OneStepBeyond vs mR iKiLL.
Battle Rules:
15-20 Lines No Gay Shit. Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 05-28-06 at 11:34 PM Must drop verse in 1440 minutes after check in. |
mR iKiLL. has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-28-06 11:05 PM.
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When it come to this shit rap shit i far from sweet
My rhymes hard, bite my barz, you'll loose all ya teeth Im the future in this bitch ... You the one left behind Im pm'd everyone and told em i beat you ... Im One Step Beyond Man fuck text im fine ... But when that Nine Thing click I'll have you lookin up from the floor like a Spike Lee Flick Bitch .. Yo girl aint tell you? ... Bout how i had her singin? And bout how i call her 'navy' .. Cuz i filled her up with SeaMen? Nigga im a demon ... Plus i say wit my gun too Im sick, i spit AIDS ... 'Fuck Wit me' if you want to OneStep you're not vet ... Im bout to defeat this rookie It get my dick hard when i realize im bout to eat this pussy Alot people idolize my ways, cuz they learned that violence pays So with no remorse, OneStep will get took like my toddler days It's far from rage ... Im just an emcee with a mad temper But i crack faces like im beatin on some glass dentures Im done fuck it,who cares who won this shit Just remeber my name 'iKill" ... i Run this bitch |
OneStepBeyond has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-28-06 11:08 PM.
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Beat you once so I'll beast you cunt... Drop your verse,
But before it hits... The "No Gay Shit" rule will stop it first, Claim you aren't who I say... Frontin' as fuck though, "I'm not Sik Wit It!" Well tell us somethin' we don't know! Pull your fuckin' skirt up... Think you clappin' shit? You tryna get a W... But 'u' couldn't even get 'half of it,' This kid is broke and you can tell by first impressions, So why the fuck would I rag on you when that's all you're dressed in, Think you're some gangster? Wearin' colors and hurtin' dudes? The only signs you throw up usually say will work for food, You ain't goin' nowhere, hope you ain't a dream believer, Miss Kill? Yeah... I couldn't really see it either, You're ridin' a bike uphill, ain't easy is it, So why just drop my verse when I can beat you with it? PUN INTENDED! But let's get ready for you're old wordplay, Want me to respect you? I only respect DIRT on Earth Day, You said text battlin' is killin' time? Sure, it works, But shit... I said "It's killin' time" before this verse. |
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Uhhhh. vote for me. I'll cut taxes................
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Ok, jsut vote and stuff. Jesus....................
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Okay. What the fuck, man? No mother fucking votes.
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Voted For: OneStepBeyond
damn... hot battle... i'm goin w/ onestep, only cuz of the personals... sick wordplay from both of u, especially the glass denture line from ikill, and the first line from onestep... iight, good luck, keep battlin, 1... |
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Voted For: mR iKiLL.
yeah u ran this one battle here... ya had more hard hitting punches...i liked ur word plays and flow was constant all thru....your concepts were much more clare to me....and anyhow i liked the attitude u had on this verse... the only thing wrong with ur verse was the personal on his name...that was kinna the weakest...but u still get my vote for gettin more plus n stuff on mu point of view... holla at mine or this is getting off! :thumbup: |
Voted For: OneStepBeyond
OneStepBeyond Beat you once so I'll beast you cunt... Drop your verse, But before it hits... The "No Gay Shit" rule will stop it first, Funny because it was his rule.. 7/10 Claim you aren't who I say... Frontin' as fuck though, "I'm not Sik Wit It!" Well tell us somethin' we don't know! Dope line.. I dig it.. 7/10 Pull your fuckin' skirt up... Think you clappin' shit? You tryna get a W... But 'u' couldn't even get 'half of it,' Meh... 6/10 This kid is broke and you can tell by first impressions, So why the fuck would I rag on you when that's all you're dressed in, Hahaha, I like it.. 8/10 Think you're some gangster? Wearin' colors and hurtin' dudes? The only signs you throw up usually say will work for food, Pwned... 8/10 You ain't goin' nowhere, hope you ain't a dream believer, Miss Kill? Yeah... I couldn't really see it either, Nice.. 7/10 You're ridin' a bike uphill, ain't easy is it, So why just drop my verse when I can beat you with it? Meh.. 5/10 PUN INTENDED! But let's get ready for you're old wordplay, Want me to respect you? I only respect DIRT on Earth Day, Dope.. 8/10 You said text battlin' is killin' time? Sure, it works, But shit... I said "It's killin' time" before this verse. Blah.. 5/10 Total: 61/90 = 68% mR iKiLL. When it come to this shit rap shit i far from sweet My rhymes hard, bite my barz, you'll loose all ya teeth Self glory is whack.. 4/10 Im the future in this bitch ... You the one left behind Im pm'd everyone and told em i beat you ... Im One Step Beyond Whack.. 3/10 Man fuck text im fine ... But when that Nine Thing click I'll have you lookin up from the floor like a Spike Lee Flick Honestly?.. 3/10 Bitch.. Yo girl aint tell you? ... Bout how i had her singin? And bout how i call her 'navy' .. Cuz i filled her up with SeaMen? Dumbest/oldest fuckin' wordplay I've ever seen again.. 4/10 Nigga im a demon ... Plus i say wit my gun too Im sick, i spit AIDS ... 'Fuck Wit me' if you want to Wow.. 0/10 OneStep you're not vet ... Im bout to defeat this rookie It get my dick hard when i realize im bout to eat this pussy Whack.. 1/10 Alot people idolize my ways, cuz they learned that violence pays So with no remorse, OneStep will get took like my toddler days Not bad.. 6/10 It's far from rage ... Im just an emcee with a mad temper But i crack faces like im beatin on some glass dentures Nah.. 3/10 Im done fuck it,who cares who won this shit Just remeber my name 'iKill" ... i Run this bitch Weakest way to end a battle.. 0/10 Total: 24/90 = 27% Winner: OneStepBeyond This was a full out slaughter by OneStepBeyond. Took this hands down.. |
Voted For: OneStepBeyond
Yeah Kirk thi sone. I'm too tired to explain but he was just better. Church. |
Voted For: OneStepBeyond
Easy win for OSB. Ms iKiLL was whack as hell your punches were retarded and what were you thinking with "It get my dick hard when i realize im bout to eat this pussy" ^^^That was horribly gay go get yourself a gay pride shirt for that line {According to the "No gay shit" rule that should be a DQ}... You left out words in some places like "OneStep you're not vet" Add an a make it sound decent at least. And you talked about havin sex with his girl when most likely your still a virgin. Elevate OSB you didnt come super hard but it was enough to KO him at least your verse wasnt gay. Few good punches like half a W and the will work for food made me laugh. Congrats V/ OSB |
Took one step and Kanye West yelled "JESUS WALKS!"
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This was feedback posted for mR iKiLL.
you are self idolizing too much try to insult the other guy more and try to say original things
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Voted For: mR iKiLL.
i liked mr Ikill's verse better. Dude really came harder. good battle by both sides tho. Appreciate the efforts. Cool shit overall mayneeeeeee. good hitting punches. keep it up homie. |
Voted For: OneStepBeyond
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