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22 Bars Of Pure Creative Dissin (all of RV"even you")...¤ÐÅž¤...
. . . . . . . . . Look , RV’s Flow aint straight like the tower of Piza, who needs ya Be like tha Q, …….cuz hes always usta bitten the hand that feeds ya Get what im implying..? fine, literally, his lines just ”never-mind” Aint no lieing, L.I.’s text is weak shit, even wit his name in rewind. distilled I aint no Christian, but I bust wraps..n your package is still missin! It aint personal…so listen.. it’s a battle site..and yes I manage the dissin Hey 9th degree the fights on, you in the streets? but only as a pile-on, Who's a has-been wit“U”gone ? its Spul…RV’s new whacktastic rap icon! Its funny, ya prolly think Jack is foul, battle’him, he’ll throw in the towel grate like gravel ? nah…he only gets Pat's when sayin”ide like 2 buy a vowel” keep sight of this..i’ll leave Jdot right of fists…he was caught in spite of this left as tight as his miss..? nah cuz even his riders are saying He might’ve bit N Bones you shouldn’t stare homes, switched wit a vet.. but still unknown No1’s throned , T.E just pulling text outta their ass’s leavin’em bare boned RV’s wack spastic menaces.. all with 0-0 recs spit-ten Pathetic sentences. ya lames seem endless n don’t connect with tracks like magnetic forensics Who’s who?..wacks, lames, herbs n vets say threats more then actions foo GW ,fuck-ya crew…, cuz a sess-pool has more natural flow then you do Who’s gay next.! Triple N flex..... he’ll prolly say that was uncalled for I bet(rofl) Then theres Lay-text, ..who don’t lay vets even if RV was a damn porno set Should I stop it, I mean what about that newkid and "Jimmy the hobbit pop shit or lost it? punch me! How? when ya hands are stuck in ya pocketz" Kesse diss guys(disguise)ya wackness..do you stretch bars 4 practice? I spit the facts kid… and ghost writers have just drove par with wackness Who’s nemesis? the wackness of mimesis?....but both spitters diminish-in- Battles they’ve finished in…. killing noobs don’t gain you recognition-in- Strobes books, here’s a low-blow to this net geek hobo homo…oh no.. I lost my flow…. Bann my ass…cuz I still aint hearing that fuck(in)Echo Ready get set GO..! King Y@Yo..yes well your skill is UM. Untraceable <that cats defiantly e-rasable..diss red bull…hell nah..just rip off his label Who DV8's for more? If you don’t make me cum hard ill ‘Fiya the whore’ You settle the score? Its in his name but he never makes use of Metaphors Its like Em flipping the bird stan, It’s the last resort which is Herb-land the OM.Band don’t spin no more, cuz he's Played out like “$wordman$” crushed?..sounds like a sitter talking, n SikezstWun’s neva spitten bitter toxins I don’t care what ya thoughts is, d-rock gets pissed on more then litter boxes Lack of votes im stunned, banned cuz Decree’s raps look like dumb grunge & C.S is a slum bunch, they open up for anyone….. kinda like a c.um s.ponge We all know morse codes cracked like a Black queen who likes blow plus vango’s lost his flow ever since he signed himself on those dyke hoes go get signed then tossed, cuz really to infect-your mindz it would cost this lines for nos, cuz hes not clean witted even if his mind was flossed who’s ¤ÐÅž¤, well hes a spaz., i mean he just dissed all of rv, will he last? fuck don’t ask…. Do the math, do YOU think you could merk his ass? . . . . . . ¤ÐÅž¤ . . . . . . :thumbup: This has been a very sow-low production :thumbup: . to all mentioned, nothin personal this is just another concept..pz |
ok this was pretty decent i got some shit like this talking bout porn stars it was pretty good alot of shit would slide past people on wax so text fits this good as hell here the flows a lil off disses aint great but ok creativity its ok like i said ive done this as has alot of others but it surpasses and is pretty decent id say a 7/10
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Thanx For The Honesty Cali, Like I Was Sayin, It Was A Bitch To Try N Incorporate All The Members.....i Think A Couple Of Personals Directed At Certain People Flew Over Your Head, But I Figured Alot Of It Was Going To Be Like That......looking At It Now, I Relieze Im Tired As Hell..........
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Fam this is dope...cali did state that this sorta thing has been done before..but never like this..
Your creativity is on point..flow is good...originality in disses locked in for you.. vocab is good. My opinion...best rv diss i have ever read..... |
i didnt get dissed wooooooooooot woooooooooooooooooooot
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Why didn't I get dissed :( *disappointed*
Lemme break this down: flow is nice, maybe a bit off here and there but overall, I was feeling it. Punches were nice, good creativity in there and you dropped some mad personals to cats on here. Found good balance in your vocab and structure was good as well, like how you bolded the names so it's easier to see who exactly gets dissed. Solid diss right here! DQ |
DUDE!!
This was mad hot, real hard hittin but ugggggh, i had my verse, i did like over 50 lines of dissin an yo' pm's was full!!! |
Wow Used My Name Man , Wow, Any Way The Rest Pretty Decent Man
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Im pissed all these diss threads and none for me
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wow, all I can say this is way better than I can ever do.. Creativity was great..
"Who’s who?..wacks, lames, herbs n vets say threats more then actions foo GW ,fuck-ya crew…, cuz a sess-pool has more natural flow then you do" I hella laughed at this one.. but what get's me.. When you can have people upset that you didn't use their name in a diss. Like, they feel let down. :itchin' head: *Still ponderin'* hmm, I don't know.. Hella wicked weird to me... But over all this was a solid drop.. over all I give it 9/10 Keep this up man.. Late Sweft |
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if you was online yesterday, you may have been dissed but if you hide ya name(offline) then i kinda forgot bout you lol,..esco,sorry man io was wondering why i didnt get ya verse yesterday meh..........thanx for the feed peeps.....srry if i missed ya...lol :thumbup: |
this was pretty dope....flowed nicely, good creativity in there, i thought there'd be a little more members, lol...but still was good, had me laughing good on some lines, like the jdot line, lol....and my line, you bastard, meh, i knew id probly pop up after my diss....word to daz, keep up
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OOH diss me next lol...this was hot...liked this a lot...8/10 rtf if you haven't already
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Lol somebody finally dissed me. What up Daz, ain't talked to you in a minute. But good shit right there, dope throughout its entirity. Keep up the good work :thumbup:.
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^^^^^^^^^go peep my diss damn it^^^^^^^^^^^
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Yea this was a nice joint liucky i didn't get mentioned nice multies good flow decent structure some funny as fuck punches...personals as well name flippin like hell too was a decent verse...it'd be interestin to see how u do if you go audio.
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diss me! diss me!...lmfao...solid shit man...everybody spoke my words for me...so, 9/10...nice one...ya next one should diss all tha herbs so we can get exposure...lol
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this wasn't the best I've seen from you, but never the less it was still good, I liked it, not bad, I liked how you got lot's of people in to it, some good lines, other lines were kinda week, I didnt expect to get dissed lol, overall though it was ok and creative and i'd give it a 7/10
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Ha word you dissed me =/...
I liked this peice... this was kool Your structure was good , you dressed up your verse... nice way to make it look good , you had some hard punchlines.. Some decent personals , overall this was a decent drop.. Seen you do alot better... nothin' taken about my diss :) we still fam |
wow, 99 views and 26 post. Hmm, interesting. I wish I can get like, 20 replys one one of my poems! (LoL)
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that shits tight bruh...8.5/10...dint get dissed...iono whetha to think thas good or not????
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this is some good shit..i liked this alot..orriginality is the key point here..your creativity in punches inspires me..
dope shit nigkah! |
uppin till all the lil mo-fo's i dissed comment..
.imma send this in ya dreams just to make ya vomit... . uppin |
Hmm. Thought we didn't have problems? You already know I'ma clap back.
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Daz am dissapointed..lol
DV WASNT IN THIS>>LOL |
word thanks for the diss, can you explain it though, lol
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Rofl, dummy he just dissed everyone that was online at the time.. |
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your sig homie..............lol,..i know no personals bought you lol............ :thumbup: Quote:
hoe diggity damn,.....gheesh, im startin to relieze i missed alot of poeople! when im audio....ill include you.......lol...... :thumbup: Quote:
lmfao,..thats sooo funny...j look at the feedback homes your the ONLY one takin offense to this :laugh: chill-son |
this was a dope drop, the creativity made me proud to read lmao, lets see if everyone you dissed claps back......talk about a forum clog.
I loved the closer, nice way to finish a nice piece. anyway nice drop 8.5/10 |
Daz, im on the mac.. so i cannot write you back! UGH! Well, yeah.. that was a paper for school not a poem..
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ohh, shit srry fam.i didnt know..........it was long "makes sense now"...rofl..........i was wondering... email me, im out for the night though ill get back at you inthe morn'n... :thumbup: |
lmao this shit was hot as shit now i regret not jumpin in on this OM lol i would break it down bar by bar but lol thats way too many lines but this was deffinently hott i liked ur flow and some of the multis u used lol it was all around hott i think i would give it a 9/10 but u lucky u aint diss me lol j/k aight fam stay up and keep these OM comin so i have somethin to read when im bored
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thanx shakes.........last uppin(for the rest of tc........)
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i lied,.one more.................
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Lol......................2,999.posts.............. ...
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damn homie nice shit...i didnt get mentioned not like i care(i really do)....good shit man i loked this piece 8.5/10 please return the faovr in mine and straight aims open mic "the invincable"
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Gotta Respect the fact ...that u could possibly take on a shit load of beef
sumthin that i would do nice drop....ive seen some tight om's from u lately means u've elevated i say we squash the beef...get on the same boat and sink this bitch *Nuff Said* |
i gotta say diz was a nice piece here u came wit it on here punches were hittin hard, structure was on point, meta's were good, flow a lil off but hey it was solid thru-out not 2 say tha less keep writing cuz i c ur potential jus keep at it & u'll b there fa sho
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nice diss, gottem good 8/10 keep it up .....next time dont hesitate to dis sme
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