Lil' Ghost vs. .-beatnuts
 

aight,

this a quick one

so like 10-15 lines


aight


no dick ridin
no hate votes
explain answers


check in, then spit


dont take longer than 20 min.



peace


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g'luck homie.

oh yeah


you spit first


you took it

you spit it


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ayo
finally my first battle and u already dug ya own grave/
u cant fuck wit me u gotta better chance tryin to survive aids/
good luck homie? no u the 1 that need it cuz Im bad for ya health/
and u should stick ya fingers in ya ass cuz u the only 1 feelin yaself/
emberassment is a part of the game and thats what I came to do/
u rep brooklyn like u hard when ya own familys ashamed of u/
tell ya mommy I apologize to make u bitch n pout/
but I didnt know u could talk so much shit wit my dick in ya mouth/
u a rookie Im just usin u for a laugh/
the last time u took a bath/
micheal jackson was black and albert einsten was bad at math/
this is like a fight but u dont fight back/
save yourself some pride and dont even write back/ :shoot:

la la la la la la la la i get high high high
 

Lets do this..


This kid Wants To SPARK~THIS~SAVAGE When He MARKETS~WACKNESS with his RETARDED~AVERAGE. //
He Can't Even 'Recycle' With Such A GARBAGE~PASSAGE. //
My SHARPENED~AXES Manage To Do The HARDEST~DAMAGE //
Voters Should CHARGE~THIS~MAGGOT For being forced to read a part SO~STAGDENT..//
It's Got Niggas Screamin': "WHAT A HEARTLESS FAGGOT!" I Let No One GUARD~HIS~ASHES. //

This Kid's Engulfed-In-Flames Now That I've POURED~THE~HEAT..//
What A SORE~DEFEAT For An Already MORBID~STREAK.. //
This HORRID~GEEK Is So POORLY~WEAK He Found A Way To LOSE~2~THE~MAJORITY.!? //
The GORE~IS~FREE.! My Punches Ensure That His CORPSE'LL~BLEED Now That My CHORSE'LL~LEAK. //
I'll Slash This POROUS~FREAK Like I Was 'Darth-Maul' With The FORCE~IN~ME.!! //
OF~COURSE~I~MEAN...

This Kid Blows And GROPES~DICK, Ghost JUST~HOPE~LESS. //
Sufferin' From Diarrhea `N Coke, Fit's His Only Chance Of Droppin' "DOPE" "SHIT" //
Ghost Gets SMOKED~QUICK By My FLOWS~WIT., Plus I THROW~FISTS..!! //
And When The VOTES~DRIP, Ghosts GROSS~SPIT Gets Ignored Like 'College-Girls' With NO~TITS. //
GHOSTS BROKE~`N ~HOMELESS CHOKING~ON~EMOTIONS With His THROAT~SLIT.! //



aight


i told ya g'luck


lets get the votes in


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Ilol Get to dizz lattaz

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lil ghost, loved tha punches so therefore

v/lil ghost

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Yo beats when ya gonna drop on our battle......
since im here might as well fucken vote
close battle....but i think this comes down to who had better personals
and since beats hardly had any i guess this goes to lil ghost...but beats would
of had this if he had some personals in there

vote ghost

1-1...uppin


put your poll vote in complex



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ill get my vote in in a bit


















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Break Down

Lil' Ghost

Flow 3/10
Rhymes 4/10
Punches 5/10
Structure 3/10
15/40

_- BeatNutz -_

Flow 6/10
Rhymes 7/10
Punches 6/10
Structure 3/10
21/40

V/Beatnutz I was feelin his more even though both verses could do with improvement keep it up fellas

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Lil' Ghost im feeling yah verse more even if this is a weak battle..-beatnuts the rules say 10-15 lines not 3 lines bunched together to make one. NIGGA READ!!!!!ANYWAY, THIS BATTLE COULD HAVE BEEN BETTER,WAY BETTERbut lil ghoat you took it with your punches, nuts all that vicab couldn't help you, i didn't understand a damn thing you wrote,your structure was fucked.step up big time niggas...

v/lil ghost.

Loved them damn punchlines, keep it up. Peace!

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maybe you should get fucking educated

dumb nigga


hahahahah


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aight heres how its gonna go


vocab - beatnuts, all of you who can't understand it are just dumb niggas, pick up a dictionary.

multis - easily gone to beatnuts, multis off the whole shit

complexity - beatnuts, complex shit man.. i felt it

personals - lil ghost, they weren't that good in my sense, just kind of played out.


so clearly this vote goes to .-BEATNUTS


aight?


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yo i can't pole vote this shit, it wont let me but note that it went to beatnuts

3-2 uppin for votes.




lets finish this shit

i dont even understand why you guys even sway to him, his shit was so bland and the punches were fucking preschool

but whatever


votes in homies


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upppinn for votes, lets get em in


right nowwww

gohst won this down to his massive punches that i liked dat slaughted beatnuts easy because they were some fuckin nasy ass disses. I read the other shit and it had nice word play and multies but the verse sucked and hardly made sense which i didn't like and went way over your line limit.

bk 2 tha future vs. verbal violence


return tha favor

nuts shit was up a level ghost
so i give it to ghost by way of better voab and personals

i fucked up names got mixed up i give it to nuts

ghost dawg good battle yo u had some nice punches in ya verse i think the other guy was tryin to get to complexed and didnt come wit that hard of punches and had some nice use of ur vocab so did the other guy u both came strong but punches is what wins and ghost u had it dawg
v/ghost

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Yo, Beat, I like your style man. You had a lot of tight multies and wordplay, but your structure was awful. That's what kinda made you lose my vote, though I liked yours just a tid better.

On the other hand, Ghost, you were funny wit yours. Though your punches didn't hit hard, they made me laugh (which is the key to my vote).

vote- Ghost

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