50hater_killer vs CompleX
 

Battle Rules:

6 - 8 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No Dickriderz

Topical

topic ur the president and u just been shot at

emotion
flow
imagry
vocab
structure
opener-closure

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 01-24-05 at 04:23 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

CompleX has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-21-05 04:26 PM.

50hater_killer has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-21-05 05:24 PM.

chek diz..........

Nigga wanna kill me cuz i cruz in the Air forc one
Tryin to do good yet punks wanna git me wit they gun
They tryin to make me done ; straight put one in me
all i did was succsed; an haterz wanna turn me into 2005 president kennedy*
Niggaz i don't even know tryin to but a end to me
so many enimes hell is all the day seems to bring
im here for the people so why they tryin to noc out they king**
i beginin 2 think niggaz can't be happy 4 dae fellow human being

* kennedy was assasinated
** look at dae name of 50haterz crew

These bullets whizzing by my head has me wondering,
what cruel man would want me in my early bed?
Walkin throw the streets and waving at my men,
has me clamping on to my own life as it gets dim,
I called out this fight back in 01
witch my assains think that I have been done,
so as I cling onto my polticial life,
I can not bare but try to grasp onto my wife.

ok upppppppppin for some votes peace. ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

upppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppin dis bat!

uppin diz folkz ..........
will return fav...........

Voted For: CompleX

i think complex took this battle. it was too short for a topical tho. kinda hard to really build a mood but i liked complex's spit better n it had better vocab n was alittle more thoroug. not much to vote on tho
holla at me

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...........................upppin dis shit once again!

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Voted For: 50hater_killer

iono....jus somethin boot dis verse dat i like more

:laugh2: what DA fuc is dis bull shit dat don't explain notin

ya vote should git Dqed but i leave it 2 50hater_killer :nono:

uppin,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, whwn i git nough post will return favor ..............
but vote right not da stupid shit dope boi 210 did

my bad i didnt explain enuff...i jus thought that 50's was deeper...i vibed wit it better than complx's

This was feedback posted for 50hater_killer
 

Checkin tha polls....50 took this in my opinion. cause complex had stretched lines. and complex, ur weak. how many times u gunna change ur name(he goes to tha same school as me)...and 50's made more since...complex, ur verse was incrediblyyyyyyy stretched.....and 50 stuck to tha topic better...

Voted For: CompleX

i give complex dis vote he had betta rhyming n flow also betta punches...i didnt rely get wut u were tryin 2 50hater my vote goes 2 comples return da favor iight peace hit my links

..........................uppin dis shit up in here.

Voted For: 50hater_killer

Complex:
not bad verse nice creativty and metas...alright stucture and vocab but you lacked just hitting with personals...it was more of a self glorified battle verse for you...i jsut wasent really feeling that try and diss him more..and try not to talk about guns and the president line was dumb jsut wasent feeling that at all...no hate

50hater_killer
not bad verse kinda lacked creativty but the metas were ight nothing to great the vocab was weak i just thought you used more personals to diss him thats pretty much the only reason you got this bassicly everything else was a tie n shit but you used better personls good job..pz

opener: 50
clsoer: comp
metas: 50
punches: none
stucutre: comp
flow: tie
personals: 50
win/ 50hater_killer

^THA ONLY EXPLAINED VOTE IN HERE..i'd get all these unexplained votes dq'd if i were u...

A fuck u DARK ASS BITCH

...................uppin dis.......................

Voted For: CompleX

not bad from you cats. heres the breakdown:

50hater: Open was notworth posting. I really dont wanna sound nasty but it HAS to Rhyme if its the open and close to get the full effect. Plus it wasnt reallymuch of a punch at all. It needs to DISS the other guy and that never. Close similar story, it rhymed at least but i think you need to come up with a DISS. Ya flow was cool, structure ok- no played or stretched lines but could have had more in some of it. Overall this is the worst verse i seen you do bro. Some work needs done man, you can do better, you have.

CompleX: Your verse was ok. The punchews were a little basic and didnt hit very hard but he didnt even try it seems like soyou took this hands down. Open was ok, dont see how it disses the other guy tho. Close was weak. Other than that, there was a hint of a metaphor and only a hint of a diss. bu you took it due to his complete lack of anything


Listen peeps. I dont mean to be shitty at you both but i think a golden rule of text battling is that you have to direct your verse at your oppenant with some disses and nasty words and shit like that. You prob both elevated a bit sionce this battle so stay up but you gotta take my advice and you'll do well

Voted For: CompleX

diz was ight but not ur best i can tell but:
opena: complex
flow: complex
originality: complex
vocab: complex
so my vote goes 2 complex

thankz 4 votin............. upppin 4 5 will return fav soon as git nough votez
keep votin peoplez

Voted For: CompleX

okay complex has the flow emotion structure and the opener closer
now 50 hater only has the vocab i sort of didnt get it but they both were good but i liked complex better so my vote is for complex