Mom I'm sorry
 

This is just a little keystyle. It's about whats goin on in my life right now.


Mom why do we gotta be this way....fightin everyday/
Last night was the worst....we aint even spoke today/
Is there anythin I can say to make it better....to stop the pain/
I hate the fact that when somebody mentions my name you drop your head in shame/
All I got without you is my love for the rap game....thats not enough/
Coz I love you so much....but you've hurt me so I've gotta stand tough/
I feel locked in a world of hate....like I'm handcuffed/
I can't break free....All I wanna do is hear you say I love you Lee/
Mom It's me....your son....please dont abandon me/
One day you'll see I can make you proud/
I'm gonna be somebody one day then you can shout my name out loud/
You can listen to the sound of my voice on a microphone/
Soon we'll forget all the nightmares of livin in a broken home/
I cant wait til that day coz right now I feel lonely and alone/
Mom please call me on me cell phone/
We patch things up in a hurry/
I'll make the first move....mom I'm sorry/.


Explaination:
Lee - my name
The rest is self explainitory

On the second to last line I was meant to say :
We need to patch things up in a hurry/

^^^I forgot to write need^^^

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Peace!!!

man, i am feeling this peice so much, it is bringing tears to my eyes. but hings will be ok, just give it time. i went through the same things with my mom. But don't let it go too long, you are never garrunteed tomorrow.

R.I.P. Daisy (I Love You)

Yo thanks for the comment man.

yo it was a nice peice man, jus keep doin wat ya doin, yo we shud do a collab sum time

Yeah sounds good to me. Yo I'll Pm you....got some updates to report.

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damn, i just have to keep reading it, i'm glad to have gotten in touch with you, or vise versa, whatever, it happened, i got some more things that i can type up for you and email if you want it

^^^That makes it sound like he wrote it.
I wanna announce that this open mic peice is by LM and nobody else.

my bad man, i was directiong it toward you though, like i was talking to you, My fault

No big deal. Besides your ones would be a lot better than that

naa man you are better!!!!, I am just trying to get in here

That was my first open mic.
I'm more of a battler but I open mic is the next step for me....that and my crew

Stop riding each other's dicks up in here!

LOL!

Very nice piece, LM...

Deep, meaningful and emotional.

A very good callout for peace with moms.

You should let her read it.

I can relate, but I'm older and colder...

My relationship with my mom fell apart, what, 20 years ago?

And we haven't spoken since.

Like I said, older and colder, I have no regrets.

She was an insane bitch, but you seem ta have something worth saving...so do it.

Props to ya.

Peace

Thanks man. Sorry to hear bout you and your mom....even if you have no regrets

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i love this piece....... LM, how old are you?

u got some talent for this.... your relationship with ur mother is worth something - dont give it up

I'm 16.
My and my mom are speakin now....sort of

yo dawg that shit was ill, i aint really relatin to it, cuz me and my moms r like aquantices more than family, ever since ma dad's been in lockdown, but yo peep my battles

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yo LM i really liked this piece. i (and too damn many others) can completely feel for ya; i just found out my mom's a lyin bitch, and i now loath her.... oh well, life goes on.
we like this piece cuz we can relate (and tha rhyme scheme's tight too), don't we, alex? Yes, we do, johnny.

keep up tha good werk.

Re: Mom I'm sorry
 

Damn, this was a deep peice son. I could tell that this was from the heart. I feel you tho son, my moms and me fight all the time it seems lately and your post really hits home for me. Big upz to you and keep your head up son, 1

Yo thanks for the feedback everybody

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this is a very nice drop..........it is very deep..................u had some nice lines wit good wordplay........................................

if this is true i hope u patch things up with your mom


good drop

holla

i have to agree with what most people are saying this made for a good read, you showed some nice vocab.......no point in writin out again whats been said.......keep it up....

can you hit this plz its gettin slept on....
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...&threadid=88249

if this is your first open mic then damn... keep up that good shit man.

Thanks for the comments everybody....keep them comin and check out my second ever open mic peice...It's called 'This is my life'.

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Yo LM this is startin to seem funny.... first the almost 8-mile, then I'm sorry Momma too?! It's alright man..... I guess....(smirk)

I never thought bout that either. I wrote this the mornin after me and my mom had an arguement. It was a bad one too. I wasnt thinkin of Cleanin out my closet at all. But once again your right. See what you can think of for my one called 'This is my life'.

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