Freestyle (Been gon for a min, buh im bac)
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2133621
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2133616 juss a lil freestyle i threw together, been gone for a minute wit the audio buh im bac beat= made by me production/mixed= by me im actually lookin for a collab on this beat, so if you down, holla at me http://www.rideinconline.com/jamroo...&mode=song_hifi |
ill beat.......had some real sick punches........liked ya flow was pretty nice over all
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=189446 hit me wit some feed |
thanks son good lookin,..................uppin.................... ........................................
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ur beat makin is gettin betta homie........as is your quality...a free? how comes u got adlibs etc lol..lyrically its nice some nice lil witty line, u got a swagger about yo flow, which is dope...ur flow is on beat flawlessly, u gettin nce on the mic...ohhh its nice when the beat cuts 4 a sec n u rhyme acapella n kik bak in..shit was dope n worth a dload..im fellin dis beat da more i listen..ma gun smoke so much ud think it got cancer lmao...nice
:thumbup: yo RTF on ma battle wid Mad Dog link in sig..peace fam |
good lookin son, thanks for the feedback, i got u ...................uppin yall
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is hard to imagine this was a free has adlibs..lol but beat is aight...missin some strings here and there...
first time am hearin yo voice u sound yung, punches was pretty good......adlibs could be done betta but u kinda sound like that kid wus his name i forgat it now..lol overall ok track |
it wasnt a freestyle, freestyle, buh it was verses i had juss put together off the top and shit..........good lookin though, ........................uppin
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Beat is nice enjoying it lyrics were pretty good too
voice overs should be taken out ;) not considered a freestyle maybe a prewritten nice quality flows good too |
ite ite, good lookin............................uppin
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lyrics are dope. beat is doper...what beat is that? but, ad libs werent all that, which made yo verse sound kinda off...and u sound kinda low in volume. fix that next time. but voicing is coo...i like it!
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thanks man, thats actually a beat i made..................uppin
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Uppin..............
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if u did produce this beat by urself this is pretty dam nyce u gonna have to get at me with one sumtime lol.. flow is on beat. sum parts u struggle but u got a good voice just needs to be developed . lol my fav line was tha guns are ready to dump like theyre constipaded... i like how u end it too. good shyt famz peep my shyts sumtime homey...
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ite son thanks .............................Uppin................ .............
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yo, rtf on truth hurts if u can bruh... if not thats straight... ima peep ur next drop too tho cuz this was nyce
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Your rideinconline link didnt work
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watchu mean it dont work, did u click on da link???
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http://rideinconline.com/bands/436/ thats my page, juss scroll all the way down to "Freestyle (Im Bac)
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The beat is pretty good, i like it,ahaha, some funny lines in this track...this is pretty good overall, i can hear some pops,quality wise, but it has a nice upbeat sound, likin the lyrics too, good drop,keep it up.1
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thanks, good lookin...............uppin...................
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