Willa (0-0) vs. Default (0-0)
 

what up ma! im checkin in for the last week of semi bad quality...holla holla

so what beats are you feeling out of the whole 10 of them lol

hey on that second beat page how about the
kanye beat

ma we can do any beat you want....i can flip something to anything....but i like feel it in the air alotttttttttttttttttt more then the kanye joint (the song is like a movie btw) ha just realized he stole my concept....fuck oh well its up to you....but if i win ima need that material for the whip it harder video.....haha jp.......so pick a beat n make it final.....cough::feel it in the air::cough::cough

that beat is seriously gay lol
any others you like?

what you dont like benie segil.....that song is niceeeeeeeeee uhh hold up let me look around

i cheated a lil but fuck it......

runnin' or when im gone on the first page or "oh" by obie on the second page.....any of those work for u?

jeesus your soooo complicated lol

idc my beat or runnin
im probably not going to show this tourneys gay already
shitty ass beats

pick a beat n ill roll with it...its up to you

i already told you last night
the kanye one lol

www.soundclick.com/jay286

song is the funeral

damn lol
this is due in like 2 2/3 hours
i have to leave in like 25 min
so imma write something
if i dont get done then oh well fuck it

http://www.soundclick.com/myfirstbattle
funeral sorry its rushed gtg

Breakdown

Default - Default came nice. Hook aint all that and definetly could have been better but it was decent. 1st verse picked up about half way through. 2nd verse was decent too but I wasn't feeling it too much really. Nice flow to it and a good creative concept though. 6.5/10

Willa - Concept was tight on this track too. I can it was rushed but still a good job. not sure if you droped 16 or you just wanted to do something special and put a delayed hook in there but I was feeling your hook and verse a lil more then jays. your flow was a bit better even though. She had a lot more personal shit and you can relate more to it. 7.5/10

V/ Willa

Good job both of you for dropping...next week you can pick your own beats so you wont have to go through this shit. pc

Alright. Dunno if I can vote.....But ima do it ne ways. Both had nice quality, nice content, beat sux but hell....what are u gonna do. I would go basicly on delivery,and flow here. Default gets this mainly because Willa's bar's were almost all recorded one at a time.....and there's no problem with that, but u can notice it and it kinda fux up your flow. Just on an overall basis I go with Default, but I wasn't feelin the effects at the start of your shit. Woulda jus been better witta constant Doub in my opinion.

Vote - Default. ;) Latta

aiight this is my vote

aiight. i like this beat. the flow is nice on this joint, im feelin it, the quality is decent. Lyrics is pretty good and good concept. the voice is pretty good. Im likin the mic pressence. Good intro in the middle LOL @ u makin the gun noises HAHA. 2nd verse meh the flow wasnt as good. damn im likin the ending the concept is fire. cool tracc yo. i like this

7.6/10

Willa:

damn nice Flow im likin the flow better then Jay's...the mic pressence is good. the quality is worse then default. umm. Did you just stop rapping all of a sudden? LOL. meh. you would of had this if you would of continued rapping. but the chorus was blah and you just stopped. but the flow and multi's were there in the first verse. i liked this

7.2/10

vote: default.

Honest vote, im cool with both. so this is what i honestly fel

Holla

iight

Jay/Default - I ono the flows sounds forced a bit at first but you settled in lyrics pretty basic.. not feeling this hook... concept of the song is cool especially the end... but the talkin kinda ruins it for me...

Willa - Lyrics are a little loud but clear and can hear your punch ins plain as day lol... not a bad thing just something i can notice.. Just really not feeling this.

Overall i think Default made a better track so

Vote - Default

props j............

http://community.rapverse.com/showp...69&postcount=20

Default
i liked the way u played with the sounds in the background
lol..yo man u want me 2 tell u where 2 find some gun samples
ya lyrics were kinda basic..but u moved em around the track right
all ya tracks kinda sound the same tho..gotta change that
but u had a nice track here yo..

Willa
ya voice was over rideing the beat..u should turn ya vocals down a couple db'z
ya lyrix were kinda like blah..u can tell u didnt really have time 2 work with this
but u came pretty nice for someone with no time..work on pronouncin ya words
better..i have that problem from time 2 time 2..but this battle was kinda 1 sided

v/Default

Default wins 3-1

Default: 1-0
Willa: 0-1