/10 Hots my dawg, but when tempers flare, i'm bound to commit a sin Grab your kneck, treat your face like a bar-code and punch it in straight....7/10 overall-49/80(61%) vote-jack the ripper |
thats 4-1
5-1 if dizzles vote counts |
............. I guess both battles can be closed now yo!
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Jack The Ripper Wins
Battle closed. |
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