Black Siin vs Unholy wun
 

Check In - Tuesday
10lines
Verses - Due Wednesday
Vote - Friday.

Check.

WTF???? who is this guy.....but yeah check i guess.....sorry ive been in NY all weekend and shit......pc

yo man dont forget to spit your verse i would hate to win by a Disqualification man

u Both are Dq'ed allread those are Deadlines UP THEIR!!!!!^^^^

ther verses are due weds... IDIOT... IT is weds today... wow... just die

LOL - sorry but he is right .....

who the fuck you think you is deadly....next time think before you run your mouf

Wow im glad i notcied this i Forgot.

good thing i pmed you about it........

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Odd b/c u didnt maybe ur Blak

why yes i am.....that is why i said that i pmed you

Why do u have 2 sn's b/c ur record sucks on this one.

no because i let my cusing use this name and made the other one.......now my cousin dont use it anymore so i just use blak mostly but flash once in awhile...

do you got aim or aol or yahoo cause i dont feel like going back and forth about this on here???

No.

iight well are you going to spit soon??? cause ima prolly start keyin my shit up now

well im uppin for unholys verse and i will spit wunc i see you have started or whatever

Well im busy with other things ill do somin later.

yo you might wanna get back on causae you only got 2 hours left til your deadline and i already told you that i dont want to win because of you not showing.....

but fuck it here is my verse

Unholy thinks he thy poet everytime he thinks he feels Perplexionp...
His boyfriend fucks his mind so much hes going in no direction...
Made a thread "Back Stage" about being Poetry Corner Mod...
u was denied but could mod Rhetorical Insights now he think he a god...
You the Unholy Wun...deffinition is not holy the wicked one is gunna run...
Cause i sit here and listen to "Kayne West" as he singing Jesus "Walks" son...
This guy seen me merk Accomplishment now your scared of battling...
You ran from this snake before the attack when you hurd my rattle...
You tryed being in the war but you got Ristricted as a spy in iraq...
You got caught and now a POW everyday gettin fucked in your crack...

blahh not my best but fuck it

This is Insane How is ~LT~ Terrosisin the Game..
Did u Pop a Membrain well feel my Words Bring Pain..
Guess Who?Well Not You cause ur Def Not a Vet..
Ur Jet-Set to SuckyVille u can beat me?Wanna bet..
Ur Crew is Crazy Facin the Best and Only Dark Knights..
My Words will Haunt u Have u afraid to Turn off Lights..
Hot Line-Up maybe u can win if u put ur Heads Together..
Wether u go as 1 or Seperate ull Beat me....NEVER..
Let me rap-It-Up Like u were Another BET Comercial..
Well this Win for me Shows u bein a Vet So Contriverisal..

Made a thread "Back Stage" about being Poetry Corner Mod...
u was denied but could mod Rhetorical Insights now he think he a god...


I Love Fake Personals.

yeah you didn't merk me either you pm'd a buncha fags to vote for you...

done..

black :

Unholy thinks he thy poet everytime he thinks he feels Perplexionp...
His boyfriend fucks his mind so much hes going in no direction...
^^ str8 opener decent personal 6/10
Made a thread "Back Stage" about being Poetry Corner Mod...
u was denied but could mod Rhetorical Insights now he think he a god...
^^wasnt feelin this that much 5/10
You the Unholy Wun...deffinition is not holy the wicked one is gunna run...
Cause i sit here and listen to "Kayne West" as he singing Jesus "Walks" son...
^^bad punch wasnt hott 3/10
This guy seen me merk Accomplishment now your scared of battling...
You ran from this snake before the attack when you hurd my rattle...
^^hott sshyt nice punch 6/10
You tryed being in the war but you got Ristricted as a spy in iraq...
You got caught and now a POW everyday gettin fucked in your crack...
^^hott shyt funny ass personal your best line 9/10

overall: 29/50 (58%)

unholy wun:

This is Insane How is ~LT~ Terrosisin the Game..
Did u Pop a Membrain well feel my Words Bring Pain..
^^nice multies and punch decent opener 6/10
Guess Who?Well Not You cause ur Def Not a Vet..
Ur Jet-Set to SuckyVille u can beat me?Wanna bet..
^^more good multies .suckyville??? lol 6/10
Ur Crew is Crazy Facin the Best and Only Dark Knights..
My Words will Haunt u Have u afraid to Turn off Lights..
^^str8 bar not too complex 5/10
Hot Line-Up maybe u can win if u put ur Heads Together..
Wether u go as 1 or Seperate ull Beat me....NEVER..
^^str8 bar again still not too hott 6/10
Let me rap-It-Up Like u were Another BET Comercial..
Well this Win for me Shows u bein a Vet So Contriverisal..
^^hott finisher good shyt decent closer your best bar 8/10

overall: 31/50 (62%)

good verses from both of you but i think unholy edged this one out with his multies...they just made his verse have more impact close battle

vote : unholy wun

~!1!~

umm no its not a fake person you retard.....strobe said no and let you be the mod for RI......so fuck off

and as for you accomplishment.....no i didnt pm anyone......they came and voted cause they saw you

I actually think that Blak had this i mean it was a tight battle but on the whole Blak won it on the following.

Creativity: I like the way he used links i think that wont ever get played as long as its fresh links and it works well which it did here.

Wordplay: Not that Uns was bad but Blak was just more on his game on this occasion.

Structure: Un had a good structure and kept it even but looked a lil too short and basic.

Punches: Good hard hittin punches won it here but only just for Blak on his game

V/Blak Siinz

upppin......#1

Edited.

Unholy thinks he thy poet everytime he thinks he feels Perplexionp...
His boyfriend fucks his mind so much hes going in no direction...

^^ ??..difficult to comprehend..reword it...sounds like a diss tho

Made a thread "Back Stage" about being Poetry Corner Mod...
u was denied but could mod Rhetorical Insights now he think he a god...

^^ good personals...but, your flow is choppy...reword it

You the Unholy Wun...deffinition is not holy the wicked one is gunna run...
Cause i sit here and listen to "Kayne West" as he singing Jesus "Walks" son...


^^ aiight...decent
You tryed being in the war but you got Ristricted as a spy in iraq...
You got caught and now a POW everyday gettin fucked in your crack...

^^ BLAH...not feelin the continual use of gay humor

This is Insane How is ~LT~ Terrosisin the Game..
Did u Pop a Membrain well feel my Words Bring Pain..
Guess Who?Well Not You cause ur Def Not a Vet..
Ur Jet-Set to SuckyVille u can beat me?Wanna bet..

^...simple, but the last line was a good punch and beat anything in his first 4 lines

Hot Line-Up maybe u can win if u put ur Heads Together..
Wether u go as 1 or Seperate ull Beat me....NEVER..
Let me rap-It-Up Like u were Another BET Comercial..
Well this Win for me Shows u bein a Vet So Contriverisal..

^^^ decent

Vote: Unholy...punches actually landed


peace

uppin.....2-1 you man

This battle actually sucked.....

I was expecting so much more from both of you cause all I hear is about how good you two are and I was disappointed. Black Siinz didn't have any good punches. None of his lines were clever in the slightest and his flow was way off due to stretched lines here and there.......Unholy wun wasn't too much better. He also lacked punches and hit wit was not apparent in this one. His flow was better than Black's because his lines were short and to the point, much easier to flow with. That is the only reason he won this battle.....

Vote - Unholy wun........you both have a lot of elevating to do

Ight 3-1 i think it should be KO b/c Dog is D/R and if it goes 4-1 it should def be KO.

umm there is no kos retard and how is mad dog a dr????? explain that to me

I actually think that Blak had this i mean it was a tight battle but on the whole Blak won it on the following.

Creativity: I like the way he used links i think that wont ever get played as long as its fresh links and it works well which it did here.

Wordplay: Not that Uns was bad but Blak was just more on his game on this occasion.

Structure: Un had a good structure and kept it even but looked a lil too short and basic.

Punches: Good hard hittin punches won it here but only just for Blak on his game

V/Blak Siinz


Didnt say anything for me and Had no idea wat he was talkin bout for ur verse.

everyone has a different opnion on punches and what they think is hard or not.......so shut your mouth.....and you will see my real verse when we crew battle you and king solo and them next week or the week after......so yeah STFU

Lol im shakin in my Boots...Do u evan have any Topical Poeple?

yeah i will topical you becuase im talking to deadly right now and he asked me so yeah ill topical you.......but i would much rather text someone.....but we will decide that wunc erywon signs up in my crew

Madd dog came from no where i`m suspecting that a DICKRIDE ALSO......

then delete it man i dont care......just close the battle i just want to get this over with so i can start the league championship battles

Done

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Closed.

Re-Opened............but yo i only did this so that i can get feedback and see what peeps didnt like about my shit........but yo why did you change your sig unholy.....that fucks up all the personals!!!!!!!stupid fuck